KALEEREIN: HAPPY FREEDOM DAY OS

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Posted: 7 years ago
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After watching today's episode, I got this idea in my brain and i could not concentrate on my history revision until I put it down on paper. This is show is an addiction that I might need to cut out on...but until then...enjoy and feedbacks are always welcome!!!

Today Meera had enough, she knew exactly what was going to happen yet she couldn't prove it to Vivaan. She knew that no matter how hard she tried, her point will always be less valuable than that of Roma Kapoor. He raised his hand on her again, to say that she was shocked would be an understatement. The view of his hand near her face shook her world, how can someone who asked for forgiveness so many times for this same act, repeat it again...

Meera: Aaj toh main yeh khulke i rakhoon gi, chahe kuyn na jaan dena pare, Vivaan kabhi nahi bishwas kare ge...hamara rishta kabhi aage nahi barega, yeh siyappa solve karke isko hamesha ke liye tata byebye kehna parega

Saying this Meera got to work, as the clock started to tick faster, Meera's movements became faster and more hectic. Vivaan noticed this but didn't pay much heed as according to him, she is crazy and believing what she says will only make him crazy. But seeing her simply go to sleep made him even more confused.

Vivaan: - to himself - Yeh toh abhi abhi itna uchal rahi thi, ab itni jalsi kaise soh gaiy? chor, mujhe kiya...Mrs Kapoor aisa kabhi nahi karsak ta...mere saath nahi..naahi Meera kuch nahi janti, yeh ladki ki waja se mera neend kharap ho gaye.

Meera: - to herself - 12 bajega, aur Sheri aegyi...yehi sahi moka hai isse rangeen hatoon mein pakarna, warna Roma Kapoor ki sach kabhi bahar nahi apa ange.

In the mean time, an unknown soul had entered Kapoor mansion, Meera had purposely left the back door open so that it would be easier for Sheri to enter her room, clearly creating a misleading path. Sheri spotted Vivaan and Meera's room and went in with the pure intention of ending Meera once and for all. Roma had witnessed all that, but could not stop Sheri from entering the room, she did not know what to do. She knew that if Sheri opened her mouth about the apparent Pammi Kapoor who she talked to then she would be in a lot of trouble and that to from Vivaan...but she was clueless.

Sheri: Aaj to tu marega...Meera ke kissa khallass
She was about to stab Meera with full force when Meera pulled out a gun from under her pillow and pointed at Sheri. She fired the gun, but when she opened her eyes, Sheri disappeared. Vivaan woke up with a sudden fear, he turned towards Meera fearing that something might have happened to her, but to his dismay he saw her holding the gun and looking like she saw a ghost.

Vivaan: Tum pagal ho kya?? gun ?? kuyn?? tum...
Meera: Vivaan, main jhoot nahi kerahi hoon, Sheri yahain thi, dekho uska churi yahain pari hai, maa kassam Vivaan meri baat mano...
Vivaan: chalo niche chalo...sab utgaye

Meanwhile downstairs, Nimmo had called the cops and they were already present, to save herself and Sheri, Roma became the victim at gun point. Sheri was holding Roma captive.

Vivaan: (holding a gun) use chordo, abhi, warna main shoot kar doongi
Sheri: tujse pehle mein isse upr bhejwa doongi
Meera: Maine kaha tha na ki yeh churail aaj aegi...tum...
Vivaan: just SHUT UP!!! Mrs Kapoor ki life khatre main hai, aur tum kiya bake ja rahiho
Meera: Mrs Kapoor ji ke life khatre main nahi hai, who yeh sab dikha rahi hai taki who sahi sabit ho jaye
Police: Sheri use chor doh, warning deh rahe hai hum

Meera uses this opportunity to use Roma's old phone that she had found to call the unknown number, which directly connected to Sheri's phone. Hearing her phone ring, everyone quietened down.

Sheri: Lo, aa gaya mera order dene wali ka phone...ha Mrs Kapoor boliye ... hello? hello?
Roma: - to herself - isse contract to maine di thi...toh yeh Mrs Kapoor kon hai?

Meera comes down the stairs holding the phone in speaker, which averted everyone's attention towards her. When she saw the phone, she was shocked to see and read the messages that Roma had sent to people.

