Promise...

Shattered dreams,
Wasted tears...

A mended heart,
Torn apart...

To belong,
The heart longs...

Promise of forever
Distant as ever...

-Sareeta

Jus a thought , that I penned random, and realized it was apt for Shiv; the man, who started off , believing in a dream, to see it shatter, time and again... a lost cause , he seems now..

Originally posted by: *Spandana*

aha..englipiece..thanku sareeta di..lovely..i like the ryming.. 👏 and really apt for shiv. 😳

amu~

Merci, my dearest, thank you! So glad you liked it!! You dont enjoy the hindi ones as much do you?! 😉

Originally posted by: sum2005

saru telugu me kuch aarz kigiye.....

Sumana, I have written in telugu albeit only a little. Its on my blog. Will PM you! 😊 But I guess, writing her ein telugu might not be well.. understood by many , yeah?! 😆

Originally posted by: sum2005

aantha brathi yena kala ya nigama no gauri nanu veedi pothudha .....hathavidi .....aura kaalikalam

kane.....na toliprema ippi nanu veedadule.....

potheponi lera.....gauri ledanukora.....

ippi najivetham anukunta.... 😆


shiv is going to sing this one for telugu fans.

😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 Wicked Summi!!! Totally!!!

Originally posted by: sum2005

is this wicked 😭

Oh not literally Summi, that was jus a phrase.. it was really cool... it was really very very good!!! I actually found it very humorous and also, very verbose...

Originally posted by: sareeta

Shattered dreams,
Wasted tears...

A mended heart,
Torn apart...

To belong,
The heart longs...

Promise of forever
Distant as ever...

-Sareeta

Jus a thought , that I penned random, and realized it was apt for Shiv; the man, who started off , believing in a dream, to see it shatter, time and again... a lost cause , he seems now..

The words you write, picture a reality,

Fate-torn, tested in fatility...

A man lost in reveries of wonder,

A voice lost in the howls of thunder...

Sareeta Di,

You leave me speechless!! *sighs*... If upar wala spent much time on my Mirchi... He certainly took his time on you as well.

I like the paradoxical presentation... It brings more depth into it all. Beautifully penned!👏👏

And a fan I was years ago, just came to find the destination of my "fanhood" not long ago...

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: desi chic

The words you write, picture a reality,

Fate-torn, tested in fatility...

A man lost in reveries of wonder,

A voice lost in the howls of thunder...

My My , Neetz! You are on a roll today! I saw your post Lost... really liked it!! AMazaing dahling!! I was speechless... wide mouthed... wondering .."Now where in the world did that come from... what has she been eating .. !! "

Sareeta Di,

You leave me speechless!! *sighs*... If upar wala spent much time on my Mirchi... He certainly took his time on you as well. Bless my soul, that is one compliment, I shall cherish! THank you , am flattered and also deeply humbled...! I jus guess I feel too much , a tad bit too sensitive and thatz where the lines come from I suppose, the emotion , as ppl call it!

I like the paradoxical presentation... It brings more depth into it all. Beautifully penned!👏👏 , Didnt really think abt it , while penning it down... but yeah now that you mention , yep... I see it too! Thank you sooooooo much! I jus saw it as more of a past and present thing... a retrospect thingie, I love that theme...

And a fan I was years ago, just came to find the destination of my "fanhood" not long ago... Ahem.... Neetz mohartama, I admit, I didnt understand bit... I am jus lost , I suddenly seem to feel so , oh well "unpad".. Who exactly or rather what are you referring to?

Cheers,

dc