Pyaar Ka Sauda - Pa1 Pg 1 - 01/08/09

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Staring: Amit Tandon, Iqbal Khan, Pallavi Subhash, Hiten Tejwani, Karan Singh Grover, Sumeet Sachdev and Jaya Bhattacharya

"Intro"
After Gauri's parent's death she moved in with her Mom's friend Priya's (Jaya Bhattacharya) place with her younger brother Armaan (Karan Singh Grover) and her older brother Vishal (Sumeet Sachdev). Gauri (Pallavi Subhash) is the protagonist. Also her character is more resemble to Lord Krishna and his belief of thinking about other people first than yourself. A simple, honest, principled girl; everything is going fine in her life until she meet Priya auntie's son Sharad (Amit Tandon).
Sharad's entry in Gauri's life changed everything, in-fact she started to believe in love and started to live in the word love. Everything was fine in her life until Priya auntie found out about her relationship with her son and that's where relationships started falling apart in her life.
Priya was also upset after finding out that her son is in love with Gauri who is someone else's amanat in their house. She doesn't know how to break the news to her son who is deeply in love with Gauri even Gauri loves him more than anything in her life.
Priya didn't want to hurt her she loved the most in her life after her husband's death but she had no choice in blackmailing Gauri to leave her son's life and unfortunately she agreed to leave Sharad's life by getting married to Shiv Kapoor who's amanat she is (Iqbal Khan). Also Shiv is Priya's sister's son.
What does Gauri's life held for her after she get's married to Shiv Kapoor? Will Gauri stand up for her astitva against the society of today's culture?

Thank you in advance!

😛

Regards,
Tia

(PS: Both of my fan-fictions will be continued tomorrow after I return from the airport after dropping my grandmother).

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Posted: 16 years ago
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intrestinggg tia gr888 concept so they r married i know slowly n gradually they will fall lol update asap n ur other ff also hehehe
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Posted: 16 years ago
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heyy tia!
FABULOUS!!!!
ur startin another 1?? kool
yaar start sum in da fan-fiction forum also naa!!??!!
i hope shiv nd gauri fall in luv ASAP...dont make dem b separate fr long plzz
waitin fr da parts....!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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really interesting concept 😊
plz cont soon

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: luv_pavi

intrestinggg tia gr888 concept so they r married i know slowly n gradually they will fall lol update asap n ur other ff also hehehe

saba



Thanks a million
Regards,
Tia


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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Reeno!!!

heyy tia!

FABULOUS!!!!
ur startin another 1?? kool
yaar start sum in da fan-fiction forum also naa!!??!!
i hope shiv nd gauri fall in luv ASAP...dont make dem b separate fr long plzz
waitin fr da parts....!!!!



Yep! And thank you so much...

Regards,
Tia
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: mintfresh

really interesting concept 😊
plz cont soon



Thanks yaar

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Tia
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part One - Sharad leaves his house & Shiv Gauri gets married

Scene One

Sharad was totally shattered to hear that Gauri agreed to get married to someone else than him. He couldn't watch his life get married to someone else so he leaves from his own house by telling Gauri that he will always love her but never understand why she agreed to get married to someone else when she loves him madly from sola baras ki bali umar ko.
Sharad didn't notice that Gauri was holding back her tears from him. Sharad walks out of her room and she breaks down in-front of her parent's photo.
In the background we can hear - Solah Baras Kii Baalii Umar Ko Salaam
Pyaar Terii Pahalii Nazar Ko Salaam...
Duniyaa Me.N Sab Se Pahale Jisane Ye Dil Diyaa
Duniyaa Ke Sabase Pahale Dilabar Ko Salaam
Dil Se Nikalane Vaale Raste Kaa Shukriyaa
Dil Tak Pahu.Nchane Vaalii Dagar Ko Salaam
Pyaar Terii Pahalii Nazar Ko Salaam

Gauri burns all the photographs she have of Sharad in her room but she can not burn all those memories in her heart of him or his picture in her heart.

Gauri cries out her pain in her room while Sharad takes blessing from his mother and looks at Gauri's room before leaving his house for good because he is leaving behind all his memories of her in the house. But even Sharad can not erasers all the memories of her in his heart.

