FF:Anjaane Se Woh-ch14pg37/conclude! - Page 2

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Thanks a lot 4 starting a new ff.

Shiv: "Money can do anything anupam..and i have enough of it." Anupam carried on trying "It can't buy happiness shiv"

So meaningful.

Is that lady Gauri?Then i'm very happy

Originally posted by: sweet scorpio

its really good 2 see that u have started a new ff!!!=)))

gr8 start!

wonder who that girl is???

continue soon!

thnx 4 the pm!

Originally posted by: Deizy

heeloo:)

wow reading a shiv gauri ff after long time!

awesome:)

thanks o much for the pm..keep the good work

Originally posted by: swetha10

Hey Jagruti gud to hve u back with a new ff.. wow sounds really interesting.. thakur Mahen sounds different... whoz tht girl... do continue soon n thanx a ton for the pm..

Originally posted by: pria4ever

finally Jagruti Thanks for this FF!!!!😃

Luved the title...as mysterious as ur previous ff's...

Shiv😳😳😳...luved his character as always....just like a coconut😉,hard outside, but soft within...now he is money n power minded...waiting eagerly for him to fall in luv with his lady in red😳...even i find it difficult is perceiving Shiv as a thakur,so i don't blame him😉😆...his sarcarsm towards his secretary is cool😆😆....poor thing she must be petrified of Shiv big time😉...

Anupam😳...gosh i guess he will be the connecting link to SG in this story as well😊...a true friend to Shiv, luved the way u introduced his char....

Mahen...well...i guess Thakur Mahen Kapoor😃...interesting char to watch out...

Palak...ummm...seems to be a spoilt brat...no points for guessing who is responsible for this...Shivvy😉....

now...the lady in red...Shiv doesn't acknowledge her,but is aware of her presence...Detective Anupam don ur detective hat, n unfold this mystery which Shiv maybe hiding...is she his wife married out of force or thakur ki bachpan ka vaada😃...really curioous to know it...

once again great work👏👏👏, eagerly awaiting ur next update...hope its soon😃...

Pria

You took away my words........ I felt exactly the same way after reading the Part.....
This is the first time I don't have anything different to say.... and I have the same comment as someone else...... thank you ever so much i think your too kind with your words!

I know, One thing that I can write....

Please, Give us another Update soon.... Please.... will try my best asap😊

The part was written in great detail...I could imagine.... Shiv Standing in his room... His secretary coming into the room... her relief when shiv exited without any more trashing....
Shiv coming into the house..... A girl in red taking his jacket off.....
Shiv sitting with Mahen and playing chess and having chat...
Shiv half turned look ... like looking from the corner of his eye... when the girl enters.....
Anupam entering..... the takur house and Mahen smile on seeing Anupam.....
Anupam falling down....due to wet floor..... 😆

I could imagine all....

aw thank you so much.. its really nice to hear that from a reader because when i was writing this ff i actually was thinking that ive not discribed it enough. i had a vision in my mind and didnt know if i was painting it well enough for you guys to see it too. as for questions well i came on i.f with this deterimination that i would reveal any of my ff secrets so sorry you will have to wait till my next update..😉 but i will answer you questions in smiley's:

Ok, now Questions???

1. Is the girl Ipshita? or Gauri?😉 hah the all mightly question..next chapter

2. Is Shiv hurt about love because Gauri doesnot want to stay with him....and stay with mahen in village? 😳 hummmm nice idea but..

3. If the girl is ipshita...? When is Gauri entering.... the scene..? 🤔

4. Is Shiv hurt by love.... because ipshita or someone else betrayed him....?? and he doesnot want to acknowledge the lady in Red .... "Gauri" as his wife... 😳because of that....???😉

5. Shiv.... Had promised someone.... that he will takecare of this "lady in red" and he did that too... but something happened that he doesnot anymore...??? What happened....???😲
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6. Anupam.... Doesnot know about the girl.....??? Shiv is hiding something...??? i can confirm this one shiv is hiding it from anupam..

7. Mahen can't seem to get Shiv to accept his responsibility..??? Is he talking about the "lady in Red" ??? or Is he talking about just the Heritage...?? that line in the ff was thrown in to make you think so i think its worked...😆 going to leave you hanging on this one..

8. Shiv promised some one to take care of "Lady in Red" and he was doing that...but then he started falling for her...??? but because of his previous betrayal in love.... he doesnot want to go any further...??? But he cannot seem to vanish her from his thoughts...??? and thats the reason...he has started to not acknowledge her presence...??? 😛 i like it!!
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Ohh... too many questions jagrutid..... I hope I am not spilling any thing here.... But my mind will not rest in peace.... I think at least for the next 6 to 7 parts..... no you know im not thinking of dragging these question i think you will find all your answers in the next chapter..thank you ever so much for your words..your too kind..

One word more....

"Perfecto..." "excelente.."

Bunny.

i will try to update soon and i also have still kept in mind that theres a pm that i need to send your way..will do it soon as possible.. thanks again

Originally posted by: adi_gupta

sorry for the delay
but will add my comment soon
pm me when ever you update

Originally posted by: karna91

plz continue soon....