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NaV

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Posted: 18 years ago

#321

Originally posted by: mirchy

Di Thanku d 4 sending such a wonderful part!!!!!It was a nice part actually! 👏 thanx jaan.. glad u enjoyed it

Shiv-Gauri rocks!!! I think they should get married soon!!! Agar hamari Gauri sweety Preggy ho gayi tho??????????😲 Kya karoge bechara Shiv Kapoor?. Also it'll b burden if his marriage is gonna fix with sum1 else!!!!🤢 (Hpe u r not tht 😈 di!!). kya sochte ho tum log..pregnant.. this is NOT an ekta kapoor drama.. that they do it once and she's pregnant.. let's get real guyz.. and u need to stop doin telepathy on me.. cuz then i have to change my storyline😆

I think i can read ur mind di!!!!😉(Don't tease me again 4 sayin this, okay dokie?😉). i know.. i can tell.. everytime i have somethin planned fo my update.. u mention it in ur comment.. then i end up having to rethink d whole update😆

Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon di!! Dyin 2 read it!!!! Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz post "Big- Big" part 4 ur sweet admirers ( I mean 4 us!!)😳

jaan i'll update tonight.. still thinkin about wat to write.. but i'll start d update in an hour or sooo.. not sure.. but tonight fo sure.. cuz my last 2 classes got canceled😡 and i don't wanna go home.. and i don't wanan do hw..😆😆 as i have d whole weekend to do that.. so i'll update😳

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NaV

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Posted: 18 years ago

#322

Originally posted by: za7n4b
grt part

thanx hun.. glad u liked it😳

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pritig

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Posted: 18 years ago

#323

wow!! 😳 😳 😳 that part was really romantic n really nice!!!! 👏 plz cont soon!!! 😊

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desi chic

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Posted: 18 years ago

#324

Meri Beemari Buddy....

Tu hai..

Wonderful, amazing, mindblowing, unreal, sensational, marvelous, remarkable, magnificient, a genius...

Now take all that and times it by a thousand... and you still won't get to what I'm saying!

Ok... so that was suuuuuuuuuper cute!! Shiv is so naughty!! And Gauri is like the luckiest woman alive! OMG 😳😳 Waking up in his arms... *heaven*... Aye haye... Lol, so funny when he wouldn't hand her the clothes... But then I was surprised at how easily he gave it up. 😳 And of course him and his big mouth, "I'll bring Gauri tomorrow". Sheesh... But I guess we can expect some *cough cough* there too... 😳

Need I say?

**FAINTS**

Cheers,
dc

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NaV

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Posted: 18 years ago

#325

Originally posted by: Mehandikhan
great plz cont soon. 👏

thank you so much hun.. glad u liked it😳

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NaV

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Posted: 18 years ago

#326

Originally posted by: pritig
wow!! 😳 😳 😳 that part was really romantic n really nice!!!! 👏 plz cont soon!!! 😊

glad u liked it hun.. i tried wit d romantic bit😉 thanx jaan

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NaV

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Posted: 18 years ago

#327

Originally posted by: desi chic
Meri Beemari Buddy....

Tu hai..

Wonderful, amazing, mindblowing, unreal, sensational, marvelous, remarkable, magnificient, a genius... u know im still on cloud 9.. so that's y d nxt update's taking so long.. i haven't come down yet😆

Now take all that and times it by a thousand... and you still won't get to what I'm saying! ur commentos.. make me seem as if .. i can WRITE😆😆😆 seriously yaar.. thank u so much.. means a lot.. neva knew i was this good.. thank u thank u

Ok... so that was suuuuuuuuuper cute!! Shiv is so naughty!! And Gauri is like the luckiest woman alive! OMG 😳😳 i know right sigh lucky her.. Waking up in his arms... *heaven*... Aye haye... Lol, so funny when he wouldn't hand her the clothes... But then I was surprised at how easily he gave it up. 😳 kya sochte ho tum log.. he's nice and innocent😉 not besharam like u guyz😆 And of course him and his big mouth, "I'll bring Gauri tomorrow". Sheesh... But I guess we can expect some *cough cough* there too... 😳 wat cough cough.. kya yaar😆

Need I say?

**FAINTS**

Cheers, haila ur definetely my beemari buddy.. jab bhi dekho **faints**😆
dc

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NaV

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Posted: 18 years ago

#328

Originally posted by: cuty_k
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thanx jaan 😳

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NaV

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Posted: 18 years ago

#329

thanx guyz.. hope u enjoy this part 😳 😳 .. sorry about d delay 😭 😭 i was busyyy..

*~*~*PART 42*~*~*

vivan and shiv made their way in the backyard.. wit blankets and pillows and wat not 😃 .. where mahen and anupam were waiting for them.. the four guyz.. spread out the blankets on the floor.. wit d pillows on top.. just throwin 'em randomly.. while the ladies made their way outside.. with tea/coffee and piping hot samosas.. 😃 😛
Vivan: im starving 😃
Shiv: that's my line 😡 .. and ladies.. thank you 😳 as he grabbed himself a plate to enjoy some delicious pakodas 😃 .. everyone sat on the blankets.. that were speared out on the floor.. the nice and cool breeze.. was makin the evening more beautiful… its hard to sit outside like this.. when ur in the city.. but at the farm house.. it was beautiful.. even d stars can be seen 😃 .. and u didn't have to go anywhere.. they can be seen from your back yard.. ipshita and gauri were busy serving everyone..