Background music - Jis Me.N Javaan Ho Kar, Badanaam Ham Hue
Us Shahar, Us Galii, Us Ghar Ko Salaam
Jisane Hame.N Milaaye, Jisane Judaa Kiyaa
Us Vaqt, Us Gha.Dii, Us Pahar Ko Salaam
Pyaar Terii Pahalii Nazar Ko Salaam


Sharad's mother brings Gauri's wedding dress into her room and tells her to get dress because her wedding is today instead of next week.
Gauri stares at her auntie than gets up and says "as you wish Priya auntie". And Gauri walks into the bathroom with her wedding dress while tears drop non-stop down her face.
Scene Two
Sharad drives all the places he spends with Gauri while his heart cried to hold her in his arms like the olden days.
Sharad stops his jeep and walks on the beach and remembers how he forced Gauri to join him in the water. At first she made weird faces but at the end she enjoyed with him.
Background music - Milate Rahe Yahaa.N Ham, Ye Hai Yahaa.N Likhaa
Us Likhaavat Kii Je-Ro-Jabar (?) Ko Salaam
Saahil Ke Ret Pe Jo Laharaa Uthaa Ye Dil
Saagar Me.N Uthane Vaalii Har Lahar Ko Salaam
Yuu.N Mast Gaharii Gaharii Aa.Nkho.N Kii Jhiil Me.N
Jisane Hame.N Duboyaa Us Bha.Nvar Ko Salaam
Ghuu.Nghat Ko Chho.D Ke Jo, Sar Se Sarak Gayii
Aisii Nigo.Dii Bhaalii Chunar Ko Salaam
Ulfat Ke Dushmano.N Ne Koshish Hazaar Kii
Phir Bhii Nahi.N Jhukii Jo, Us Nazar Ko Salaaam
Tears came out of Sharad's eyes but landed on Gauri's cheek. Gauri wiped her tears even though her eyes can reveal everything that she was crying for past seven hours because of her red eyes since the day she agreed to get married to Shiv Kapoor whose amanat she is.
Priya comes to get Gauri from her room because they are calling her down for the reminding wedding rituals. Priya notice the burn photos of her son but held back her pain because she is doing what she was told before Gauri's parent's died in a terrible car accident.
Gauri touches Priya's feet before leaving with her toward her new destination.
Scene Three

Sharad breaks down at the spot where he confessed his feelings to Gauri and salutes the place.
Background Music - Pyaar Terii Pahalii Nazar Ko Salaam
Shiv and Gauri begin their saath phere... Gauri in-front of Shiv and Shiv is behind her.



During the pheres, Sharad goes walking into the seashore without thinking about anything except for Gauri is calling him into the water for help.
After the pheres Gauri and Shiv sit down in their spot. Pundit gives Shiv a try full of kumkum meaning sindoor to put on Gauri's forehead.
Shiv takes a pinch out of the tray and lifts it toward Gauri's forehead but stops halfway when he see's his ex-girlfriend standing their with her husband. But tears were coming down her face and Shiv knew that Mahi still loves him so he winks at her before filling Gauri's forehead.



Sharad keeps on walking into the water and Gauri feels like something she loves is in trouble. Shiv takes the mangalsutra in his hand and ties it around Gauri's neck before his ex-girlfriend Mahi leaves from that place with non-stop tears coming down her face.



Water gets deeper and deeper but Sharad does not stop at all. Gauri feels like some is suffocating her. Gauri is trying to take deep breathe but her suffocating doesn't stop. Without taking blessing from Shiv's family or her auntie she runs into Sharad's room instead of her room.
Scene Four
"I'll go and check what's wrong with Gauri..." Priya begins to explain her sister's family.
Gauri sat in Sharad's look and looked at his pictures while mumbling something to herself; Priya looks in Gauri's room but does not find her their so she check's her son's room and finds her there hugging Sharad's shirt.
Priya couldn't take it anymore and snatches Sharad's shirt out of Gauri's hands and says "you are married to my sister's son Shiv. And now you don't have any rights on Sharad or his belongings. Gauri I am very disappointed that you made me feel a-shame in-front of my sister's family."
For awhile Gauri re-thought about her action before coming into Sharad's room. Meanwhile everyone waits for Priya to bring Gauri back so they can take their leave.
Priya shouts a-little more to Gauri than Gauri says something like this "I didn't mean to make you feel a-shame in-front of your sister's family but I felt like that someone is calling me for help. I don't know why but I feel like Sharad is in trouble?"
Priya also felt like the same as Gauri but brushed her thoughts out of her mind and takes Gauri down the stairs where everyone is waiting for them.

***
Regards,
Tia




Edited by Shagun-Ki-Raat - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow!!!
amazing!!
deyre married?? gr88
plz yaar dont show soo much luv of sharad nd gauri......den how will shiv n gauri fall in lv?? lolzz
well plz show very cute scenes b/w shiv nd gauri
fab part
cont sooon!!!
luv
reeno
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nd da way u did it wid da pix......FANTASTIC!! keep it up
updt asap!!

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