Moment of Truth...

Ruthless, he is not, for the fear in her voice, he senses...
Ill treat her, he wishes not, for her fault , it is not...
Understand he does, her fear, her respect for him...
Comfort her , he does, with soothing words...
In a moment of truth, eyes bare his soul...
Bonded in a relation unwillingly, he seeks freedom...
Unaware , what destiny beholds,
He seeks freedom, from the deceiving perception of reality....
Belying the evident, hushed stays his inner voice...

- An attempt to pen the underlying feelings of Shiv for Gauri, based on the scene of Gauri's confession to Shiv...

(Copyright: Sarita Chitrapu. All Rights Protected) - For lines penned above..

👏 u r really talented yaar......i suggest tht u join the balaji camp,tht way they will stop picking up songs from movies

Brilliant !!!!!!
ur an excellent writer... 👏

wow! i must say...its really nice... 👏

u have a great talent i must say...keep it up!...

wow!That's really nice yaar! 👏 👏 👏

Aww those word really match the situation of GS - very appropriate - you write very well Sareeta

i agree with preeti_saarrthi..u really shud join teh balaji camp...we will love it even moreeee 😆 😆

are u a writer by profession???

that was really wonderful..yet again!! 👏

its really nice di
u have captured shiv's feelings so well.......
👏

Originally posted by: preeti_saarrthi

👏 u r really talented yaar......i suggest tht u join the balaji camp,tht way they will stop picking up songs from movies

Thanks a lot yaar!!! Balaji aur main , naa baba.. mere dimaag ke bahar hai , itne twists and turns... Ekta maayi , mere ko kabhi na hire karegi!! aur main apne kaam se khush hoon yaar!! 😆

Originally posted by: hamsee

Brilliant !!!!!!
ur an excellent writer... 👏

Awww, Thank you so much !!! I am really humbled... I bow down...😊