dil ka ristha part9 P-3

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ayushi tripathi

@love10iqbal

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Posted: 16 years ago

hii guys i posted part 5 & 6 so read this and leave ur comment and how is my ff doing

i accidently delete 4 part s now i am starting with part 5 here is some point of previous update

shiv kapoor(iqbal khan)no.1 business tyocon in world he meet gauri and they fall in love with each other but due ti some misunderstanding they seprated shiv thought had betrayed him and same as gauri thought but thet still love eachother gauri have her and shiv daughter siya but shiv does not know about it now gauri live in toronto with siya but fate is bringing them together cuz in which company gauri worked shiv is buying that company .

Edited by love10iqbal - 16 years ago

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jagrutid

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Posted: 16 years ago

aw love your concept and yey really start!!!, you should really contiune and yey loved the name sia...aw so cute ..lol. but yes its a nice idea do go on... jagruti 😊

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sonia

@Mrs.soniayk6

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Posted: 16 years ago

its sounds intresting track friend.keep up the gud work friend👏.n siya is a very gud name.i just loved it😊

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saba

@luv_pavi

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+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

luved it jee first of all i humbly request u not 2 leave ur ff yaar plz do continue it awesumm updatesss soundz intresting....hmmmmm ermmmm very curious to know more plz do update asap dear...

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serendipity.

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Posted: 16 years ago

ur story is really intersting...waitin nd wantin 4 more yaar!

updt asap! theek hai?

siya is a cute name ...i personally lyk it really v much!

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Nihita

@nihita

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+ 6

Posted: 16 years ago

[i]hey sweety really loved ur idea n concept!!!!!!

one request could u please avoid the usage of caps lock its difff.to read it thoroghly!!!!!!

hope u dnt mind me asking!!!!!!!

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sneha

@pals_sneha

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Posted: 16 years ago

wow ....nice update...loved it👏👏.....continue soon

Edited by pals_sneh - 16 years ago

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starfan.shrk

@starfan.shrk

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Posted: 16 years ago

AWWWWWW. again shiv misundrstandin gauri!!😡 n gauri puttin up wid it😡 but i lv da storyline n da name u used,siya.both have a daughtr? intrstin. i wanna no it all so plz continues dis ff untill it is fifnishd n post da nxt part soon. ( sorry if im bein mean or nythin (jus say if i am) but , i think u use a bit too much of '&' in ur ff so jus try n fit odr words instead of 'and' in it 2 make it mor appealin.)👍🏼👏⭐️

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sonia

@Mrs.soniayk6

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Posted: 16 years ago

wowww u posted 3 parts.ohhhhh god.friend loved the track.wonderfull parts friend.keep up the gud work friend👏

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ayushi tripathi

@love10iqbal

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#10

thanks u all for ur wonderful comment i will try as soon as possible😛

promo:shiv has decide that he will buy toronto company this company is one where gauri work as PA what will there fate bring them closer or cause more misunderstanding .

Hii guys i am back i will continue next part soon or if it is boring i will stop this please comment

I think u all does not like this ff so i think i should not continue this any longer😭

Edited by love10iqbal - 16 years ago