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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: sakeena

Wow, i just read all ur updates, its a rilly good FF. ur a brilliant writer. please do continue soon! cant wait. 👏 👏
take care,

with regards,
|[>Deena|

Deena wlcome to KAA forum...

thank you so much ...

kat😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
Update on Friday ppl 😳 .....

Ipshita plan? 😕 😕
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Posted: 18 years ago
k nw wht did ippy do this time???

eating from the same plate 😆
tht was good1
sex manic back on action 😆

nw she think he is going to dump her???? r u sure thts going to wrk
her plans always flop..is this another 1 of them or is she going to cry at the end?? hey dnt make any1 cry..ok
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Posted: 18 years ago
that was great
wonder what there goin to do now
pls cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
OK been sooooooooo busy not had chance to write a thing seriously.... 😭 😭 😭 ....

This will be update on Wednesday...Promise

Kat 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
fine no problem..... but its the last delay allowed!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: prab_rockinn

fine no problem..... but its the last delay allowed!!!!!

Prabha😆😆😆...it raining will be writting😉

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Posted: 18 years ago

Part 6 Mission Complete



She stared at the mirror as she lipped of the lipstick as the tears ran down her face the operation was a success…She was now official dumped by Shiv Kapoor……..As she stared into the mirror at herself the night events all came flooding back………

"Gauri I wish you told me sooner about the party I had made special arrangement…" Yeah I bet you did!…

"It total sipped my mind …"

"Hai Jelbi when you gimme me that innocent smile the earth beneath my feet moves" She looked at him as he took hold of her hand.

"Ok Jaan for you we go for an hour and then we go to…" Feeling his strength pull her close to him her heart raced as she closed her eyes in his embrace. Why? Does he.???

"Shall we go!" hearing his husky voice in her ear she nodded under his spell and found his lips on her cheek……

******



"GAURI!" Seeing Maya waving Gauri lead Shiv over towards them.

"I thought you were not coming at all?" What are you wearing Maya that green is not your colour you look like the hulk?… Frog face looks like a frog.

"SHIV? " they turned to see Anupam holding Aasta hand coming towards them

OMG what they doing here? She thought hugging Anupam and Aasta

"Hi ya!" they all turned to see Ipshita take hold of Shiv arm pulling him close to her.

"Ipshita?" Gauri looked at Shiv as he removed her hand and stepped close to Gauri taking her hand.

"I am with Gauri now …"

"Yes Shiv you have said so many times….Gauri nice to meet you again" Oh boy! Deep breath I can do this!

"Ipshita!"

Everyone was dancing on the dance floor….

She looked at him as held her close to him...as the music surrounded them.....



Aa Nind Ka Sauda Karein, Ik Khwaab De, Ik Khwaab Le
Ik Khwaab Toh Aankhon Mein Hai, Ik Chaand Ke Takiye Talein
Kitane Dino Se Yeh Aasamaan Bhi Soya Nahi Hai, Isako Sula De
(bol Na Halke Halke, Bol Na Halke Halke
Honth Se Halke Halke, Bol Na Halke) - 2

Umarein Lagi Kehate Huve, Do Labj The Ik Baat Thi
Woh Ik Din Sau Saal Ka, Sau Saal Ki Woh Raat Thi
Kaisa Lage Jo Chup Chaap Dono, Ho Pal Pal Mein Puri Sadiyaan Bitaayein
Bol

Bol Na Halke Halke, Bol Na Halke Halke
Honth Se Halke Halke
O Dhaage Tod Laao Chaanadani Se Noor Ke
O Ghoonghat Hi Bana Lo Roshani Se Noor Ke
Sharm Aa Gayi Toh Aaghosh Mein Lo
Ho Saanson Se Ulajhi Rahein Meri Saansein
(bol Na Halke Halke, Bol Na Halke Halke
Honth Se Halke Halke, Bol Na Halke) - 2



She glanced at the her watch he gifted her and it was time to go…

"Shiv could you get me a drink please.."

"Sure Baby…give me a minute!"

She walked out side making sure he saw her walk out of the building.

She stared at Shanshank as he stood there waiting for her and walked over towards him. He looked at her smiling and saw Shiv coming towards her and nodded his head.

"Shanshank I …love you! I cant marry Shiv!" I do really love you

"Gauri I love you too!" he moved close and kissed her….Yuck what kind off …Get off me this was not part of the plan….. GET OFF ME!

As he let go of her and embrace they turned to see Shiv heartbroken as the drinks from his hand fell onto to ground.

"Gauri?" OK 1 2 3 Start

"Shiv uh I was …"

"Listen Shiv we are in love and no matter what you say Gauri is mine!…"

"YOU QUIET I WANT GAURI TO TELL ME!" Shiv looked at him angrily as he let go of Gauri as he started at him looking at her.

She looked at his face and angry eyes.

"I wanted to tell you but…"

"But what! For 4 months you …."

"Yeah for 4 months I have put up with you groping me not leaving me alone…I have never said I love you…in fact I love Shanhank… I want to marry him"

*SLAP* Shell shocked she looked at him as he walked away. Feeling her cheek burn in pain the tears ran down her face.

"Now were we…" She looked at Shanhank as he forced himself onto her.

"I'm better then Shiv in every way …Let me show you!" as he focused himself on her she closed her eyes tearfully pushing him away.

"Get off me!" She pushed him away but he was too strong and focused him self onto her.

"Shiv!" She whispered as she sobbed.

"HEY GET OFF HER!" Gauri stared at Anupam as he pulled Shanshank off her and looked at him angrily.

"Yeah you can have her as I don't want Shiv Kapoors seconds any way!" YOU B*****D! to think I liked you… Sobbing she felt Aasta take hold of her.

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As she looked at Anupam driving the car they were very silent.

"Lucky for you Shiv told us to get you safety home as he left…. I hope you're happy now…"

"Anupam?" Shiv told you get me??.. I feel like throwing up….she stared at her ring.

"What Gauri surprised?….You hurt him yet he only though of you….he loves you like crazy and you will never get anyone like Shiv ever again….Shanhank showed his true colours today…And you must be very happy now as your mission was a success!"

"Anupam!" Gauri looked at Aasta as she spoken to him through her eyes and he nodded in agreement.

The rest of the drive home was quite as she could only see Shiv's hurt face.



"Gauri!" She looked at Aasta

"Shiv asked us to give you this!" Opening her hand she saw the engagement ring and Watch set to his hear beat…….

Love Kat

Edited by Catwoman - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
ooooooo my god
tht was soo sad
tht end part
he gave her his heart watch 😆
i never knew shiv was tht emo n senti 😆
nw they cn cry together......

euk..shshank always act as a pig 🤢
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Posted: 18 years ago
ew...that shashank will never change 😆

that was soo sad,the last line awww

she has to win him back now

xxxxxxx

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