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Posted: 18 years ago
Haila!!!! Wht a part!!! ๐Ÿ‘ Very very fantastic di!!!! Dis Shiv is tooooooooooooooooo romantic!!!! ๐Ÿ˜‰ After all he's romancin with his wife, na? we r not suppossed 2 say nethin!!!! ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† Di..................u r bcomin "Kanjooz" day by day!!!! ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ In the beginnin, u used 2 post big big-extremely big parts!!! But nw u r postin small updates, y? ๐Ÿ˜ญ
Di plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont ASAP!!! Dyin 2 read wht's gonna happen next!!!!! plzzzzzzzzzzzz di!!! ๐Ÿ˜ณ .U no wht? Ur's is 1 of my ever fav ffs!!! ๐Ÿ˜›
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Posted: 18 years ago
thank you so much for ur commentos guyz.. im sorry i can't reply.. no time watsoeva .. if i reply i won't have time to write d update.. and i did read 'em.. so thanx guyz.. and jiya hun.. i can't be evil.. i can't ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ and my jaan mirchy - ye that's wat im gonna call u now.. tumne apna naam nahin bataya mujhe ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ yaar mein kanjoos nahin.. time nahin milta and i'll update tonight once i get home ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Edited by nyzbabigyal - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: nyzbabigyal

thank you so much for ur commentos guyz.. im sorry i can't reply.. no time watsoeva .. if i reply i won't have time to write d update.. and i did read 'em.. so thanx guyz.. and jiya hun.. i can't be evil.. i can't ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ and my jaan mirchy - ye that's wat im gonna call u now.. tumne apna naam nahin bataya mujhe ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ yaar mein kanjoos nahin.. time nahin milta and i'll update tonight once i get home ๐Ÿ˜ณ

my jaan Navz don't ever worry about the replies ๐Ÿ˜ณ we comment to praise u and in order to get more n more of ur beautiful updates so concentrate on writing the next part๐Ÿ˜ณ, i'll be waiting for ur update do it soon๐Ÿ˜ณ

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Posted: 18 years ago
OMG Jaani!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I read this whole FF!!!!! and is just like whoa!!!!!!!!!!!๐Ÿ‘

read all the parts!!! it got my glued!!!!!!!!


Haila jaani.... no wonder you dont update ur KS FF cuz ur updating this one!!! i see how it is!!๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ yaar equal equal chance yaar!!!!!!.......


but this shiv is something else ๐Ÿ˜† and like in the beginning i was like oh man!!! and then they get married!!! uh oh!! what will happen wen they get to know?๐Ÿค”.... dont even want to go there!

let them be happy right now!!!



but jaani this is just awesome!! please cont soon!!!

but please update KS too!!!๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: jiya imdad

my jaan Navz don't ever worry about the replies ๐Ÿ˜ณ we comment to praise u and in order to get more n more of ur beautiful updates so concentrate on writing the next part๐Ÿ˜ณ, i'll be waiting for ur update do it soon๐Ÿ˜ณ

haila thanx jaan.. im gonna start workin on d nxt part. in 5 minutes.. i have it allllllll written out.. dude i was bored in my math class.. then i was smilin due to shiv/gauri - which is not good๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: nyzbabigyal

thanx guyz.. hope u enjoy this part.. im so sorry for d delay.. week's been hectic..

*~*~*PART 43*~*~*



she continued to walk forward.. looking bac ๐Ÿ˜• .. to make sure everyone was in their rooms sleeping and not awake... right then she bumped into someone .. as fear over took gauri.. before she could scream.. cuz she was about to ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† i mean y wouldn't she.. she had couple of reasons.. ๐Ÿ˜• one being she was caught and in big trouble .. two she was about to fall on the floor.. and much to her dismay right on top of the person behind her ๐Ÿ˜† .. whoeva that was .. well she was sure she'd scream.. but its not her fault.. her voice gave up on her.. ๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜† and on top of that.. a hand covered her mouth .. just when she fell.. she landed on top of the person in front of her.. she still hadn't seen his face.. cuz she neva got the chance to turn her face around.. after that jhatka.. ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† before she could respond

Lol... kitni masti... aur woh bhi raat ke andhere mein!๐Ÿ˜† Shiv ka doosra naam hai "chalaaki"๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜†