Meera: order dene wali tumhara haat main hai Sheri...use ghumake toh dekho
Sheri: kiya bakwas... - SHE WAS SHOCKED...ap??? sorry madam ji, hume to laga tha ki ap Meera hai...
Vivaan: Tum yahan Amaya ko marne ke liye nahi aya????
Sheri: oh Bhai...Amaya kon?? main to yahan Meera to marne aya hoon...

This conversation allowed the police to quickly arrest Sheri once and for all. Vivaan was more than shocked, he was hurt and he felt guilty more than ever, every single time Meera did something, he wold consider it a failure or a lie, but it was only her to supported him and told him truths after truths, he was too blind to see..

Vivaan: Ap ne mere saath asa kiyun kiya? Apko paatha tha na ke mujhme dhokha khane ka himmat nahi hai...ap ne Meera ko marne chaha, phir Amaya ko aur main hi bewakoof hoon jo main baar baar Meera ko doshi samjha. Asli culprit toh ap hai! ITNA BEWAKOOF KAISE HO SAKTI TI HOON MAIN!!!! Aisa kyun kiya apne? Boliye!! Jawab dijiye!!!
Roma: HA! MAINE SAB KUCH KIYA!!! MAIN MEERA KI JAAN KHATRE MAIN DHALI THI, MAINE HOSPITAL MEH OXYGEN KI PIPE KHARAB KAR DI, MAINE AMAYA KO MARNE KI SAJISH BANAYI THI!!! MAINE KIYE YEH SAB...kiyu ki mujhe Kapoor industry chahiye!

Vivaan was losing it, his temper was well above his shoulder, he knew that if the police did not take her then he would end her forever.

Police: Mrs Kapoor you are under arrest for attempt of murder and kidnapping.
Roma: main aongi!!! wapas aongi aur sab kuch ccher cchar kar doongi!!!

Vivaan fell, he had no hopes left, his trust has been broken once again, Meera not knowing what to do, decided that this would be the perfect time to end everything. Vivaan looked up to Meera. He couldn't say anything. He was ashamed for himself, he lost all respect he had for himself, he broke her trust again.

Meera: Mummy papers dijiye.

Meera got the papers from her mother, sat down near Vivaan and opened the first page. Vivaan looked at her in plea, almost asking her with his eyes not to sign these papers. He couldn't lose another person, despite knowing the fact that his actions meant otherwise.
Meera signed all the sheets and Vivaan looked on, unable to say anything.

Meera: Happy Freedom Day. Aaj se tumhari azadi shuru. Yeh rishta se, mujhse, aur iss parivaar se. Khush rehna.

Vivaan was speechless, he always knew that Meera was someone who would always put others before herself, but today she proved him again yet again, by standing up for herself.

Amaya: Bhai maine kaha tha na...ek accha pati bajaiye isse pehle ke bohot der ho jay...bhabi chali gayi Bhai...aur yeh sab kuch hua sirf apke waje seh!!!

Meera ran to her room. She could not face him. After almost a month being together, he still could not learn to trust her. He always pointed the finger at her, always blamed her for things that she hadn't done. She was tired. She knew that this relation would not last and therefore prolonging it would the work of a fool. She left. She is don't with the Kapoor. Vivaan stared at the papers long and deep, before ripping them apart with all the force that he had.

Meera: - to herself - Aaj se main phir se Meera Dhingra ban gayi.
Vivaan: - to himself - yeh rishta main itni asani se todne nahi doonga, Meera mere waje se tum aje chale gayi, ek din main hi tumhe wapas leh aoungi.

Whilst both of them were lost in deep thoughts, in separate rooms, far away from each other, looking at the stars, somehow thinking about the start of a new journey. For one of them, getting the other back and for the other, learning to live without their presence.


###### THIS WAS AN OS FROM ME...this is what i would like the future track to be like, but obviously the CVs have a habit of doing everything that we do not ask for. I hope you guys like it and my brain is much calmer, now that this is off my head. ######
ENJOY AND LIFE AND FEEDBACKS!!!! LOVE <3
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Posted: 7 years ago
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👏👏...very nice...But y is this an os?...😭😭...please write os series with continuation for this...😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: vardhana1402

👏👏...very nice...But y is this an os?...😭😭...please write os series with continuation for this...😳


this is an OS because it was a sudden idea that legit popped in my brain after watching today's ep. also because right now I'm trying to hard to focus on my exams 😭😭😭😭 but it's not working 😭😭😭
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: zaya93200


this is an OS because it was a sudden idea that legit popped in my brain after watching today's ep. also because right now I'm trying to hard to focus on my exams 😭 but it's not working 😭😭😭


Its okay den...u can work on this after ur xams too...😆..All d Best for ur xams...👍🏼..will wait for your next post..😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice os. Write more after exams.. waiting
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: zaya93200

After watching today's episode, I got this idea in my brain and i could not concentrate on my history revision until I put it down on paper. This is show is an addiction that I might need to cut out on...but until then...enjoy and feedbacks are always welcome!!!