Shiv coughed loudly 😉 .. gauri looked at him 😳 😉 .. wit a "kya hai" look 😕 .. no one was paying attention to them.. as they were all busy in deep conversations 😉 .. shiv nodded to her… to sit by him.. 😳 she nodded wit a "no" 😭 .. shivy looked at her.. gauri threw him a "im sorry I love you" look 😳 😳 .. as she joined the ladies.. shiv just stared at her 😉 .. as he engaged himself in conversation with anupam and vivan..
Mahen: lets go for a walk?? Ma… nikhila
Nikhila: ji?? 😕
Mahen: let's go for walk 😳
Nikhila: walk??
Mahen: haan its beautiful weather.. and all of us… just ate so much.. a walk would do good 😃
Dadi: good idea.. im up for it as dadi and nikhila got up.. joining mahen and dada ji.. 😃
Nikhila: any one else??
Anupam: no u guyz go.. we'll stay here 😃
Mahen: theek hai all d adults went for a walk.. while all the kids (well they're kids of d family 😆 ).. sat there .. chatting away
Vivan: guyz im bored.. let's play a game
Anupam: k wat game?? 😕
Vivan: I don't know let's play antakshri 😃
Kaya: no sorry..
Vivan: kyun??
Kaya: wat's the point… u guyz r gonna lose anyway
Vivan: wat? Excuse me?? 😡 kaya and vivan started arguing 😆 .. anupam got up.. asking ipshita.. if she wanted to go for a walk after all.. he had changed his mind 😉 .. it was betta than seeing kaya and vivan fight like little kids 😆 😆 .. anupam and ipshita went for a walk.. just a bit out of the house.. so they can be back soon 😳 . .just a tiny walk 😃 .. till these kids stop fighting.. gauri picked up the dishes and made her way inside.. to clean up… 😕 and just like anupam.. she thought it was betta than seeing these two fight.. 😆 😆 😆

Shiv watched gauri make her way inside the house 😉 .. he sat there staring at kaya and vivan fo a couple fo seconds.. .. then decided to get up and make his way inside 😉
Kaya: where you going??
Shiv: inside 😕
Kaya: kyun.. we're all outside.. y u going inside??
Shiv: because.. woh mein 😕
Kaya: woh mein kya huh j.. she stopped midway.. as she was about to say jiju. 😉 ... cuz vivan was there.. shiv looked at her 😡 😡 😡 .. throwing her an angry look cuz she wouldn't let him go inside 😆 😆 .. kaya burst out laughin
Vivan: wat's so funny??
Kaya: ahem.. nothing 😕
Vivan: wat.. I know its something.. so tell me 😡
Kaya: its nothing vivan.. stop acting like a kid. and they went bac to their fighting/arguing.. 😆 😆 😆 shiv looked at 'em wit a 'they're hopless' look.. and made his way inside.. 😉

Gauri was coming out of the kitchen… wit a drink in her hand.. when shiv made his way inside.. they both bumped into each other.. gauri ended up spilling the drink on his shirt
Shiv: gauriii 😡
Gauri: oops 😕
Shiv: yeh kya kiya 😡
Gauri: its not my fault.. u bumped into me 😡
Shiv: hmm.. its k ur forgiven 😉 😳
Gauri: good.. now excuse me 😳
Shiv: wait… I wasn't done yet
Gauri: kya hua..
Shiv: how about a kiss?? 😳 as he brought his face forward 😉
Gauri: hmm how about not??
Shiv: excuse me 😡
Gauri: u heard me 😡 shiv started walkin towards gauri.. d cute innocent look from his face.. had turned into an angry look 😕 .. gauri looked at him.. shivered.. well she was scared now

Shiv: wat'd u say??
Gauri: i… m.. mein 😭
Shiv: gauri tum mujhse darti nahin ho 😡 wit that.. gauri walked her last step.. as she hit the cold wall behind her. She continued to stare at shiv.. who approached her in no time.. he put his hands on the wall.. on her each side.. 😉
Shiv: jawab do 😡
Gauri: m.. mein 😭
Shiv: kya?? 😡 he continued to stare at gauri.. his angry look mixed wit his intense eyes made him look sizzling 😉 😉 .. making gauri breathless… Shiv moved closer.. scaring d daylights out of her 😭 😕 .. as he placed a soft kiss on her forehead 😳 😳
Shiv: kitni darpok ho tum.. itna darti ho 😆 😆
Gauri: h.. huh
Shiv: kya huh.. sachi.. agar mujhe pata hota.. ke tum itni darpok ho to.. toh mein toh 😆 😆
Gauri: shivvv 😡 she hit him on his shoulder.. more than once
Shiv: hey gauri gaurii 😆
Gauri: u scared me 😭
Shiv: jaan its not my fault u got scared 😉
Gauri: pehle darate ho.. phir.. im not talking to u 😭 😡 as she made her way forward to go out of the house
Shiv: wait wait wait 😳 shiv pulled her back.. holding her arm 😉
Gauri: kya hai
Shiv: hmm.. I was thinking.. let's go somewhere 😉 Gauri: go somewhere kahaan?? 😕
Shiv: bahar ghoomne 😳
Gauri: haan haan.. jaate jaate.. sab ko bata kar chalet hain na.. 😡

