Kaho na Pyaar hai:-new ff

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Posted: 18 years ago
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dis happens 2 b my very 1st fanfic so if u guyz hate it do tell me but a little gently coz im a sentimental person😉😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Now tht Devikas truth has been revealed to Gauri, she decisdes to join Shiv in his office once again.She and Shiv have been getting along really well after tht incident
Early next morning Gauri wakes up takes a shower and comes out wearing a beautiful navy blue saari drying her wet hair..her eyes stray towards Shiv and she cant help but stare at him and suppresses a smile when she sees him sleeping like a child. She goes upto him to wake him up from his slumber but as soon as she approaches the bed she slip and falls heavily on top of him..Shiv wakes up with a start and stares into Gauri's eyes…they keep on staring for a while and gauri finally breaks off the contact and stands up blushing…

G:sorrie…who main phisal k gir gaye thi
S: it okay…acha yea batao k time kya hua hai
G:Jee 8 30 ho rahay hain..aap naha ktayar hoo jaein main aap ka nashta lagati hoon..

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Posted: 18 years ago
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sorie it was short but illcontinue in a while
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow that was a good start
keep up the good work 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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it was nice, a good start yes.

Continue soon😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Shiv goes to take a bath..he comes out in his towel and looks around for his clothes tht gauri may hav laid out…when he sees none he scratches his head nd opens his closet trying 2 dcide wht 2 wear

Shiv goes to take a bath..he comes out in his towel and looksaround forhis clothes tht gauri may hav laid out…when he sees none he scrathes his head nd opens hiscloset trying 2 dcide wht 2 wear
Gauri comes up looking for shiv wondering whts taking him so long long opening the door she says
G: shiv come down ur breakfasts getting cold…..
She stares around in wonder coz da room is a mess…clothes lying all around
G:wht is going on here
S:oh good ur here I cant decide wht 2 wear
G:wait..
She opens the closet and takes out a white suit nd a blue shirt..shiv grabs it nd goes out 2 change

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey this is good
v need more no of FF in KAA
continue the rest asap
n if possible make them bit longer 😊 😊 😊
😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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fantastic hunn..

the parts are romantic, and sweet!

so keep it up!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Shiv and gauri leave for the office….gauri is given a desk in shivs spacious office and starts working immediately….she gazes at shiv and admires his self confidence her thoughts wander off to the time when she first met shiv…thye timke they were kidnapped


G (to herself): what is wrong with me…why cant I stop thinking about shiv…he has always hated me but instead of hating him back I yearn to earn his respect….his love…oh god what am I thinking…shiv can never love me

Shiv looks up and sees gauri lost in her own world…he watches the changing expressions on her face…sorrow…joy and love and wonders who she is thinking of…shashank..the mere thought sends him into a jelous rage….

S:if ur done daydreaming wld u care to return to ur work

Gauri snaps out of her thought and looks at him guiltily…

G:oh sorrie I was miles away
S: I can c tht now if u wld b kind enuff to continue ur work

S: man I think the heat is getting to me…for a second I was jealous of shashank….i mean who cares if gauri still loves him but tht bought forth a sharp pain in his heart..he was rather surprised at him self
He had never felt this way before
This cant be shiv kapoor can't be in luv …specially not wid gauri…..he tried to concentrate on his work but found tht he was unable to do so nd finally he got up and left the room in frustration leaving behind a very surprised gauri


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Posted: 18 years ago
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sorrie tht he updates r so short but im constantly interuppted by sum1 especially my mum
Edited by hafsa17 - 18 years ago

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