FF: tu pyar hai Part 31!!! pg. 156 - Page 66

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: ash9

hw come page no is different??????
today i read 1 part in pg 90....but nw im in pg 75

good pt. i have NO idea.. the pages r still confusing me
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: nehagupta_9

Gr8 Part!!! Cont soon... 😊

thanx hun.. will continue in a bit
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Posted: 18 years ago
i wonder wen ull post...im so eager
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Posted: 18 years ago
y does it somtimes show 90 pages....n sometimes only 75 as d las page? im so confused...i cnt keep track of d fanfic....

d last part i saw was wen gauri gets kidnapped..n its shiv who kidnaps her, n he tells her go ahead...walk outside 4 fresh air....u cnt escape from MY island!!

n now i dnt no if iv missed anypart after dat....hav i?
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: rahena

i wonder wen ull post...im so eager

hun im writing it right now.. half way done😉
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: rahena

y does it somtimes show 90 pages....n sometimes only 75 as d las page? im so confused...i cnt keep track of d fanfic....

d last part i saw was wen gauri gets kidnapped..n its shiv who kidnaps her, n he tells her go ahead...walk outside 4 fresh air....u cnt escape from MY island!!

n now i dnt no if iv missed anypart after dat....hav i?

ye i don't know.. the IF pages r confusing.. at the moment for some odd reason.. no that's the LAST part.. and d last sentence.. u can't escape from my island.. working on the nxt part right now
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: rahena

phew....waiting..pls soon yaar

im writing.. give me half an hour max😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
thank you so much guyz.. hope u enjoy part 22 😳

*~*~*PART 22*~*~*



Shiv: Gauri run whereever you want.. but you can't escape... this is MY island and there is no way you can get out of here... Just go out to get some fresh air and you have to be back
A shiver runs through gauri's body as she hears shiv say those words. She could not believe her fate, but amidst all this hatred somewhere in her heart she was content about something. Gauri steps outside closing the door behind her, she doesn't know where to go, as it's all dark there, she can't see anything, so she just stands on the porch. She knows shiv was right, she has to go back in that house.

As gauri is standing on the porch, she hears a sound from inside the house, first she is scared but later on just ignores it thinking it must be shiv doing something stupid as usual.After 20 minutes, gauri decides to go back inside and just face whatever is next. Life couldn't get any worse than this, so she might as well go see what shiv is upto now, and ask him the reason behind this.

She opens the door, now her strange feeling is back, she knows that there is more to it. As soon as she steps her foot inside the house, a spotlight goes on her, and as she keeps on walking, the spotlight follows her. As she walks, suddenly the music plays... its playing the song by mariah carey "we belong together" she is rooted to the spot, listening to the lyrics, somehow she felt that those were shiv's feelings.

I didn't mean it
When I said I didn't love you so
I should have held on tight
I never should've let you go
I did nothing
I was stupid
I was foolish
I was lying to myself
I could not fathom that I would ever
Be without your love
Never imagined I'd be
Sitting here beside myself

Cause I didn't know you
Cause I didn't know me
But I thought I knew everything
I never felt
The feeling that I'm feeling now
Now that I don't
Hear your voice
Or have your touch and kiss your lips
Cause I don't have a choice
Oh what I wouldn't give
To have you lying by my side
Right here
Cause baby..

(We belong together)
When you left
I lost a part of me
It's still so hard to believe
(Come back, come back)
Come back baby please
Cause we belong together


Gauri cannot control her emotions, for the first time in her life, she felt like she will get shiv's love, just listening to we belong together, she started believing that shiv and gauri do belong together. As gauri is just rooted to the spot, another spotlight goes on, and she is just awed by looking at shiv. Dressed in all black, with a nice black versace suit, the black shirt inside with the top buttons undone, looking dashing as ever with his unshaven(he hasn't shaved in 2 days) look. (**FAINTS**) Right then shiv is no less than a greek god, and gauri just couldn't help but fall in love with him all over.

Shiv with a cheshire cat grin on his face, making gauri blush. With every step he takes, gauri's heart is beating faster, even with all that, she knew this is nothing but good. Shiv is just happy that the moment is finally here, where no pretenses or anything, just him and gauri. If he could, he would stop time and just keep looking at gauri, but he has to set everything right, before he could anything. With a new found determination he makes his way towards gauri.

Shiv stops right in front of gauri, with only a 2-inch space in between them, making gauri even more nervous. At that point, gauri forgot everything and all she knew was that THEIR love is going to blossom, and now happiness isn't far away.Before gauri can say anything, shiv starts speaking.. a little nervous be he starts

Shiv: Gauri, i am sure you are wondering about all this, and what is going on, and today without any interferences i am going to tell you EVERYTHING..and gauri please don't say anything till i am done talking gives her a very cute smile, making gauri melt
Shiv: Gauri ever since the first time i saw you, i felt a connection between us, i wanted you to be mine and ONLY mine.
gauri looks at him shocked/happy
Shiv: But when i found out you were engaged to shashank, i don't know what happened to me, i wanted to kill him that instant. Whenever i saw you guys together i would burn with jealousy, i could not stand seeing you with ANYONE. I always felt happy whenever you were with me, the feelings in me grew even stronger, and that just made me want you. At that time i thought it was only a physical attraction, which i will get over with soon. But destiny had decided something else.
gauri continues to listen to him quietly as shiv goes on

Shiv: The more i saw you and was with you, the more i started liking you and knew it wasn't just physical attraction. I don't even know when i fell in love with you, all i know is that without you, i just feel lost. It's not like i can't live without you, i can, but i don't want to. Life without you is living without oxygen. When you gifted me the watch i was the happiest person, but then you mentioned shashank, and i just couldn't stand it. When i look at that watch, shashank's face came and it just mocked me. and at the party when you were dancing with shashank, and was just happy with him, i couldn't take it.

