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Posted: 18 years ago
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where is the updateeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee 😭

spandu~
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Meri Chandu Rani,

Mauhtarma... I don't even know where to start or what to say. I want to read your papers one day... even if they are having to do with school. Woman, you've got talent like anything!👏👏 Your style of writing has its own catch, a flow as uncertain yet fluid like a river... I like this plot. The idea of Gauri being portrayed as a self-centered woman, who has soft spots, but they appear to be hidden from herself. Haha!!! Maya and Palak Paneer are here to haunt her again eh?!😆😆 Bechari... And Shanky Doodle is the so-called Mr.Handsome Boss? Yaar tera chashma kahan gaya?!😳 Oops sorry... Hehe... Waise, Gauri is pro at lying... What a crucial trait in her position😕😆😆 Reminds me of a movie, but I can't put a finger on it right now... Anyhoo, you're blessed yaar! Now... Has this started sounding like a love letter yet? Ok, well just to let you know... I do love you, but I seem to love your creations more... *ahem*😆 jk 🤗

Chandu Re Chandu Re... Kabhi toh KAA par aah... behte hai hum intezaar kar raheeee... Tu joh aaye idhar post karna magar... Aur der na karna reeeee... (Sapney: Chanda Re)😆

Cheers,

dc

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Posted: 18 years ago
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answers done....abb update karo😛😳

spandu~

Edited by *Spandana* - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey

wow.. the last two parts were great! i love gauri's chacracter.. she is awesome at lying.. lol.. the good old made up boyfriends.. lol.. shashank is a hottie?? wat?? i def thought u were describing shiv.. exccept the blue eyes... i was like whoa! no shashank.. and he even asked her out? double wat?? thank god that stupid maya said the right thing atleast once..

yaha bhi aa gaye dono.. yes yes.. shiv is here.. ask him to be the boyfriend.. yes yes.. go gauri.. lol.. cant wait for the next aprt..

luv mansi

p.s. sry for not commenting earlier.. i got busy with stupid research paper.. urghh... which i shud be doing rite now... so buh bye..
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey Chandini, What a great comebak, U do amaze me with ur writing skills only just read whole of it and loved every bit.

Gauri is one determined and enthusiastic character and makes me feel good to see her differ from typical Ekta Character ie becharee Gauri. hehe 😆 😆, Gauri's sickeneing boyfriend is a schmuck for using her and maya and him do so deserve each other. 😉

Btw I read the comments u left on KMS aswell, and am much obliged for ur sweet words, I neva knew u read it. From KTM at the end I did gather u will be reading it so was sweet hearing from u regarding my penpushing. U r sweet. keep up with this wonderful FF and thanx for thi sbrill source of entertainment as Mr K seems too busy to consider us. 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: sum2005

chandu rani nice update......poor gauri ......so shashank is ceo ......so gauri is finding her fake lover and he must be shiv......quiet interesting.......

hehe 😆 ... u got it right... Shashank = CEO ...and Shiv = MIA (Missing in Action till now....😉)...

Originally posted by: Jenna Dutt

Maya oh maya, why can't she ever leave the poor girl alone....just loved the way gauri sticks it to her and way she just left the office.. 👏 brilliant update Chandu. Let me guess she has found her contract break-up b/f and it is Shiv, only he is the one who resembles the description. Keep up the wonderful job darling.

haha... a greek god...who else 🤔 ...😆 ...Yes, Maya is annoying but Gauri knows how to put her in her place...😆...and now she must be burning with jealousy...she thought she had Nitesh..and Gauri has the CEO after her...serves her right...😆

Originally posted by: JCluvs srk

yey shiv's entry is almost here.... 😃 ...so shahshank is the CEO....damn i really thought yay it wood be shiv...oh well..... 😉 cant wait till gauri n shiv actually meet.

It was a bit misleading huh... describing a handsome hunk and Shiv comes to mind...and then we see Shashank...😆😆...😉...but if Shashank is a handsome hunk...then we shouldn't even start to describe Shiv...right...😉

Originally posted by: Rock_Star

oh shashank is the ceo whole time i thought its goign to be shiv...anyways poor gauri she will have find a bf for her...and i think she made her choice who she is going to make...i think its going to be shiv😳
awesome part 👏 👏

~ Roop

Oh....btw is you name Roop? I love that name, when I was young I used to always name my barbies Roop and Noor.. love those two name...they are short yet seem so impactful... 😊 ... and yes, Shiv just made an entry let's see what Gauri thinks of him...😉

Originally posted by: srk1

heheh shiv is in..yaar first i tought that shiv will be the CEO, but no the hunk is tooo good for just a CEO..hope u get what i mean..
anyways cont soon..

