Hidden Feelings- CH.16 Updated/ 13/09/07- - Page 9

awesome man....just awesome!!!!

i can't wait for the next part!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😊

shiv is sooo mean !!! 😡 😡 poor gauri !!!!!great part 👏 👏 👏

areh yeh larka bi na...is ko koi samhjao..if he gives himself another compliment his heads gonna come off his shoulders..lol 😆 ...typical Shiv..he's still hot tho..haha..aww poor Gauri 🥺 ..Im glad she has such nice friends who really care about her! 👍🏼 ...great job and am waiting for more!!!

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soham?? who??? eijaz??? 😃
continue soon

Originally posted by: heartbreakkid

Awesome part 👏

Thanks 😃

Originally posted by: static_chaos23

who's soham (eijaz)?

who's shiv to call gauri a 'behenjee'

dehko ab yeh shiv kudhi is 'behenjee' ke peeche dum thorega!!! na chahtey bhi, gauri se chutkhara nahi paaye ga.... he will crave gauri, like the air we breathe, for which one can not do without. So true I bet everyone is eager to read that part!! 😆

i wanna c shiv grovel (jus pic IQ doing this omg cute or what with too die for looks) Yeah Have you seen IQ in Npkia show, he looks so hot and iresstible! 😳

pls continue soon 👏

Yeah Our Soham will come as Eijaz Khan. Poor Shiv doesn't know his looks as he is calling him a nerd? 😡 Shiv hasn't known Gauri for long but I'll make him pay when real Gauri comes! 😆

Loved ur comments and I'll post Soon. 😆

Originally posted by: ching

too good con't soon 😃

Thanks Ching. Is it a Chinese name?

Originally posted by: JCluvs srk

ur right....shiv's arrogance is pretty sexy.....but he's just so mean! btw great update! cant wait 4 mor....hehehehe this new story of gauri having a date with soham shood be fun.

Thanks but the actuall new twist is about to come 😉 😆. I'll make a great date btw the two and Shiv's reaction 😆 😆 And that'd be fun 😉..

I am glad u liked. If you want to Pm me ur ideas abt date and jealousy please do so 😃

Originally posted by: *guesswho*

shiv's mean yo 😡
He better get his act together

Hmmm You have to admit he's nothing without his alitiude 😉 😳

Originally posted by: Rock_Star

shiv is disgusting 😡 poor gauri...hope some guy come in gauri's life and make shiv jealous like soham😉
great part 👏 👏

Relax 😆 We have Soham, the dashing sweetheart 😳 😆. Leave all that Soham, he's such a sweetheart