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I think it is high time the track changes to the one in which Gauri leaves Sam and amke him realise by himself.
I feel it is too damn boring to see Kamyas harkath and our Sam nodding to her. My observations are here
1. Sam will not be bothered about Gauri so far as she is in front of him
2. I feel that Kamya's true colours will be out once she is made to think that Gauri has withdrawn ans our Sam will open his eyes
So my way of new track would be like this guys
1. Kamya's mom will announce the engagement of Sam and kamya without the permission of Sam which should annoy him but will keep quiet.
2. Gauri knowing this should declare that inspite of her best efforts she could not get him back and doesnt want to force him further as till then she has endured everything but the very truth that he got engaged even before their divorce has broken her heart . She will futher declare that she doesnt want to take any happiness of Sam, hence is leaving her kids and family with him only. Inspite of Dadu and kids stopping her she will leave.
3. Sam who is not ready for this will be taken back so to cover up he will say- Dekho she is waiting for this day to go to Prateek.
4. She would go women's hostel.
5. Sam will over hear Dadu speaking to Gauri is staying in Hostel and not in Prateek's palce. Dadu is worried over her health which will make sam think once.
6. Then there will be slowly the unfolding of the truth of Kamya not directly. Kids will not have anything to eat and he will come to know that it was Gauri only who was tolling all through. Still he is undeterred. He gets to cooking and Kamya says ' Sam I cant cook nor I want U to cook - why dont we keep a cook.
7. Next phase would be she would talk harshly to Dadu to go to oldage home hich will be overheard by Dadu
8. Then one day Kamya plans to make Sam come to her home by making the neighbour to ask them to vacate the house as the rent is not paid.
9. At the time when they will be about to go then an Money draft comes on Sam's name which is the matured amount of savings done by Gauri. There will be FB of Gauri saving chillar and telling Sam that one day that only will help them. So that saves them from leaving the house.
10. Kamya is very furious with this. She speaks to her mom about this and Sam who has come back to take keys overhears that Kamya has bought the house.
11. Sam doesnt tell Kamya he knows all of this and one day In one of the incidents he even sees Kamya drinking and talking to her friends about getting what she wishes in life.
12. One day he gets hurt and goes for badage to hospital- There he sees Gauri with full tummy.
13. Tears roll down and then Prateek comes and he gets his anger back.
14. A scanning will be done and she will be talking to prateek " Iam happy Prateek that even if Samar is not with me his kid gives me company and Iam sure one day I will get back my family" Sam over ehars this and stops by the room and and ont he screen they show the foetus and he feels wierd feeling. His fists are clenched. Prateek says" See Gauri looka t your nad Samr's kid. I wish this kid will bring you together.
Gauri will say "Prateek. Iam not frightened of what will happen to me but what Iam afraid about is the family with Kamia's a harkath.
15. Sam will move away slowly with all tears. He sits under a tree sobbing helplessly and cursing himself for what all he did to her. He hits himself ont he wound and says "Maine apne bache ka sabooth manga hai. How cruel of me. That Prateek inspite of what all he got from me is still supporting Gauri and Iam torturing her. No I wont let it happen. I will teach a lesson to Kamiya and then only will ask Gauri to forgive me as I have wasted all eight months nad only a month is left.
16. He goes home and Dadaji is as usual sad and Ayush will tell Dadaji " Kash Gaur beta hothi. Godh Barai Rasam would have been doen" Sam over hears this and feels very sad that bec of him only all thsi is happening . He covers up and says - What is the discussion going on. They dont say anything and Sam doesnt want to open up with them as Kamiya will get to know him.
17. He makes a plan to meet the judge a day before counselling and requests her to ask Gauri to come back home or it will be breaking law.
18. Judge sahiba does as it is and Sam fells happy that Gauri has agreed and will get her home. This time he will carry her luggage and Sam will hire a servant to help Gauri. Gauri is happy to be back with kids.
19. Then the next few episodes will be concentrated on how Sam wants to be with Gauri all the time and tries his amximum not to show to others .
20. He arranges for Godh Bari Rasam also and he participates in it also. kamya is restless and goes out .
21. After the rasam Gauri will be tired and sleeps and our Samar will put a blanket on her her and inthe process will touch her tummy and gets emotional. He tries to remove his hand but Gauri clasps his hand. She opens hsi eyes ans sees hima nd catches him red ahned with tears. He sees into her eyes and put his head on her tummy and cries uncontrollably. She puts her hand on his head and strokes into his hair.
22. He then wipes his tears and tell her "Gauri I know I cannot ask you for forgivenmess but I will make up for the mistakes and tell the whole world that it is my kid. I will make Kamiya tell the whole truth.
23. She will ask him to cool down.
24. Next day they will go the Judge and withdraw the case.
25. Sam will arrange a party and call all Kamiya's friend and mother. Kamiya will ask Sam why the aprty is being arranged. He will tell suspense. Gauri will also come. It is surprising to see the folk from Mumbai come there. They repent for their doings and handover the property papers to Samar and Kamiya is very happy that Samar has becoem rich. Sam announces that his brothers have come back and all are united now and bad days are gone. He says still some apsahgun is there and KAmya looks at Gauri smirkingly.
He says Kamiya loves him so much that he has no words to tell but will narrate a few incidents and will tell every bad thing she has done to Gauri. Kamiya gets irrritated and tells him about a few things which he doesnt know and tells him it is a waste to love a person like him.
Samar will finally say " I have withdrawn the case as my wife has given me a chance to live with her. He calls Prateek and tells him ' This is waht is friendship. Iam proud of both of you. Forgive me if U can. HE asks everyone to forgive him.
26. he comes to Gauri and holds her hand and says "I may not be able to get back the days which have passed but will U give em chance to try to live all of them with U . I love U Gauri and hugs her" She says " Ah and he says Oho Chotu is in between na - I forgot. and he embraces her.
27. They are back to Mumbai and days are passing and Sam doesnt let Gauri get down the bed. He takes her for the walk. HE tells her " Kash I was so caring from begining and she puts her hand on his mouth . They both are walkinga nd she says ' I think my pains ahve started and Sam makes a big halla and takes her to the hospital. When she is undergoing pains he is very tensed and Dadaji and Ayush laughs at the halla he is creating with nurses coming out. Then they hear a cry and the doctor comes out and anoounces it is twins.
Dadaji says " Tho Samar and Shiv again" Samar rushes to see Gauri ans she poits out towards the swing where both the twins are there.
Samar goes to them and looks up and tells " Chotu I know U R looking from top and I prmise that these twins will be brought up togetehr and not like us.
A big family photograph and the Serial ends
Thdam thadam thadam.
So guys that was my work of half an hour and 27 episodes i.e 6 weeks.
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