Diya 😊

That is right he too sizzling to be a CEO...😆😉 ...he should be a firefighter...cuz being so hot he must have a lot of fires to put out... okay that was a really bad joke...but I couldn't resist...😳

Originally posted by: askap

hey amaing part 👏 .... well the patience paid off 😉 .... well i was wrong about the CEO being Shiv, but damn I like how you entered Shiv in this story, "Greek God" 😳

Continue Soon!!!

Ashi

You aren't the only one who thought Shiv was the CEO... it isn't our fault, hearing the description of a handsome hunk we all think...SHIV....😳

Originally posted by: *Spandana*

Oh miss chandu ji, what is this ending...u r taking phull advantage of our gender... 😆. if ekta leads r abbrevated as sacrifiers, chandu leads can be abbrevated as ....self-talkative. 😆

on the first update, ur '-' language was awesome 👏 😆

amu~

😆😆😆... you have hit the nail on the head... even I love the "-" thing...it is fun coming up with nicks for all the characters...hehe

Originally posted by: ash9

y did u stop here
i was waiting for his grand entrance.... 😆
u knw when gauri get up n spill her coffee mug all over him or sumthing 😆
continue asap.....by any chance cnt shiv be CEO?? 😊

Yup his grand entry...😳

😆😆😆...that would be hillirious and something that she would do too... 😆...

Originally posted by: prab_rockinn

great work chandini.... 👏 👏 👏
this shashank can't leave gauri even when he is his boss.....(haath dhoke peeche pada hai 😆 😆 )
there goes my imagination that Shiv was the dark suit guy.....
But this description is even more hot!!!!!
waitin for Shiv and Gauri's first encounter.....

You don't have to wait too long for their first conversation...😉 ... yes, Shashank definately peeche pad gaya hai...just like Maya and Palak...jsut adding to Gauri's self inflicted problems...😆 😉

Originally posted by: sareeta

Chandni....

Enjoying the FF to bits!!! 😆 Really looking forward to the next part!

Greek God... Ahem...!! 😉

What else di... if I described him any other way...everyone would say my description of him fell short to that of Shashank's and that I couldn't let happen now...😳

Originally posted by: rupi b

hey

Fantastic fanfic so far👍🏼 Gauri is so cute that handsome man better be our shiv lol im so excited that youre writing another fanfic, your last one was superb, when i saw your name next to a fanfic lol i got so excited 😳 anyways great job i cant wait to read more of gauris kooky story i love how you made her so strong not like the typical indian woman lol in kektas shows!

-Rupi 😃(plz update soon!)

One of the reasons I started writing the ff was so I could show a side to girls which is not all about sacrificing and being miserable in the name of love...sometimes it is okay to plan for your happiness....cuz if we don't care and love our ownselves why should others?...😆...right...hehehe ... Thank you 😃...too nice to say that...😳

Originally posted by: *guesswho*

ohh yes finally Mr. DReamy in the house...
eww you got our hopes us and let me believe the CEO was shiv...
shanky better keep his hands off her...
Maya & Nitesh are the fakest doo-doo heads ever 🤢
Enjoyed it immensely!! 😃

😆😆😆...love how you said..."ewwww he better keep his hands of her..." made me laugh...seemed like an instant reaction...well hopefully Shiv can come and help you see to it..that Shashank stays at a distance...😉

Originally posted by: maragathm

Oh great you are writing again. I hope Shiv is a simple guy, dont have to be a CEO, he can teach our Gauri that money isnt everything. 😆

He can teach her money isn't everything and few others things too right...😉 😳... as for him being a simple guy...well we are going to be seeing him through Gauri's eyes and well in Gauri's life nothing is simple...😆😆...

Originally posted by: Numera*

omg yay!! shiv is here to rescue the damsel in distress lol! continue sooN!

We should warn him thought that this distressed damsel comes with a warning of causing distress too...😉...😆😆

Originally posted by: Catwoman

Great part....but i think shiv is the CEO and not Shabbarank!!....

