Hidden Feelings- CH.16 Updated/ 13/09/07- - Page 2

It sounds great, u can post it whenever you feel like....looking forward to it.

Amazing hunnii.. look forward to reading it!


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sounds interesting pls continue n post once ur exams r over 😃

also pls could u add 'ff' to the title .... makes it easier to search for.

thanks

sounds great... good luck on your exams... glad that your posting tomorrow!! 😳

Originally posted by: Jenna Dutt

It sounds great, u can post it whenever you feel like....looking forward to it.

I am going to post it now.. sorry for being late

Originally posted by: lil_desi_goddes

Amazing hunnii.. look forward to reading it!


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aww Thanks.

Originally posted by: static_chaos23

sounds interesting pls continue n post once ur exams r over 😃

also pls could u add 'ff' to the title .... makes it easier to search for.

thanks

Thanks, I will do it now. I didn't realized it as I am used to posting FF's in the FF forums with out having F titles.

Originally posted by: .:KYPHlOvEr88:.

sounds great... good luck on your exams... glad that your posting tomorrow!! 😳

Thanks Muli.

Hidden feelings

Chapter one -

Gauri has married Shiv, Shiv Kapoor the son of rich industrialist Mahen Kapoor. They all belong to the upper class life style and now she has to adjust this lifestyle as she is now Gauri Shiv Kapoor.

Gauri the only daughter of Alok Sharma had fallen in love with Shahid. Shahid on the other hand was honest, good reliable employee for Kapoor industries. He soon became a trustee for Kapoor family and they treated him as his own son even gave a place for him to live in their own house. He had a very dark secret that no ones know. He soon fell in love with Gauri, marriage ceremony everything was arranged but he left the poor gauri on her own in the mandap. Mahen couldn't see Gauri like this because he always wanted Gauri as his daughter. He somehow convinced Shiv to marry gauri Kapoor.

Later on they learnt Shahid had brain tumour and was dead. They know knew the real reason why he left, felt sorry and guilty that they couldn't do anything.

It has been two weeks till the marriage of Shiv and gauri, their relations stayed the same. No one dared to make a move to make amends; it was called life for them.

It was 7.00 am, she had took shower and now came the hardest part to wake Shiv, what should she do? At one point he scolds her for disturbing him and on the other hand he gets angrier on her for not waking him up? This man was sure confusing. As she was about to wake Shiv up, his cell phone started ringing, she expected him to wake up but no. After much hesitation, she picked the call up of unknown number.. Before she can say anything, came up the response,

"Hey Honey, where were you yesterday? You left me alone in midnight but I can't say I didn't have good time, she giggled and continued, are you there Shiv?

Hurt yet shocked, "Who is this?" she managed to ask.

Before the other girl can reply, someone grabbed the phone from her. she looked up to see Shiv looking at her angrier, he cut the call and looked at her furiously. "How many times have I told you not to touch my things?"

She looked down and came up no response. "Are you deaf?" he said. She looked up at him as she was about to cry. "Oh Don't you start! I already had enough of your stupidnees". He shook his head in disgust and headed for toilet.

Gauri wiped her tears and went downstairs for break fast. At the dinning table, whole family was there. Gauri sat next to Shiv and felt uncomfortable. She knew Shiv hated her but what was her fault in it? That she agreed to marry him. She only did for her family's sake.

She saw him move his seat further away from her, she felt hurt. Nikhila noticed the tension and distance between made a mental note to sort something out for them. Palak and Maya who were sitting opposite the odd couple just smirked at the poor Gauri.

"Hmmm who made this lovely Paratha?" he said taking a bite. "OF course only our Gauri can make this delicious food" Nikhila stated. She then asked to Shiv to taste it, Shiv made a face, "Mom it's too oily. It'll give me a bad stomach ache for whole day!" She felt hurt but put a fake smile on her face.

Gauri lay on her bed crying, what she has done to deserve this heavy price of punishment. She was only asking for her parent's happiness. Just then she heard the knock on the door, she quickly walked towards the door wiping her tears away and putting a smile on her face.

Nikhila noticed her eyes red but decides not to ask as she knew Gauri will never say the truth. "Arrey, Mom, you should have called me?"

"Gauri I want you to go give Shiv this tiffin box, there is no one at home. I would have gone my self but I-"

"Don't worry Mom, I'll just do it. Just give me few minutes."

Nikhila smiled at her and left.

Gauri walked in Kapoor industries, looking at the office, she gasped. It was beautifully decorated with modern layout. It felt like a dream to be here. She asked someone to the directions of Shiv's office, they said it's at the top floor. She took the lift and arrived at the top floor.

The entrance of his office was in double glazed beautifully decorated glass door. She could see office interior was more beautiful compared to the rest of the building. She entered find no one at the seat, presuming that he may have gone to the toilet as it was close. Relaxing herself in the sofa, she looked around and was surprised to find it so clean.

The door opened came in Shiv, she stood up to speak. Her eyes fell on a girl who also came out of a toilet. The girl was wearing mini skirt with short low-back-less top. Her heart seems dead, stopped.

Shiv looked at Gauri surprised, anger came in. "Who's this?" The girl asked, hugging Shiv from behind. Shiv smirked, "Oh, she's my servant!"

Hurt, dejected and heart-broken, her eyes seems dead. She turned to leave. "Hang on a minute, Gauri" He excused the girl. "What are you doing here? Don't you have manners? Or Shall I say no one teach you?"

"I-I, Mom told me to give you the lunch and I put it in the table."

"You could have sent the driver. I don't want you to say anything about it to anyone. If you do, you don't want your poor dad getting heart attack?"

Gauri looked up at him shocked, "Please don't"

"Good. Do as what I say and leave now. Never come here again." Gauri turned to leave. Only if Shahid would have been alive she would have been living good married life as new wedded couples do. Here she is living the exact opposite.

Here is the first part of hidden feelings. Tell me how it was? Feel free to write anything or complain I won't feel bad! Please comment and I won't post another part until I get enough comments.

Coming up: "The Honey Moon"

Love

Sanya

that was amazing 👏
poor gauri 😭 she is soo hurt 😭
plz post the next part soon 😃