Wajah...

Hello Everyone,

After my last attempt at short story - Promise of the Eclipse, Iffat Ji (LadyZaib), gave me a concept that she wanted me to write on...

Kind of her to leave the option to me as to how I wanted to present it, and here I am ... presenting it in a few lines as opposed to my intial thought of attempting yet another short story...which would allow me to collate my thoughts in a precise and in a way that comes more easily to me ... onto a single canvas

Here is a thought preview...that struck me as soon as I read the concept Iffat ji sent me... and that I intend to continue on...

"Wajah hone ka ehsaas zaroori hai... wajah nahin..."...

Continuing on the thougt preview I had shared earlier , here is the entire thought penned...

Wajah

Vishawaas ke
Dhaage mein
Bandhe...
Wajah kai...

Baandhe
Dilon ko
Vishwaas...
Wajah nahin...

Choote jab
Daaman
Vishwaas ka
Nazar aaye
Wajah kai...
Ke..
Vishwaas ki
Buniyaad hai
Ehsaas
Anjaane un..
Wajahon ke
Hone ki..

Vishwaas ho jahaan
Wajahon ki
Gunjaaish nahin
Wahaan...Ke
Ujaale ho jahaan
Rehti nahin
Andheron ki
Gunjaaish wahaan...

Mayoosi se
Ghire..jab
Pooche ye..
Mann...
Bebasi ki ..
Wajah koi...

Sunai deti
Gehraaiyon se...
Awaaz Khudaai ki...
Wajah hone ka
Ehsaas zaroori hai
Wajah Nahin...

- Sareeta

Iffat... I hope I could manage to do justice to your concept...but intriguing as it is... it was hard for me to not think and pen thoughts about it...

Thank you !

PS - Kindly note , all the stories and poems penned are copyrighted are included in my collection to be published in the immediate future.

Originally posted by: Rock_Star

dii continue soon can't wait to read it

Awww, sure will do... Thanks Roop! Currently working on another one for a friend... who requested something and will then wrap this up too!

Kindly bear with me! 😊

Originally posted by: metoubearscrazy

oh sareeta di...ofcourse we want u to continue with it 🤗 🤗 Awwww. .... thank you! *hugs* that one line you have written conveys so very much to the reader that its just toooooooooo great 😳 Merci... thatz so sweet... yeah but honestly... I usually start off with one line that is the essence and then build around it...

"Wajah hone ka ehsaas zaroori hai... wajah nahin..."

kya line hai...the depth in it is just too great 👏 👏 👏 Thank you!

plz do continue and that too soon 😳 thanku for giving us such lovely stories to read 🤗 Its a pleasure to share my thoughts too here Metou! I need to thank the members here ... and I shall always be thank ful to them!

luv metoubearscrazy 😊

Originally posted by: lil_desi_goddes

dii.. i am ready for this one as well.. go for it..!!

the preview line blew me away..!!


👏

*bows to applause* Thank you Aakriti.

The preview line was what struck as soon as I read the concept that Iffat Ji sent to me and I thought I will use that as the preview! 😊

Originally posted by: LadyZaib

👏 awesome, Bless my soul, thank you so much ok i am translating this since u know my hindi is a bit daal ki katchi, do u need a reason feel anything, is that correct? Pardon me, but no thatz not the translation.... I could explain that here... but it will give away the story... so if you may ... can I jus finish the story... and then it would be clear?

ok sareeta man! i cannot wait for this, thanks i am sure you will do justice to my concept, i also have a feelin once it is over, we might end up understanding gauri.. Oh bless my soul, you have really very high expectations! Let me allow my thoughts to flow... on the concept!

thanks huni, much appreciated, its only a concept, the canvas i am sure will be filled with pure talent, thanks for accepting this challenge. Aww, you are very kind!

mwaaaaaaaaaaah xxxx