👏 👏

hmm...maybe the new part will reveal something about this...😉

Thank you 😃

Originally posted by: berkeleygirl818

OMG!!! i just caught up with the last 2 prts & they r AMAZING!!! 👏
👏 eww...
HOW can Nitesh marry & OLDIE like Maya!!! 🤢 😆 but i guess they r
made for each other!!! 😉 🤣 when the first 'handsime' stranger
walked in i thot it was Shiv & the CEO of their company!!! but i guess the
first 'handsome' stranger was Shashank!!! 🤢 😆 but, YAY... Shiv is
HERE!!!! lets PARTY!!! 🥳 🥳 😆 my hottie is here to save the
Damsel in Distress!!! 😆 CANNOT wait to read more... sooo... continue
soon!!! 😛

p.s. PLEASE try & continue Let Me Love You too... miss it!!! 😳

😆😆...u know even I thougth Maya was kinda old for Nitesh...but I couldn't remember the name of the character who plays Maya's hubby on the show..and plus...Gauri would never date him...😆..hence Nitesh was the choice...😆...

Finally our hero is here....hopefully he will help her and not cause her more distress...😉...

Let me love you 😳😳😳...I am soooooooooooooo sorry... will continue that soon too...😳

Originally posted by: jiya imdad

So glad u started another ff 😳 😳 was really looking 4ward to it!!
WOW!! i really didn't notice 'shashank' is that "handsome" after the description the first name that came in my mind was 'shiv' but i was highly mistaken!!
Finally our prince charming had made his entry so he would probably be gauri's fake BF , don't u think she's going to find it hard to dump him 😳 even though she would be just pretending.

😆...I think we all thought that the handsome stranger would be Shiv...after all when we think handsome, Shiv comes to mind not Shashank...😆... and Gauri...sigh...forget dumping...how will she resist him...period....hehehe 😉

Originally posted by: shiv-gauri4eva

hey..i read both the updates..and man they are awesum..lolz..poor Gauri better cum up with sumone nd i bet tht sum1 is going 2 b Shiv!!..lolzZz.. 😛 😉 😃

😆...yes she is in a bit of a jiffy...but it is okay...when Gauri is in trouble who comes to her rescue...it is none other than.... 😉...😆...new part...is going to be up soon...😆...just kidding...of course it our hero Shivyy....😳

Originally posted by: iqbals4ever

ok... so the ceo was not shiv it was shashank how stupid of me but is the waiter shiv?? plz cont soon i want to know 👏

The update is going to up like soooooooooooooooooooonnnnnnn....so you will very soon who this greek god is... but trust me...you already know...😆😉😳

Originally posted by: shivgauri

awesome fanfic!!!i just love readin ur fanfics pls continue soon!!!

Thank you 😃 ... yup the new part is going to be continued soon... it will be up shortly...😃

Originally posted by: sareeta

Heeellllloooooooooooo Chandni..... part 3 ke intezaaar, neendein ud rahi hai madam ji... jaldi post kijiye ga... warna... jaaan hateli par se pisal jaayegi yaar!! 😆


Arre didi, aap kuch kaho aur main usko na karoo...abhi loh... update kar rahi hooon...😃

Originally posted by: *Spandana*

where is the updateeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee 😭

spandu~

Quick, am I not? 😳😳😳

Originally posted by: desi chic

Meri Chandu Rani,

Mauhtarma... I don't even know where to start or what to say. I want to read your papers one day... even if they are having to do with school. Woman, you've got talent like anything!👏👏 Your style of writing has its own catch, a flow as uncertain yet fluid like a river... I like this plot. The idea of Gauri being portrayed as a self-centered woman, who has soft spots, but they appear to be hidden from herself. Haha!!! Maya and Palak Paneer are here to haunt her again eh?!😆😆 Bechari... And Shanky Doodle is the so-called Mr.Handsome Boss? Yaar tera chashma kahan gaya?!😳 Oops sorry... Hehe... Waise, Gauri is pro at lying... What a crucial trait in her position😕😆😆 Reminds me of a movie, but I can't put a finger on it right now... Anyhoo, you're blessed yaar! Now... Has this started sounding like a love letter yet? Ok, well just to let you know... I do love you, but I seem to love your creations more... *ahem*😆 jk 🤗

Chandu Re Chandu Re... Kabhi toh KAA par aah... behte hai hum intezaar kar raheeee... Tu joh aaye idhar post karna magar... Aur der na karna reeeee... (Sapney: Chanda Re)😆

Cheers,

dc

😆😆...*blushes immensely reading love letter* ... you can't write such sweet things and expect me to continue soon...cuz after reading this I can only do one thing and that is smile and smile some more...😊...and coming from you...the power you have over words I can't even begin to describe...😊

BTW thanks for the song...one of my favs....🤗🤗🤗 ...