Shiv: gauri plz don't scream shocked.. gauri turned her head fast..whispering
Gauri: shiv tum ๐Ÿ˜•
Shiv: aur kaun chahiye?? No kidding!๐Ÿ˜ณ
Gauri: no I thought it was someone else Tu zyada socha mat kar... Shiv hai na, hosh udaane ko๐Ÿ˜ณ
Shiv: nope they're all sleeping.. Finally!! Now let SG rest in peace... together!๐Ÿ˜†
Gauri: tumhe kya hua ๐Ÿ˜•
Shiv: kya hua.. kitna khati ho .. LMAO!!!๐Ÿ˜†
Gauri: kya matlabb??? ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก
Shiv: kya matlab.. i can't breathe.. aur tum ho ke..apna khana kam karo
Gauri: ughhh how dare u ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก
Shiv:wat?? its true.. itna khati ho.. aur phir dhaka maarne ko bhi mein hi milta hoon tumhe Kiski billi kisko meeow!!๐Ÿ˜† Lol... I thought he was the one always after her?๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜ณ
Gauri: its not my fault.. u come in my way ๐Ÿ˜• Jhooti!! Mann mein ladoo phoot rahe hain aur upar se!๐Ÿ˜ณ
Shiv: dekh kar chala karo jaan ๐Ÿ˜ณ now let's go before someone wakes up
gauri gets up helping shiv.. lazy lazy ๐Ÿ˜† as they both sneak out of the house... Lmao... Laziness is a quality too meri jaan๐Ÿ˜‰

they both run to the street
Gauri: uh shiv ๐Ÿ˜•
Shiv: yes jaan ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Gauri: where we going?? its practically a jungle over there
Shiv: toh kya hua. let's just go for a walk..
Gauri: a walk..
Shiv: yes a walk.. ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ
they both start walking.. as shiv holds her hand..
Gauri: shiv.. let's go back
Shiv: wat?? kyun.. don't spoil the mood ๐Ÿ˜ก She's becoming rather good at that isn't she?๐Ÿ˜ก
Gauri: its so dark.. im scared Saath mein Shiv hai aur isko dar lag raha hai..๐Ÿ˜•
Shiv: scared?? wit me around.. ๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜• im here nah
as he wraps his arm around her. they continue talk

Shiv: hmm now if we were in the city.. i'd have bought u icecream.. ab ice cream kahaan se laoon
Gauri: itni raat ko ice cream Ice cream kahaane ka koi time nahin hota girl!! MMMMMMMMMM!!!๐Ÿ˜ณ
Shiv: yes jaan.. itni raat ko... chup chup ke khane mein mazaa hi kuch aur hai.. jaise chup chup ke milne mein ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰
as he winked making gauri blush.. Aye haye... Navs... main bhi blushing...๐Ÿ˜ณ
Shiv: seriously an ice cream would've done justice to this walk ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ .. but nooo No kidding!! He should wake up a ice cream shop dude like Jai did๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜†
Gauri: stop complaining shiv
Shiv: im not joking ๐Ÿ˜•
Gauri: u watch too many movies..
Shiv: wat?? no i don't
Gauri: oh yes u do.. mr. shiv.. helping with the tie.. then romantic dinner.. well wit d music and all.. then burning ur hand and expecting a kiss.. yeh sab movies nahin hai toh kya hai ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†

Ok... So I am...

**FAINTS**

Yaar... Navs we both watch too many movies!!๐Ÿ˜†

Shiv: its not my fault. evetyhin i think of they end up putting in movies Seriously... they're such copycats na?๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜†
Gauri: ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† right of course they do
they both continued to walk.. gauri teasing shiv.. as shiv continued to joke around.. suddenly he felt gauri shiver.. as she wrapped her arms around him
Shiv: u cold?? ๐Ÿ˜•
Gauri: uh huh
Shiv: ok let's go bac home.. i don't even have a jacket.. i don't want u to get sick ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Gauri: no i don't wanna go home..
Shiv: well too bad. we're going..
as they both turned walking back home What a jodi... *sighs*
Shiv: tum bhi na gauri.. when i wanna go out wit u.. u don't want to.. when im ready to go home.. u wana stay
Gauri: well im enjoying this walk.. its just cool breeze.. i'll be fine ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ
just then shiv looked up.. as a drop of water fell on his face Yes!! Baraat ke mausam aaye!! I LOVE the rain!!๐Ÿ˜ณ
Shiv: well u spoke too soon..
Gauri: oh no..
before shiv could respond.. it started raining like crazy ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ Sweetness... mausam bhi hai... aur dil-e-alam bhi... ho jaaye!!๐Ÿ˜‰

Gauri: shivvv.. let's go
Shiv: wat?? noo way.. let's walk ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Gauri: its raining
Shiv: toh kya hua.. let's dance ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Gauri: u stay i'll go
as gauri started walking.. she stopped as she felt a pull on her dupatta.. she turned around.. to find shiv on his knee ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Beemari buddy ki buddy... Teri ye buddy toh gayee kaam se!! That was so filmy and die-hard romantic...