Today Meera had enough, she knew exactly what was going to happen yet she couldn't prove it to Vivaan. She knew that no matter how hard she tried, her point will always be less valuable than that of Roma Kapoor. He raised his hand on her again, to say that she was shocked would be an understatement. The view of his hand near her face shook her world, how can someone who asked for forgiveness so many times for this same act, repeat it again...

Meera: Aaj toh main yeh khulke i rakhoon gi, chahe kuyn na jaan dena pare, Vivaan kabhi nahi bishwas kare ge...hamara rishta kabhi aage nahi barega, yeh siyappa solve karke isko hamesha ke liye tata byebye kehna parega

Saying this Meera got to work, as the clock started to tick faster, Meera's movements became faster and more hectic. Vivaan noticed this but didn't pay much heed as according to him, she is crazy and believing what she says will only make him crazy. But seeing her simply go to sleep made him even more confused.

Vivaan: - to himself - Yeh toh abhi abhi itna uchal rahi thi, ab itni jalsi kaise soh gaiy? chor, mujhe kiya...Mrs Kapoor aisa kabhi nahi karsak ta...mere saath nahi..naahi Meera kuch nahi janti, yeh ladki ki waja se mera neend kharap ho gaye.

Meera: - to herself - 12 bajega, aur Sheri aegyi...yehi sahi moka hai isse rangeen hatoon mein pakarna, warna Roma Kapoor ki sach kabhi bahar nahi apa ange.

In the mean time, an unknown soul had entered Kapoor mansion, Meera had purposely left the back door open so that it would be easier for Sheri to enter her room, clearly creating a misleading path. Sheri spotted Vivaan and Meera's room and went in with the pure intention of ending Meera once and for all. Roma had witnessed all that, but could not stop Sheri from entering the room, she did not know what to do. She knew that if Sheri opened her mouth about the apparent Pammi Kapoor who she talked to then she would be in a lot of trouble and that to from Vivaan...but she was clueless.

Sheri: Aaj to tu marega...Meera ke kissa khallass
She was about to stab Meera with full force when Meera pulled out a gun from under her pillow and pointed at Sheri. She fired the gun, but when she opened her eyes, Sheri disappeared. Vivaan woke up with a sudden fear, he turned towards Meera fearing that something might have happened to her, but to his dismay he saw her holding the gun and looking like she saw a ghost.

Vivaan: Tum pagal ho kya?? gun ?? kuyn?? tum...
Meera: Vivaan, main jhoot nahi kerahi hoon, Sheri yahain thi, dekho uska churi yahain pari hai, maa kassam Vivaan meri baat mano...
Vivaan: chalo niche chalo...sab utgaye

Meanwhile downstairs, Nimmo had called the cops and they were already present, to save herself and Sheri, Roma became the victim at gun point. Sheri was holding Roma captive.

Vivaan: (holding a gun) use chordo, abhi, warna main shoot kar doongi
Sheri: tujse pehle mein isse upr bhejwa doongi
Meera: Maine kaha tha na ki yeh churail aaj aegi...tum...
Vivaan: just SHUT UP!!! Mrs Kapoor ki life khatre main hai, aur tum kiya bake ja rahiho
Meera: Mrs Kapoor ji ke life khatre main nahi hai, who yeh sab dikha rahi hai taki who sahi sabit ho jaye
Police: Sheri use chor doh, warning deh rahe hai hum

Meera uses this opportunity to use Roma's old phone that she had found to call the unknown number, which directly connected to Sheri's phone. Hearing her phone ring, everyone quietened down.

Sheri: Lo, aa gaya mera order dene wali ka phone...ha Mrs Kapoor boliye ... hello? hello?
Roma: - to herself - isse contract to maine di thi...toh yeh Mrs Kapoor kon hai?