And trust me...my academic papers....there is reason I love writing them...cuz then my teachers have to read it (no choice there)...time for sweet sweet payback for the all nighters...😆

Originally posted by: *Spandana*

answers done....abb update karo😛😳

spandu~

kar rahi hoon.... 😉

Originally posted by: mansi1219

hey

wow.. the last two parts were great! i love gauri's chacracter.. she is awesome at lying.. lol.. the good old made up boyfriends.. lol.. shashank is a hottie?? wat?? i def thought u were describing shiv.. exccept the blue eyes... i was like whoa! no shashank.. and he even asked her out? double wat?? thank god that stupid maya said the right thing atleast once..

yaha bhi aa gaye dono.. yes yes.. shiv is here.. ask him to be the boyfriend.. yes yes.. go gauri.. lol.. cant wait for the next aprt..

luv mansi

p.s. sry for not commenting earlier.. i got busy with stupid research paper.. urghh... which i shud be doing rite now... so buh bye..

haha no worries...even I have a paper to write and know what it is like...and i agree they are very very silly ...

😆 double wat...😆 ... yup the blue eyed boy is none other than our Shahsu...😆...my nick for him...😆 ...you are right if it was not for Maya's big mouth...Gauri would not be hunting for a "certain" someone...😉

Originally posted by: Iqbaladdict

hey Chandini, What a great comebak, U do amaze me with ur writing skills only just read whole of it and loved every bit.

Gauri is one determined and enthusiastic character and makes me feel good to see her differ from typical Ekta Character ie becharee Gauri. hehe 😆 😆, Gauri's sickeneing boyfriend is a schmuck for using her and maya and him do so deserve each other. 😉

Btw I read the comments u left on KMS aswell, and am much obliged for ur sweet words, I neva knew u read it. From KTM at the end I did gather u will be reading it so was sweet hearing from u regarding my penpushing. U r sweet. keep up with this wonderful FF and thanx for thi sbrill source of entertainment as Mr K seems too busy to consider us. 😭

Well Killing me softly is worth all the praises... I mean...it is soooo sizzling... you really know how to capture such passionate emotions... 👏👏...I am working my way slowly through the fics... one at a time... one day hopefully I will be caught up with all of them....😳 ...

*sigh* Mr. K ... seems to enjoying vacationing a bit too much... well do v really blame him... who wouldn't want to go on a long vaca... 😳

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Champu and Champuer
I pinch myself and bite my lower lip to ease the pain, I am not dreaming and he does exist. Then sitting up straight I signal for the heavenly looking waiter to come my way. He sees me signalling, looks confused and then ignores me. How dare he, I feel so insulted? How can he just ignore a customer like that? As he walks past me, I grab his arm finding it difficult to wrap my fingers around his well built arm muscles.

"Excuse me?" He says, looking into my eyes, with an expression of utter confusion and innocence. His eyes, big and black, and he has the most beautiful eye lashes I have ever seen on a man; can't help but feel a little jealous.

After a short pause, I think of what I am about to do; I realize I have no other option. I take in a deep breath and continue, still holding his arm. "How much do you get paid?"

"Excuse me?" He asks, this time feeling a bit offended and frowning at me.

"It's not rocket science to answer a simple question like that." I reply rolling my eyes at him and leaving his arm. "Sit!" I command pointing to the empty seat in front of me. He looks more confused now. "Don't be so confused and sit, I will leave you a large tip." Talk about money and they listen, how predictable.

