create ur own story line 4 kaa!!

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hey guys dnt no hw dis story is gna go so i thought id make me own plzz u guys also create um 2...

gauri and shiv go on der honeymoon 2 shimla and shiv is very happy dat his plan is cumin togetha. Gauri is til unsure about y shiv is being so nyc but she doesnt bother. They reach der destination and shiv makes a fone call why'll gauri is in the bathroom he says 2 a guy u no wat 2 do, make sure u do me wrk properly. Gauri cums out and shiz says ' cum on lets go eat' gauri stops and says 2 shiv ' y u being lyk dis, u neva act lyk dis y da sudden change' Shiv says 'ur my responsibility and says lets go.

they finish dinner and gauri says she doesnt feel so shv tells her lets o 2 our room den, just den shiv gets a call and says 2 gauri u go i will be bak in half n hour gauri says ok. Shivs family cums 2 shimla as shiv clled dem 2 suprise gauri and da family go up 2 c gauri. Shiv as a smirk on his face and seems very happy da family open da door and are shoked!!! Der dy c a guy in bed wiv gauri just den gauri gets up and sees da guy nxt 2 her and is shoked shiv cums inside andsays 2 gauri 'hw cud u afta all i was doin 4 u u did dis 2 me he says 2 her go get out of here and out of me life''. All da family are shoked and asked gauri wat happened but she herself doesnt remember anyfin and da family are all shoked. Den dey c alcohol bottles and shiv tells gauri get out and da rest of da family sitin silence. Gauri is peadin 2 every 1 dat she hasnt done anyfin but no 1 listens 2 her and shiv grabs her n tels her 2 go. Shivs mum and grandma say 2 shiv no gauri is nt like dat she can neva do dis just den maya n palak say y do u always stik up 4 her u saw every fin wiv ur own eyes.

Gauri leaves and shiv goes 2 meet sum 1 and its da guy hu was wiv gauri. He says 2 him thanx buddy u did a great job da pill which i put in gauris drink worked perfectly and was on tym. His freind says 2 shiv 'wel wat r freinds for nw she is out of ur life' dey both laugh histerically and der is gauri listenin 2 everyfin. She breaks dwn in tears andjust den Hiten (soz dnt no his name in dis drama) cums and says dnt wry u will get justice. He takes gauri 2 shivs house and gauri says no plz i cnt go bak der. He drags her in and she is wearin a whit sari. she cums in and shiz gets angry. He says wat r u doin ere he insults her even mr and den gauri goes 2 him and slaps him. She says 2 him 'u a disgrace ur nt worthy of been called a mard, ur dads kismat is so bad dat he has gt a son like u'. she insults him and all da family are shoked.

palak cums and is gna slap gauri but gauri grabs her hand. Palak says get out wat do u wnt mr money. Hiten cums froward and says 2 da family she is rite all r shoked den hiten plays a video and it is of shivs and his freinds convorstaion. All da family r shoked and cry. Den shivs mum slaps him again and again and says wat did i di dat was so bad dat i gt a son like u...

nikhila says 2 gauri u will stay shiv will go and gauri says no. She says i cannot stay here any longer. Shivs grandama says u r my daugther u cnt leae. Gauri say no i have 2 go if u realy say im ur daughter de let me go pz dnt try 2 stop me all plead and try stop gauri but she says i will always da da daughter of dis house but i cud neva be da bahu in dis house. Shiv is der wiv guilt all over his face and stares at gauri as she is goin. Shivs mum pleads wiv gauri and gauris says 2 her' i cannot suffer any mr plzz giv me my freedom i dnt want 2 suffer any mr' dey let her go and hiten goes wiv her and all the family are der crying.

mahen is on buissness trip b 4 any 1 asks.

i will carry on later.....

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Please do! It is very inteseting!!

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