New Short FF: 'Ajnabee' Part 5, pg.21 - Page 15

reserved 😳

okay finally got time to reply neetu di...sorry for being late

it was soooooooooo good.i loved every word of it. so much to take in this part...met..loved eachother...seprated...and hope they are going to meet soon😉. di you do wonders with words...just toooooo good👏👏👏...only problem is u take too much time

next time plz update soon

love ya

Asever😳

Amneet😉

Originally posted by: a.i.c

once again...excellent work!

So you venture in these lands as well? Brave soul... 😳😆 Thank you for the kind words!

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: Rock_Star

dii just amazing part 👏 👏
just loved the shayari you wrote...its really good
the description was just excellent...no criticism at all
continue soon...don't take so long 😳

Rocker, the "shayari" as you call it, just was a random thing. I was exactly intending on it, but it just came. Glad you enjoyed. And criticism can be made girl, you're just too sweet. Don't worry, my danda doesn't go up for such things😉 Say what you feel... Thanks sweetie.

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: amneet89

reserved 😳 still?😆

okay finally got time to reply neetu di...sorry for being late no worries kiddo... I understand.

it was soooooooooo good. *coughs*😆i loved every word of it. now you're sure about that?😕😳 so much to take in this part yeah... its almost done, one more to go! phew......met wasn't that part one?😆..loved eachother really?...seprated yeah... ye toh hona hi tah😳...and hope they are going to meet soon😉 *slaps hand on forehead*... sochange. di you do wonders with words...just toooooo good👏👏👏 haha... words are words... the rest is up to the mind! but u humble me😳...only problem is u take too much timeI know... u just love me na😉

next time plz update soon *sighs* ok... will try and finish this coming week... actually, I think I will as I want this done before I begin the other one. I currently have four on the go! hai rabba... *slaps hand on forehead* (tanhayee... haqeeqat... ajnabee... shiddat... and untitled one not started yet!😕)

love ya mainu pata si!😃🤗

Cheers,

dc

Asever😳

Amneet😉

Originally posted by: abhilashasharma

oh.. so she is a singer... 😳 u seem doubtful... erm... will explain in the next part...interesting... hai na?😆nice update dc... thanks abhiso they are meeting again.... 😳 don't they always?😆😳

P.S: I notice that u have been inspired by Kat's creations... 😳 she has left an impression on u.. 😳 It would be a lie to say she hasn't... in a certain regard. I can never go through like she does, she's too good at that stuff... I do what I do. She's brilliant with what she does. I try my waters. The idea was something I had toyed earlier, just didn't have time to pen and wasn't quite sure of the details and then she asked me to write something like "Irony..." again and ta-da! She's been awesome. I wrote a part like this in "Khamoshiyon... " which got a great response. Thanks to everyone to reads and appreciates, I'm deeply humbled.

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: Catwoman

omg cheers for my ff!!🤗🤗🤗 hehe... cheers billo, japphi for ya too 🤗
👏 👏 👏 ..... *bows humbly*

Now tell me if this experiment was not worth it!! 😳 😳 Experiments are always worth it... despite the results, you benefit. Thanks for the encouragement.... Like the other FF irony of fate this will be another DC classic!! 👏 ... haha... "DC classic", that sounds too funny!😆😆

Simply mind blowing word for word!! 🤗🤗 thank u!... I tried...

Cheers,

dc

Billo 😳