Shiv: When you said you didn't love shashank, somewhere i knew that you had feelings for me, but i had to make sure. That's why i had to do the act infront of shashank, and i thought that you would confess your feelings then, but you kissed(pain visible in his voice) him, and agreed to marry him. I was completely shattered from inside, even though my mind said that you can never be mine, but my heart failed to agree with it.

And when i came to you that night you confessed your feelings, that just made the happiest man alive, but i knew that you wouldn't be with me, your self-respect wouldn't let you just ditch shashank. so i had to make a plan with him. You have no idea how much it hurt me when i pretended to hate you. Seeing you in pain was like dying every moment.I thought that shashank after finding out the truth the same night he will just break off the engagement but i didn't know that jerk would hurt you so much. and when he was raising a hand on you, that was it, i couldn't take it anymore.

I would've killed him if pandit ji didn't stop us. As for the kidnapping plan, i had planned the night before when i thought that shashank would go ahead and marry you. I knew no one would be happy if you had married him, and i just wanted to bring you here at any cost. Gauri trust me, i never wanted to hurt you. If anything happens to you, it will hurt me 100 times more. Gauri i love you so much that i won't ever let any pain even come close to you.

I know it's hard for you to believe everything, but trust me, i did all this for you, i just wanted to give our love a chance. I won't be able to live without you. I LOVE YOU GAURI 😳


Gauri is just too overwhelmed with emotions, she can't believe that this is happening to her. The love she thought she lost, is right here. Even if she wanted to just walk away from him, she couldn't because she knew he was saying the truth. She felt like the luckiest girl alive. Both of them stand there, looking at each other, shiv is waiting for an answer, while gauri is just happy. Shiv was about to say something, but before he could, gauri just hugs him.

Both of them stand there, now the spotlights are gone, it's just the moonlight that's shining on them. It felt like they were descended from heaven just for each other and are the cutest couple.. with the background song playing.

Dekha ek khwaab to yeh silsile hue
Door tak nigahon mein hain gul khile hue
Yeh gila hai aapki nigahon se
Phool bhi ho darmiyaan to faasle hue

Dekha ek khwaab...Meri saanson mein basi khushboo teri
Yeh tere pyaar ki hai jadugari
Teri aawaz hai havaaon mein
Pyar ka rang hai phizaaon
Dhadkanon mein tere geet hain mile hue
Kya kahun ke sharm se hain lub sile hue
Dekha ek khwaab...

Mera dil hai teri panaahon
Aa chhupa loon tujhe maein baahon mein
Teri tasveer hai nigaahon mein
Door tak roshni hai raahon mein
Kal agar na roshni ke kaafile hue
Pyar ke hazaar deep hain jale hue
Dekha ek khwaab...



hope u guyz enjoyed 😳 😳 😳 this is all my meanie's doing - her evilness.. is still there 😕 but u know 😆 😆 😆 everyone's a softie on the inside.. no matter wat😉




Hey guys, Well as navs call me, i am your "meanie", well all i had to say was i really had fun reading your comments on the parts i helped with. You guys are wonderful. I hope you like today's part as well, and you will know how much the name "meanie" actually does justice to me. hehe. While it lasted i really had fun, you guys are just wonderful, and navs is lucky to have you guys read her ff. Thanks for enjoying it. and i am really sorry for the torture i made you guys go through, it was necessary. Hope you like this one. Tomorrow is going to be the last one, i will be doing, so thank you all for having patience.

Take care, Shina aka meanie 😳

Edited by nyzbabigyal - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
Shinnie and romantic?!!?!?1
has the world turned upside down????
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: nyzbabigyal


Hey guys, Well as navs call me, i am your "meanie", well all i had to say was i really had fun reading your comments on the parts i helped with. thanx fo helping me.. u know i'd be lost wit out u 😳You guys are wonderful. yes u guyz r ... I hope you like today's part as well, and you will know how much the name "meanie" actually does justice to me. hehe. oh plzzzzzzzz ur still a MEANIE to me😆 While it lasted i really had fun, you guys are just wonderful, and navs is lucky to have you guys read her ff. yes i am.. so thank you to everyone fo reading my ff.. means a lot to me Thanks for enjoying it. and i am really sorry for the torture i made you guys go through, it was necessary. see wat i mean??? MEANIE!!!!!!! Hope you like this one. Tomorrow is going to be the last one, i will be doing, so thank you all for having patience. last one???? u know im gonna im u.. when im lost.. like meanie i need help😆

Take care, Shina aka meanie 😳

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