FF: PILLOWTALK..Complete *PG1 ALL* - Page 18

I finally managed to catch up with the parts! And, they are just perfect. Cat, this story is just so beautiful, the whole concept, and the parts are just so well written.

Somewhere I'm secretely hoping Gauri remains like this, and reaches london after the "marriage" date. The mandap is still set up, and Shiv-Ippy have "supposedly" just left. She is very down (remembering the past- their childhood scenes) and all of a sudden we have the hero (Shiv) coming out, and proposing to her. He will let her know that he always always loved her, and this was the reason the marriage would not take place w/o her!

OK. I know I got carried away. lol. But, I just couldn't help it. lol.

hey..

i just read ur ff completely. i postively loved it. the ease with which you have explained their relationship and how gauri gradually transcends into love is amazing.
👏 👏 👏

great work. do continue soon.

cheers a i will comment later on you lovely kind posts

kat 😳

Guariiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii 😡 😡 😡
that does it...why does she want to be mahaan peron by sacrificing her love...i hope shiv gets some inner feeling that he belongs to gauri and run to her 😳

Originally posted by: Iqbaladdict

Omg read part six but billo u need to edit the part 6 as it still says part 5, now I loved the update Shiv dying to see her and but Gauri killing herself over his love. she shud go or maybe he'll surprise ehr with a visit, oh god my mind wondering again, 😳 , what's it gonna b 😛

Rano thanks you.... Gauri has finaliy realized what Shiv means to her... and the next 2 parts are to come...😊

Billo

Originally posted by: lil_desi_goddes

haila.. dii..

Such a sacrificer gauri is.. i loved how she admits she loves shiv and cant see
him get married to someone else... awww.. i know shiv wont get married to
ipshita coz his heart will stop him from doing so...

please dii continue!!

👏

Thank you... now ur going to have to wait and to see what happens😳

Kat

Originally posted by: sum2005

kat,

what is this is shiv marrying gauri or ippi.
they two even confess their love but thinks they love their friendship....but deep down i think they both love each other.

billu next update tomm please.

Sum thats friendship for you.. as it contains a different type of love and this relationship is full of scarifice ...you know that😳

Kat

Originally posted by: Andekhi

I finally managed to catch up with the parts! And, they are just perfect. Cat, this story is just so beautiful, the whole concept, and the parts are just so well written.

Somewhere I'm secretely hoping Gauri remains like this, and reaches london after the "marriage" date. The mandap is still set up, and Shiv-Ippy have "supposedly" just left. She is very down (remembering the past- their childhood scenes) and all of a sudden we have the hero (Shiv) coming out, and proposing to her. He will let her know that he always always loved her, and this was the reason the marriage would not take place w/o her!

OK. I know I got carried away. lol. But, I just couldn't help it. lol.

Thank you so much sonali.... *blushing*

That very filmy wouldn't you say!!😆 😆

Kat

Originally posted by: apapap

hey..

i just read ur ff completely. i postively loved it. the ease with which you have explained their relationship and how gauri gradually transcends into love is amazing.
👏 👏 👏

great work. do continue soon.

Thank you...so much😳

Originally posted by: Rock_Star

Guariiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii 😡 😡 😡
that does it...why does she want to be mahaan peron by sacrificing her love...i hope shiv gets some inner feeling that he belongs to gauri and run to her 😳

star you're going to have to wiat sweetie!

kat