He sits on the chair, folds his arms across his chest and stretches his legs under the table, in a relaxed manner. He looks at me, as if evaluating me. Having his eyes on me, makes my cheeks feel warmer and to avoid drawing his attention to my blushing I continue talking, "Look you have got to be the most…" Wait. Do I really want to admit to him that he is the most handsome man I have seen till date? No, he might become proud and demand more money. I restart, "the thing is I need …" Wait. Do I really want to admit to him that I am in a state of desperation, and dire need of help? Finding me so desperate he might try taking advantage of the situation. I think a while and then come up with the best sounding preposition to offer him, "see, I will pay you double the amount you get paid here" which is not much I am sure, "all you have to do is, pretend to be my boyfriend, and then eventually I will break up with you and you can go back to whatever it is you will go back to." I smile, and now cross my arms, proud at myself for the diplomatic way of handling the situation.

We both sit in silence for a while as he continues to stare at me, again in an evaluating away. This time I don't shy away and look right back at him.

"I think you money will be better spent if you gave it to a psychiatrist. To me it seems you need him more than a fake boyfriend." I open my eyes wide and my jaw drops; did he just suggest I am crazy? By the way his voice, wow, what a deep husky voice, how a man's voice is supposed to sound. We both sit there and look at each other and suddenly the desperation of my state sinks in.

I feel a lump growing in my throat, and realize how useless all this is. No decent man will ever agree to this bizarre plan of mine, not now, not ever. I see the hopelessness of the situation and worry about my own helplessness. Then with teary eyes, I make a final plea. Leaning forward, over the table, I place my hands on his arms. "I am not crazy. I am just a girl who is caught in her own web of lies. Doing this is the only way I can break free, please will you help me?"

"Hmm..." He says, and looks at me with a sort of mischief in his eyes. I lean back into my chair and narrow my eyes at him, trying to de-code his expression. Is that a yes or a no? And then my eyes open wide, as I see that very familiar black coat, sky blue shirt travelling towards me in the background. What is he doing here? He should be at the office doing whatever it is that CEO's do. As he comes closer and closer, I duck my head under the table, trying to hide.

"You are stranger than I thought." The gorgeous man who I am trying to convince to save me from my miserable lie, ducks his head under the table too. I stare back at him and know that I am profusely blushing, not out of embarrassment of him finding me under the table, but out of the stress of seeing Mr. CEO. Last thing I need right now is for him to question me about skipping work.

"I am not strange; I am just hiding from my boss." Gosh, who would have thought such a pretty face and no brains to support it? "And for you kind information he is headed straight in this direction. So you better sit back up before you draw any more attention to us."

"Gauri? Is that you?" Feeling panicked at hearing the very familiar voice I raise my head only to have it bump right into the table. Watching me rub my head in pain, Mr. Poodle brains laughs at me, not even trying to mask his amusement. I glare back at him as both of us sit back up.

"Oh, hello, Mr. CE …Sharma." I manage to utter now feeling a thudding on my head.

"Are you okay?" He asks, probably noticing the big bump that must have formed on top of my head, making me look egg shaped, all thanks to Mr. I-am-too-good-looking-to-have-a-brain.

"I am fine. And if you are wondering what I am doing here, well I had a very important client I had to meet…"

"It's okay Gauri. I don't mind employees leaving early once in a while." He smiles at me.

And then, Mr. I-have-hay-grass-for-a-brain clears his throat, drawing Mr. CEO's attention towards him. I bury my head in my hands out of disbelief. Here I was thinking maybe, just maybe, Mr. CEO would leave before noticing 'him' here. Now he has not only noticed 'him' but is waiting to be introduced, and I don't even know his name. I look at Mr. CEO and let out a little nervous laugh.

"So aren't you going to introduce us?" 'He' opens his big mouth. What is wrong with this man? Why is he trying to get me into trouble? Frustrated, I kick him under the table. "Ouch". I give him a tight smile.

"This is Mr. Shashank Sharma, my company's CEO and this is …" Mr. I-can't-wait-to-get-my-hands-on-so-I-can-straggle-him-with-m y-own-two-hands.

"Shiv, her boyfriend." He extends his hand towards Shashank's and shakes it, giving me a mischievous smile and wink. Forget about strangling him, he is too beautiful to be killed.

"Okay Gauri, I got to go. I see you at work tomorrow."

"Okay bye!" I say standing up and watching him leave the restaurant. Once I am convinced there is no way he can hear our conversation, I sit back down and turn to "Shiv". "Why did you say it like that? 'Shiv, her boyfriend!' Now he probably thinks we are some really happy couple that will not break up any time soon."