Ok... so I am...

in COMA like you now... Well so from now on... this is Neetu's bhoot๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†
Shiv: hmm now this'd be a perfect way of proposing.. but since we're already past that point.. how about a dance??
Gauri: shiv its raining..
Shiv: i kno jaan... so ๐Ÿ˜• dance??? ๐Ÿ˜‰
Gauri: lekin..
Shiv: plz don't say there's no music
gauri giggled at his comment.. as she put her hand in his...
shiv got up.. as he took her in his arms... they both danced .. slowly
Shiv: hmm now jaan.. ab yeh mat kehna.. ke i planned this..
Gauri: kya matlab
Shiv: u were saying.. i do everythin.. or say everythin as it happens in movies.. u know this happens in movies too.. and i swear.. i did not plan it.. no idea it was gonna rain ๐Ÿ˜•
Gauri: uff shiv tum bhi na
Shiv: waise..movies mein.. aur bhi bahut kuch hota hai ๐Ÿ˜‰ Naughty naughty... I'm in love with this man!!๐Ÿ˜ณ
Gauri: acha woh kya
Shiv: sunsan jagaa.. aadhi raat.. ek ladki.. ek ladka..๐Ÿ˜‰
gauri stared at him.. in disbelief.. as he went on.. suddenly shiv.. looked at gauri.. as he looked up at her from head to toe.. ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ suddenly makin gauri realize d condition.. she was in.. wet suit.. wet hair.. ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ( a total MKL - mann ki lagan moment.. ๐Ÿ˜‰ Total MKL moment yaar!! Omg! Perfecto.... She's drenched, he's drenched... he's lost... she's lost... he wants her... she wants him... and I'm dead... *sighs*

Ooo lagi tumse mann ki lagan, lagan lagi tumse mann ki lagan... Gali gali ghoome... Dil tujhe dhoondhe... Gali gali ghoome, dil tujhe dhoondhe... Tere bin tarse na ye!)gauri looked at shiv.. as a sudden blush appeared on her face.. she tried to move.. but shiv was holdin her a bit too tightly ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜‰

Shiv: u amaze me.. one minute u act like a kid.. d otha minute.. u blushh.. lookin like an angel from heaven.. u leave me breathless๐Ÿ˜ณ as shiv whispered .. gauri couldn't help but blush more at such comment... as she looked ... at his chest.. she didn't know where else to look ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ cuz his eyes were too instense.. she was gettin drawn in.. too easily ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ d magic was working.. and it was working strongly.. shiv smiled.. as he lifted her face up.. giving her a gentle kiss on the forehead.. bring his face in level wit her.. giving her a deep passionate kiss.. ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ makin gauri feel warm all over.. even in d coldest weather ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ as shiv moved bac.. looked at her face.. eyes closed.. trembling lips.. he kissed her once more.. as he took her in a hug.. ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Ok... does a person "feel" in coma... cause I'm like senseless yet shivering... Symptoms are now beyond explanation... You are amazing kudiye!!๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

hope u guyz enjoyed.. ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ another part.. maybe tomorrow ๐Ÿ˜‰ g2g to class now.. k maybe shivy's not filmy but i am๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

bas tu try karti reh... aur main yoon hi marti rahoon... *sighs*

Cheers,

dc

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Posted: 18 years ago
My commentos are in blue italics... and I'm sorry for not posting them earlier although I did read it earlier... I have to finish this essay today and then bas!

Cheers,
dc
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Dk*s_Jaanu_Guli

OMG Jaani!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I read this whole FF!!!!! and is just like whoa!!!!!!!!!!!๐Ÿ‘ HAILA.. wat r u doing here

read all the parts!!! it got my glued!!!!!!!! haila. guli jaan yaar u go update ur ff's๐Ÿ˜‰


Haila jaani.... no wonder you dont update ur KS FF cuz ur updating this one!!! i see how it is!!๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ yaar equal equal chance yaar!!!!!!....... nooooo.. that's not true.. i actually update that one more.. i think i do.. i try equal


but this shiv is something else ๐Ÿ˜† and like in the beginning i was like oh man!!! and then they get married!!! uh oh!! what will happen wen they get to know?๐Ÿค”.... dont even want to go there! lmao... but im not evil like u guli jaan.. so u won't have to worry๐Ÿ˜‰

let them be happy right now!!! yaar they r happy..



but jaani this is just awesome!! please cont soon!!!

but please update KS too!!!๐Ÿ˜ƒ thanks guli jaanu.. i'll update that one tonight or tomorrow.. as fo this one.. i should update right now

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: desi chic

My commentos are in blue italics... and I'm sorry for not posting them earlier although I did read it earlier... I have to finish this essay today and then bas!

Cheers,
dc

i read 'em jaan.. thank u so much.. im LMAO.. oh btw.. how's my buddy's bhoot doing today??? ๐Ÿ˜† yaar ur coments had me in splits.. and im in d library.. tum toh pitogi๐Ÿ˜ก.. im glad .. i do try๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰ im a movie buff.. and i luv mushy mushy stuff... so rain dance - all that has to happen.. and my SIR a part of any of that.. make it all much hotter๐Ÿ˜‰ and its so weird seein ur comment.. cuz i'm super loaded wit work.. and i was thinkin about writin my commento on ur ff today once i get home.. so i'll do that once i get home๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰ after all humein bhi toh faint hona hai๐Ÿ˜†

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