Meera comes down the stairs holding the phone in speaker, which averted everyone's attention towards her. When she saw the phone, she was shocked to see and read the messages that Roma had sent to people.

Meera: order dene wali tumhara haat main hai Sheri...use ghumake toh dekho
Sheri: kiya bakwas... - SHE WAS SHOCKED...ap??? sorry madam ji, hume to laga tha ki ap Meera hai...
Vivaan: Tum yahan Amaya ko marne ke liye nahi aya????
Sheri: oh Bhai...Amaya kon?? main to yahan Meera to marne aya hoon...

This conversation allowed the police to quickly arrest Sheri once and for all. Vivaan was more than shocked, he was hurt and he felt guilty more than ever, every single time Meera did something, he wold consider it a failure or a lie, but it was only her to supported him and told him truths after truths, he was too blind to see..

Vivaan: Ap ne mere saath asa kiyun kiya? Apko paatha tha na ke mujhme dhokha khane ka himmat nahi hai...ap ne Meera ko marne chaha, phir Amaya ko aur main hi bewakoof hoon jo main baar baar Meera ko doshi samjha. Asli culprit toh ap hai! ITNA BEWAKOOF KAISE HO SAKTI TI HOON MAIN!!!! Aisa kyun kiya apne? Boliye!! Jawab dijiye!!!
Roma: HA! MAINE SAB KUCH KIYA!!! MAIN MEERA KI JAAN KHATRE MAIN DHALI THI, MAINE HOSPITAL MEH OXYGEN KI PIPE KHARAB KAR DI, MAINE AMAYA KO MARNE KI SAJISH BANAYI THI!!! MAINE KIYE YEH SAB...kiyu ki mujhe Kapoor industry chahiye!

Vivaan was losing it, his temper was well above his shoulder, he knew that if the police did not take her then he would end her forever.

Police: Mrs Kapoor you are under arrest for attempt of murder and kidnapping.
Roma: main aongi!!! wapas aongi aur sab kuch ccher cchar kar doongi!!!

Vivaan fell, he had no hopes left, his trust has been broken once again, Meera not knowing what to do, decided that this would be the perfect time to end everything. Vivaan looked up to Meera. He couldn't say anything. He was ashamed for himself, he lost all respect he had for himself, he broke her trust again.

Meera: Mummy papers dijiye.

Meera got the papers from her mother, sat down near Vivaan and opened the first page. Vivaan looked at her in plea, almost asking her with his eyes not to sign these papers. He couldn't lose another person, despite knowing the fact that his actions meant otherwise.
Meera signed all the sheets and Vivaan looked on, unable to say anything.

Meera: Happy Freedom Day. Aaj se tumhari azadi shuru. Yeh rishta se, mujhse, aur iss parivaar se. Khush rehna.

Vivaan was speechless, he always knew that Meera was someone who would always put others before herself, but today she proved him again yet again, by standing up for herself.

Amaya: Bhai maine kaha tha na...ek accha pati bajaiye isse pehle ke bohot der ho jay...bhabi chali gayi Bhai...aur yeh sab kuch hua sirf apke waje seh!!!

Meera ran to her room. She could not face him. After almost a month being together, he still could not learn to trust her. He always pointed the finger at her, always blamed her for things that she hadn't done. She was tired. She knew that this relation would not last and therefore prolonging it would the work of a fool. She left. She is don't with the Kapoor. Vivaan stared at the papers long and deep, before ripping them apart with all the force that he had.

Meera: - to herself - Aaj se main phir se Meera Dhingra ban gayi.
Vivaan: - to himself - yeh rishta main itni asani se todne nahi doonga, Meera mere waje se tum aje chale gayi, ek din main hi tumhe wapas leh aoungi.

Whilst both of them were lost in deep thoughts, in separate rooms, far away from each other, looking at the stars, somehow thinking about the start of a new journey. For one of them, getting the other back and for the other, learning to live without their presence.


###### THIS WAS AN OS FROM ME...this is what i would like the future track to be like, but obviously the CVs have a habit of doing everything that we do not ask for. I hope you guys like it and my brain is much calmer, now that this is off my head. ######
ENJOY AND LIFE AND FEEDBACKS!!!! LOVE <3



This was so beautiful! 👏 And I honestly hope the lines in bold actually happen in the show 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Perfect story
Pls don't end on half of its way
Pls continue

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