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Posted: 7 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: fortitudeoth

Amazing!

But people are going to ask for clarification about what happened in the bus so update fast!


Thank You! Will update in a week's time.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#12
Beautiful work. Amazing dear. Please update soon and if possible please pm me when you will update.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#13
Hello lovelies! I'm back with the second part of this story. I have a little request from all of you...please recommend my work to your friends, if you like it. I'm new here, so I don't actually have a number of friends, who could read it. Please spread this in the forum. I've also written a one shot on #AdiYa(Bepannah), so the Bepannah squad could also go through it. Anyway, this is a longer part than the last one! I hope you all like it! Happy Reading!!😛

Part 2:

The entire family sat in the living room, shedding tears silently. Vivaan spoke on his phone to the commissioner, telling him no almost yelling at him to find the culprits.

"I don't care!! I want the culprits to be caught as soon as possible. I won't spare you if you spare them!

Meera was sleeping in her room. Vivaan had thought it was best not to wake her up and he had gently carried her to their room. Amaya told the entire family about how Meera was assaulted in the bus. They were all heart broken to hear what had happened. Vivaan's anger and frustration was on another level...he just couldn't control himself.

Amaya, who saw Vivaan getting stressed offered him a glass of water. He took a sip and gestured a Thank You' with his eyes.

"VIVAAN!!!!!

All of them heard Meera scream. Vivaan rushed towards their room as the the others followed him!

Vivaan entered the room only to collide with an agitated Meera.

"Vivaan! Viv- She started crying and murmuring.

"Sshh! Meera, idhar dekho main yahin hoon! Hmm? he said cupping her face. She hugged him tight. "Tum kahan chale gaye tha...maine kahan tha naa ki kahin mat jaana!

She clutched his collar as she hiccupped in his arms "Woh aajayenge. Aur phir who tumhe nahi aane denge mere paas...woh mujhe... she trailed off as she hugged him and cried.

Vivaan didn't know what to do. She was inconsolable... he just hugged her tight! "Ab tumhe koi kuch nahi kar paayega! Main kissi ko tumhare paas nahi aane doonga...okay?

She just nodded like an obedient child with tear stained cheeks. The moment she saw the other family members standing at the entrance, she hid herself behind Vivaan! Vivaan gestured everyone to leave with his eyes and they obliged. The doctor had instructed them that only the people Meera wants close to her should be in her sight.

Dolly was the last one to move out, as she closed the door behind her. Now, both of them were alone in the room. Vivaan held her hand and led her towards the bed. She sat down and kneeled down infront of her.

"Meera, everything is fine. Tum kissi cheez ki tension mat lo! Ok?

Meera just looked at him. He looked at her from top to bottom, she was covered with dust and her injuries had turned black, her clothes were also torn. Her hair was all messy. The doctor had also instructed him to get her freshened up after she woke up. The more she would be in the same clothes and environment, the more those memories would haunt her.

"Meera, come with me! he gently guided her towards the washroom and asked her to go and take a shower.

But, she wasn't ready to leave his hand, having no other option, he took her inside. He made her stand under the shower and turned the knob.

The water droplets started to hit Meera's skin. She could feel a burning sensation, but it was not because of her injuries it was because of that touch that she could still feel on her skin. It made her feel digusted. She just stared at her arms and the scratches that she had. She was scarred, scarred for life and the tears began to flow all over again.

Vivaan saw her wounds. He saw her tears and he knew what she was thinking. Taking off his coat, he stood closer to her.

"Where? he just whispered in her ears.

She looked at him for a minute and glanced towards her arms. He gently touched her shoulders and moved them till her fingers as if wiping that feeling off her. He held her face with one hand and kissed her right cheek and then the left. She just closed her eyes letting the pain fade away, as he gently kissed her forehead.

Vivaan stretched his one arm out and turned off the shower, grabbing the towel from the shelf he wrapped it around Meera. He kept her clothes on the slab and moved out to change his clothes.

