FF: tu pyar hai Part 31!!! pg. 156 - Page 69

Originally posted by: desi chic

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Omg Navs.... This one was "Da BOMB" yaar!!

... WHOA ....👏👏👏

The story took a 360 degree turn!! 😲

Shiv's confession... Wah wah!! Mindblowing yaar... too good... Kya adaa... kya style hai... the way he takes control of the scene... Gauri... and me of course!😳 Well it was the brilliant writing which had me in a trance I didn't want to break!!😉

Shiv could never hurt his Gauri! and that Shashank... 😡😡 How dare he?!!!😡 Go Shiv, you tell that pighead his place... tell him not to mess with your Gauri... How dare he try and slap Gauri?! Aurat pe haath utatah hai?!🤢 ... God, I love Shiv...😳😳 (blushathons raging😉)

You had the house on fire with Shiv babe dressed so suave... Haila... *FAINTS*😳😳 I'm blushing while fainting😃

... and she hugs him... omg... what an ending...

Ok, so it better not stop there eh?! I want more!!

And what's this, Shina is "MEANIE"?!!😕 Shina, you wrote all this with Navs... "What?!" Omg....🤗 You rock guys!! Simply rock!! ... and Jigna, you're here too?! Wowers... mere KS ke yaar aye hai le kar bahar!! 🤗

Navs and "MEANIE" (😉)... this is for you...

🤗

Cheers,

dc

Hahah DC, you just found out i was meanie

Thanks for liking the part!!!!! and kya karoon had to make shivy all cute n romantic warna navs mujhe mar dalti.😆

I am glad you liked it!!!!!!!!

awww i am gonna miss reading your commentos.

Thanks for the lovely comments🤗

Shina aka Meanie

Shina, "Har Dil Ki Dharkan... Jai Pia aur Barnali"?!!!! I think my heart just stopped "dharaking" 😕

dc

Originally posted by: desi chic

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Shina... you left me breathless yaar... jaan nikaal kar chodgi yaar... problem nahi hai koi, sirf tohra sa jhatka laga tah... 😉 But it felt good.... "Kasamh Se"😉

Neetu

Neetu jab main likhon toh aisa hi haal hota hai. jhakta agar nahi diya toh kya faida likhne main???

lekin yaar agar ye part ne tumhari jaan nikaldi, toh ab next part i gotta make it suspense filled warna pata nahi tumhara kya hojayega.😆

Shina

Originally posted by: desi chic

Shina, "Har Dil Ki Dharkan... Jai Pia aur Barnali"?!!!! I think my heart just stopped "dharaking" 😕

dc

hahhahah, you just noticed my siggy???

but come on Jai pia aur barnali sab ke dil ki dharkan hai, aur mere fav characters.😳

i don't know what you will think of the next one i have in mind, tumhe dil ki bimari hojayegi. 😆

Shina

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Originally posted by: lonely14

Hahah DC, you just found out i was meanie

Thanks for liking the part!!!!! and kya karoon had to make shivy all cute n romantic warna navs mujhe mar dalti.😆

I am glad you liked it!!!!!!!!

awww i am gonna miss reading your commentos.

Thanks for the lovely comments🤗

Shina aka Meanie

😆😆 I guess I'm kinda slow😕😆

Don't worry... mujhe Navs par kabu karna aata hai... just set a pic of SIR infront of her and shes gone... all gussa gone... but good that she made you scared of her... It resulted in a fab update!!!👏 Why are you not continuing?...

dc

Originally posted by: desi chic

😆😆 I guess I'm kinda slow😕😆

Don't worry... mujhe Navs par kabu karna aata hai... just set a pic of SIR infront of her and shes gone... all gussa gone... but good that she made you scared of her... It resulted in a fab update!!!👏 Why are you not continuing?...

dc

hahah it's all good.

yaar mujhe dar nahi lagta, but you know navs she was on the edge of her seat. i know her and SIR.

well see she needed my help only till the confession, so next part will be the last one i help her with, and then you will get navs ff back with no evilness from my side.😳

Shina

Originally posted by: lonely14

Neetu jab main likhon toh aisa hi haal hota hai. jhakta agar nahi diya toh kya faida likhne main???

lekin yaar agar ye part ne tumhari jaan nikaldi, toh ab next part i gotta make it suspense filled warna pata nahi tumhara kya hojayega.😆

Shina

Shina,

So true... After reading this, I'm getting blush-a-thons, fainting episodes, dieing of suspense... and now you're creaing more suspense... sach mein, mera kuch nahin ho sakta!! I'm done...

dc

Originally posted by: lonely14

hahhahah, you just noticed my siggy???

but come on Jai pia aur barnali sab ke dil ki dharkan hai, aur mere fav characters.😳

i don't know what you will think of the next one i have in mind, tumhe dil ki bimari hojayegi. 😆

Shina

meine kaha na, I'm thodi slow aaj kal?😆 Lol... ye exams meri saari intelligence kah ja rahe hai!! I just had one yesterday and three more to go!🤢

Well I know that you're planning to be my sautan in the case of JW😳 and you sympathize with the "bheekmaangi" Pia... but Barnali?...😕 Yaar, to be honest I ain't suprised but phir bhi, jhatka laga... zara sa😉

Oh God... should I prepare myself?... My heart is already racing like a mad horse thinking about whats cooking in that mind of yours😕 Please, mujhpe rehm kaaho yaar!😆

dc

Originally posted by: lonely14

hahah it's all good.

yaar mujhe dar nahi lagta, but you know navs she was on the edge of her seat. i know her and SIR.

well see she needed my help only till the confession, so next part will be the last one i help her with, and then you will get navs ff back with no evilness from my side.😳

Shina

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I know yaar... tumhe dar nahin lagta... tum toh auron ko darate ho... "Jai, Pia aur Branali..."😕😆

Don't worry, I was too on the edge of my seat... two secs more and I would have landed flat on my face! 😉😆

No more evilness... sach boloon, you're evilness had my eyes shot wide open... ready to read the next... but Navs "sweet scenes" are very welcome😳 ... Loved your style though... Shukriya for such wonderful suspense and jhatkas!😉

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: desi chic

Shina,

So true... After reading this, I'm getting blush-a-thons, fainting episodes, dieing of suspense... and now you're creaing more suspense... sach mein, mera kuch nahin ho sakta!! I'm done...

dc

Neetu,

sach main tumhara kuch nahin ho sakta. Shiv and gauri's love story just started, i wonder what will happen to you when navs coughs and moons come. I say starting now, whenever you read navs update have some water with you, and read ALONE. lol.

Shina