VOL II bedtime FF : Desire *Complete* - Page 5

Originally posted by: sum2005

👏 woowwww anather ff billu.

superfast express shiv kapoor and gauri too ...... relly poor gauri what had she done see shiv wants her servies for 4 days day and night and he wants to pay her.....sshhttt gauri one wrong step with this idiot made u a hooker in the eyes of shiv.

kat nice one 😳

Yeah another one!!😆😆

Originally posted by: prab_rockinn

way to go rani sahibaa.....

Jus keep them comin....
what a title and the story is jus grt!!!!!!!
👏

Shiv is such a naughty brat!!!!! 😉 😳

Well u have to thank ricky and Abhi for the title i was clueless until they help me come up with it! 👏

Cheers!!

Originally posted by: nihita

great ff kat cont soon

kat u know there is no need to thank me and now better dont....understood

you know you were there for help when i needed you

bye

take care

love

nihita😛

Awee cheers nihita!😉

Originally posted by: ash9

k stop giving me heart attacks
first RD updated her FF n nw u..... wrote a FF where gauri is 😲 😲 😲

he thought she was wht 😲

wht a start........u hv only 3 more parts
better make them fall in love
😛
thanx for the wk end FF... really need 1.... nothing to do during wk ends

Ash yes he thought Gauri was a 😲😲😲...as u put it!!😆😆

Kat!

Originally posted by: Jenna Dutt

wow, you are on the roll here now eh!!!! great concept Kat and how dare did Shiv think of our little Miss Hard worker to be a c***Girl 😡, looking forward to the next parts.
Cheers,

Well she never said who she was and he didn't ask!😳

Kat

Originally posted by: Andekhi

😆 😆 Sorry, I found it funny, though I am still mad at Shiv. I doubt her face went "I am a ******" 😆 He has to be drunk - that should explain it, because in reality it's easy to differentiate between one who is, and one who isn't. Maybe he doesn't know how to differentiate 😆 Oh well, I am so glad you started another FF. Do continue it soon please

I have a felling he was not drunk...😆 differentiate?? lets see what unfolds!!😳

Originally posted by: Himu

KAT!!!
where iz da update.....kitni shopping karte ho....u gona get batman dun 😆 dnt spend too much

Batman paying!! 😉...shopping over now!! part 2 posted!!😳

Originally posted by: lil hearts

this is too good 👏 👏 👏
please do it continue soon.
i'll be looking forward to the other 4 partss

Awwee thank you so much!!😳

Originally posted by: *guesswho*

holy crap! hahaha he thought she was a hooker! And gauri went along with it! wow sillies! Great story 👏

cheers guessy!!😳

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Kat