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hi kavya......sorry for late comment...... i am kinda busy............shiv cool down...i know u dont trust shrey but u can trust ur wife na 😡

y did u made them all fight like that???
gauri should go n slap that shrey.... 😡 😡
wht was the that new year gift gauri was talking abt?? 😉 😊 😊
continue soon

that was wikid was her gift indicating that shes pregnant that wot bring more confusion

omg no plz let nothing happen bettween them

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww BABY!!!!

TOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD a piece of writing that one was!

the emotions that he undergoes... but when he talks to Ipsita, it is almost as if he does believes in Gauri... but when he talks to her, it is like he is blaming her.

doesn't he realise the pain that he is giving her...??? after all that transpired between them, she is willing to give him a second chance... and then he does this??? very bad...

Ipsy's behaviour though is expected... she looks like she loves doubting people... but I seriously want her to resolve her differences so that she gets out of Gauri's hair!

and Gauri... why has she gone to Shrey's house???? Is it to question him about his feelings? or to warn him off??? or is she seeking solace and needed a good friend with her?

but Kavya... I need to tell you something ra...
You write too good... I can almost imagine it happening in front of me ra... Gauri and Shiv's scene... Ipsy comforting shiv... Anupam comforting Gauri... Ipsy confronting Gauri and Anupam...
Gauri standing in front of shrey's house...
tooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo Gooooooooooooooood!!!!

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Keep up the good work baby! but don't leave till two weeks later for the next update!!!!
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i m new to this forum and i think this fanfic is the best. every weekend i make sure of reading it. it is simply awesome. keep up the good work.. ummm kavya i think yr name is, reading the other comments. u r a great writer. amazingly awesome. and this shrey.. 😡 😡 i hate him. reading this opposed to the show is wayyyyyyyyyyyyy better. this is be the way the story should actually be going but niways. i m glad that u took up the chance to show yr talent. toooo good. 👍🏼 🤗

man all this fighting is breaking my heart.....wat happened to the good old days when these 4 wer such close friends 😭 😭 ......great update btw....the shiv/gauri scene was very intense n well written

yeh ipshita 😡 😡 ,shrey 😡 😡 and now shiv 😡 😡 all have gone mad.....

excellent work....
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waitin for more........