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Posted: 18 years ago

#161

great part!!!! 👏 loved the way how u ended. gauri wonderin whether she is havin an efect on him 😆 .
i love ur fanfic...continue soon.

i have a small doubt, it is little stupid but still

the reason behind shivgauri marriage was it really dadaji and naniji love story or was it just a figment of gauri's imagination like the bus driver's club???

Edited by shivgauri - 18 years ago

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Nazrin

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Posted: 18 years ago

#162

chandni ur a darling......luv u..... 🤗 🤗 🤗 u made my day sweeeety......🤗
ok now coming to ur ff.....that was soooo sooooo sooooo goooooooood......a perfect mixture of romance n comedy.....OMG!!!! this shiv is soooooo sweeeeeeet 😳 gosh im in short of words to praise u....ok next time b4 i read this ff i'll b searching words 4 u... 😳 my vocab is a little weak u c 😳 😆 anyways......enjoyed it like hell... 😳 n thaaaaaaaaaaaaaank u sooooooooo much for this quick update......🤗 🤗

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Nazrin

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Posted: 18 years ago

#163

Originally posted by: Saregama_fan

I am doing a new update just for you...awwww thaaaank u sooo much.....*muwaaaaaaah* 🤗 and will try to make new updates whenever, and as soon as I can....sooo sweeet of u 😃😃🤗...and now it is time for me to thank you, for telling your friend, to check out the fic...you are too sweet....ur most welcum sweeety.....but the credit goes to u ofcourse not me 😉🤗🤗🤗

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OMG...I have to thank nazrin too, really sweet of her...😃 ...am I glad, he recommendation was worth it.. .😳😳😳 ...u know at first I was going to make Palak and Maya like they were in the show, but then I thought hm...it would be more interesting if they were secretaries rahter than part of the family....😆😆😉....glad you are enjoying it...😃😃😃

dont thank me yaar....i told u im a fan of ur writing...so i had to share this na 😉

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kaira11

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Posted: 18 years ago

#164

awesome part 👏 it was a really cute part !! 👏 👏 👏

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mad

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Posted: 18 years ago

#165

😆
every time i read 1 part i laugh a lot
thanx for that... realllllly need to laugh these days

so hw come shiv knw sooo much abt gauri??? 😕 😕
continue soon
😊

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jiya imdad

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Posted: 18 years ago

#166

great update 👏
keep it up!!!!!

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Iqbaladdict

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Posted: 18 years ago

#167

I don't know what to say, Darling Shiv bought sweets for the wretched whitches but handed them to Gauri, and the words 'Hallabloo and gazillions and few others like scrumshous, gianormous, r my favs too, but that shiv is so stuck up, u can count the minutes on ur fingertips he spends with our Gauri and yet he complains. And why couldn't he jus say he bought the sari, it would've been so sweet. I think deep down he loves her freestyle attitude maybe that is exactly what attracts him to her and will funally make him fall for her in a big way, can't wait for that, and thank u so much for updateing so quik, I know normally u take a few days so wasnt looking out for it and was gutted that i didn't read it earlier, but like they better late than never.hehe 😆

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koolaries4

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Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#168

must say tht was awesome.. plz do conitnue sooon..

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maham

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Posted: 18 years ago

#169

awesum! ok i may stop writing comments and bcum a silent reader cuz ive wrote the same things over and over again for a million times! continue soon 😊

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shiningstar47

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Posted: 18 years ago

#170

Okay I think I fell off my chair a hundred times while reading your fanfic it is sooooo funny! Gauri is hillarious! She's beautiful, smart and funny yet in this totally endearing, hidden way! You have really made her character stand out. It's 5 am here and I think anytime now my parents are going to come into my room hearing me laugh histerically and think I'm losing it!😆
You are a natural writer, this fanfic is really great. I can't wait for Shiv to start falling for Gauri! Hope you update it soon!

Sumi

Edited by shiningstar47 - 18 years ago

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