"You really should reconsider that idea about seeing a psychiatrist." Shiv says, standing up.

"Where are you going? Look I am not crazy, sit back down I will tell you everything. Then it will all make sense." When he does not move an inch and continues standing, I have no choice but to add the dreaded word at the end of my sentence. "Please."

"That is better." He replies, taking his seat back. Seriously, how do I manage to find people who really know how to get on my nerves? I roll my eyes at him.

"Look this is the thing; my zombie-faced boyfriend broke up with me yesterday after he stole my promotion and then proposed to a complete and total witch. So to get back at them I lied about having a boyfriend and then my totally gorgeous boss asked me out, but I had to turn him down because, apparently I have a boyfriend. And that is where you come in…after we break up, I can date Shashank."

"The guy that just left, Shashank, is the guy you want to date? If you ask me he looks like a champu."

"I didn't ask you, now did I? Anyways, he is very smart man, and he is NOT a champu."

"Come on, are you telling me you didn't see the oil in his hair?"

"That was gel not oil."

"He is a champu; of course it is oil and not gel."

"You…" Let it go Gauri, let it go. Breathe in, breathe out. Shut you eyes and count till ten. One. Two. Three. Four. I squint my eyes open to find him grinning at me. "What are you grinning so much about? On second thought don't answer that, I don't even want to know. Look all I want is for you to come to a dinner with me and there I will break up with you. Actually, you break up with me, and then I can use the sympathy card with Shashank."

"And I will get paid for this?"

"Yes! By the hour, double your current pay. Which what like eight or ten dollars? So I will pay you sixteen dollars."

"I want twenty."

"Okay whatever!" I agree, despite the outrageous amount, as it is just one dinner and only a few hours. I look at my watch and realize it has been one hour and fifteen minutes. "Okay I should get going, but before we go to the dinner, we should meet so you can get to know me and we can just get details settled and all that, so how about after work I meet you, tomorrow?" I say picking up my purse and standing up.

"What ever you say, I am at your command now." He says standing up, and giving me a sarcastic smile.

"Whatever." I start to walk away.

"Wait."

"Now what?" Annoyed I forcefully turn around and bump right into his chest. I lean back spitting out the strands of my hair that seem to be attacking my face. Suddenly I feel his hand on my cheek; I look up at him and he smiles at me, causing my heart beat to quicken. Taking my hand in his he brings it up and places an eye lash on it.

"You get to make a wish." I look into his eyes, and blush slightly, smiling. "Maybe you could wish for you Champu boyfriend to get some sense of how to be cool." He says giving me a quick wink and smile. I jerk my hand out his and from smiling at him, I glare at him. I turn back around and start to walk away when I hear him speak again.

"Wait."

Not making the same again, I don't turn around this time. "What do you want?"

"My money for the time we just spent together."

I don't believe this. I pull up my purse, fish out a twenty dollar bill, turn around and push onto his hand.

"You don't look like someone who would be weak in Math. We spent an hour and fifteen minutes together, that means, you owe me twenty FIVE dollars."

I stare back at him, my mouth open, I am shocked. I pull out five dollar bill and wave it at him. "Take it now. Who knew, you could be so cheap?" I roll my eyes at him and turn back around.

"At least I am not a champu."

Breathe in breathe out. He is not worth going to jail, for murder. He is not worth going to prison. I repeat to myself as I walk out.

Edited by Saregama_fan - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#68
me phast....will edit it after reading the piece or rather eating it.😆
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Oh GOd! this is why i lub u.☺️ chandu, ur too good man.....salaam to ur comic sense and excellent timing.👏
i want to point some sentences but i have finals next week and have to study...thts the reason my replies r choo chmall..☺️

spandu~
Edited by *Spandana* - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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😆 cant say anyhting 😆 left speechless and i can't stop laughing 😆 😆 😆 who knew that the first ff that i read 2day wud be so funny awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#70
AHAHAHAHA! champu!!! LMAO ohh man! eww shashank is anything but gorgeous lol he is in desperate need of a tan, hes soo pale!! LMAO! lol loveeeeeeed the part! guari has bad taste in men well that is before she met shiv OF COURSE! but she finds him annoying when she should be spending her time drooling loL! continue sooN!

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