Shiv: gaurii.. meet me tonight.. outside.. at 12
Gauri: itni raat ko kyun?? 😕
Shiv: plz gauri.. 😳
Gauri: lekin shiv
Shiv: I don't care.. im not listening.. 12… u betta be outside.. or I'll be coming inside.. 😡 😃 as shiv placed a quick kiss on her lips 😉 😳 and left.. going upstairs to change.. gauri mopped up d floor 😆 .. made her way outside.. to find ipshita and anupam coming back.. 😃

Gauri: how was ur walk?? 😃
Anupam: better than listening to these two 😆
Vivan: excuse me
Anupam: u heard me 😉 just then the adults made their way back..
Dadi: tum log abhi tak yaheen baithe ho
Anupam: haan dadi.. hum kahaan jayenge 😕
Vivan: wat.. u just came
Anupam: chup kar vivan.. bahut bolte ho 😡
Ipshita: dadi.. we'll go get dinner started.. chalein gauri 😃
Gauri: chalo gauri, ipshita and kaya made their way inside.. now that d pakodas were digested .. it was time fo some dinner 😆
Anupam: hello ladies 😉
Gauri: aap yahaan kaise 😕
Anupam: I thought I'd help 😳
Gauri: help?? Here??
Anupam: haan kyun... I can't help in the kitchen
Gauri: no u can.. but.. wat r u gonna do?? 😆
Anupam: jo hukam aapka.. gauri and kaya burst out laughing as ipshita gave him a "you're a loser" 😆 look.. soon after.. shiv and vivan joined them in the kitchen 😉
Kaya: let me guess.. u guyz r here to help
Shiv: 🤔 🤔 🤔 no.. im here to sit and talk.. 😆
Kaya: aur tum vivan.. 😕
Vivan: i.. mein.. abhi pata nahin the ladies started preparing dinner.. as the guys just sat there.. talking 😆 😆 .. anupam made his way towards ipshita.. who was working on one end of the kitchen 😉 .. vivan joins gauri.. he's actually helping here and there 😕 😆 … kaya's teasing shiv. 😉 ... who's staring at vivan angrily for taking his place 😡 😡 .. he could've helped gauri.. 😆 😆
Shiv: kaya samjhao vivan ko 😡
Kaya: kya?? 😕
Shiv: ke husband/wife ke beech mein nahin aana chahiye
Kaya: kya matlab
Shiv: dekho na.. vivan bhi... I should be helping gauri.. right?? 😳
Kaya: uff jiju.. aap bhi na they both started bickerin back and forth 😆 😆 .. which led to kaya teasing shiv.. while they chit-chatted.. gauri and vivan.. burst out laughing... Cuz they were teasing anupam and ipshita.. openly.. quite loudly. 😆 😆 😆 .
Anupam: tum dono ki problem kya hai 😡
Vivan: kuch bhi nahin.. don't u think u should let ipshita work now 😉 .. I mean the elders are waiting outside for food.. 😆
Anupam: toh she's cooking.. tumhari problem kya hai 😡
Vivan: nothing anupam bhaiya.. gussa kyun hote ho.. I was just saying they all continued to cook and chat… full masti in the kitchen 😆 😃

After a while.. the dinner was finally prepared.. the whole family gathered around the dining table to eat.. this time the guys served.. instead of the ladies.. as they all sat down to eat 😉
Dadi: toh tum logon ne kya banaya 😃
Shiv: we made.. we
Anupam: haan banaya na woh
Vivan: sab kuch humin ne toh banaya hai 😉
Dadi: sabhi kuch?? 😕
Vivan: of course.. we helped right guyz
Shiv: haan of course.. we
Anupam: exactly we did.. 😃 the grls burst out laughing.. along wit the adults.. as the guys sat there.. the dinner eventually finished 😃 .. everyone went off to bed.. after a long tiring day.. gauri woke up.. looking at the time.. it was 11:55 .. she looked around.. ipshita and kaya were both in deep sleep 😉 .. she slowly got up off the bed.. going out of the room 😉 .. she went downstairs.. scared… nervous and wat not 😕 .. she made her way towards the door.. she looked bac.. to make sure everyone was sleeping no one was awake 😉 .. right then she bumped into someone.. as fear took over gauri

hope u guyz liked it.. 😳

Edited by nyzbabigyal - 18 years ago