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Posted: 18 years ago

#11

great story!!!loved it!!!pls continue soon

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afshaa

@afshaa!!!

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#12

hhey its so good and i luv their chemistry
its so cool
plzzzzzzzz keep updating and continue soon i am waiting

afshaa

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Roop

@Rock_Star

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#13

excellent part
so shiv is already falling for gauri 😳....can't wait to read the next part

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KAT

@Catwoman

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 18 years ago

#14

shiv is a goner....Gauri in one glance has stole everything!!.... 😳

Edited by Catwoman - 18 years ago

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JCluvs srk

@JCluvs srk

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 18 years ago

#15

luv at first sight....he just doesnt kno it yet....cant wait for mor.

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Priya_128

@Priya_128

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#16

hey...i just read both parts now...its reallly good...i love both ur shiv and gauri...pls do continue soon

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Yasmin

@Yazzi

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 18 years ago

#17

i just read the parts and it is totaly amazing 👏 👏 .Shiv already falling for gauri how cute 😳 but i don't blame him our gauri is truly beautiful and the way you introduced gauri was just totaly filmy but so WOW 😃 .I am looking forward to more part please do continue soon 😊

p.s i thought that hum bewafa..... was you second ff after when shiv loves, hope you haven't forgot about that 😊