He changed into his joggers and T-shirt, as it was night already. He heard the click of the washroom door and turned around to find Meera in a baby pink night gown, a towel in her hand and water dripping from her hair. He moved closer to her and made her sit on the couch. He took the towel from her and started drying her hair. He rubbed it against her scalp, to remove all the extra water.

He kept the towel aside after a few minutes.

"Do you feel better now?

"Hmm she responded.

She got up from the couch and moved towards her side of the bed. The commissioner and the doctor's words replayed on Vivaan's mind.

Commisioner Sir, you need to tell us what exactly happened. We are searching for the goons, but an official FIR needs to be filed.

Doctor Mr. Kapoor, he is right! Meera needs to let it out. She needs to talk about it to somebody, she needs to cry her heart out otherwise this may lead her to depression.

His trail of thoughts were broken, as he heard a knock n the door. He opened the door to find Silky standing outside with a tray of food.

"Jiju, Meera di toh neeche aane ki haalat mein nahi hai aur aap unko chod kar aaoge nahi toh yeh aap dono ka khaana Daadi ne bhejwaya hai. She said handing him the tray and turning around.

"Thanks Silky! he said, shutting the door behind her.

Meera moved inside to find Meera sitting on the bed, lost in her thoughts.

"Mujhe toh bahut bhook lagi hai aur yeh khusboo...chalo khaate hain, he said sitting beside her.

He took a spoonful of rice and fed it to her. After a few spoons, Meera held his hand which was held the spoon and asked "Tum nahi khaaoge? and with that she forwarded the spoon towards him. Vivaan took a bite. And, they both fed each other. After finishing the food, Vivaan got up and kept the dishes aside.

He moved towards his side of the bed and tucked himself. He knew he had to ask her about what exactly happened, but he didn't have the courage to. He moved closer to her, but still couldn't ask her. Meera didn't feel like sleeping anymore.

"Meera! Vivaan somehow managed to mumble. Meera looked at him.

"I know ki tum bahot stressed ho par tum mujhe bata sakti ho...I mean jo kuch bhi hua uss bus mein, you can let it out. And, the moment he said it, he regretted it. The look in her eyes was making him guilty.

Just when he was about to explain himself, "Maine bahot koshish ki, he heard her say.

"Par mein ek thi aur woh 6, Vivaan mein ro rahi thi, chilla rahi thi, par koi nahi aaya. Vivaan shut his eyes as guilt started to prick him. "Unhone, mujhe yahan, yahan, yahan sab jagah chuwa...maine bahot koshish ki, sach mein. She said touching herself and showing him the marks. She started crying and Vivaan simultaneously wrapped his arms around her. She kept her head on his chest and sat beside as he gently patted her back.

"Agar main andar nahi jaati toh Amaya...isiliye mera andar jaana zaroori tha. Vivaan, pata hai maine tumhara bahot intezaar kiya par tum nahi aaye. Par maine haar nahi maani, main ladti rahi, main un sab se bhaagne ki koshish kar rahi thi, par who sab mujh par haavi ho chuke tha. Aur phir police wahan aa gayi unhone mujhe ek taraf Dhaka diya aur who saare bhaag gaye. She completed, remembering her struggle inside the bus. She lay down beside Vivaan and hugged him. Meera cried and Vivaan cried along with her. They both slept after sometime but did not leave each other.

Vivaan squinted his eyes as the rays of sun fell on his face. He woke up to find, Meera sleeping in his arms, her tears had dried but her eyes were still swollen. He tucked a strand of hair behind her ear and gently caressed her cheek.

"Ab mein tumhe chodkar kabhi bhi, kahin nahi jaaunga. I'm sorry Meera! Par ab, I'll always be there, always! he promised her sleeping form.

He didn't know if he had already fallen in love with this Kabaddi player. But, he knew one thing for sure...Anybody who hurt his Meera would not be spared. He would make sure that those goons die everyday in life imprisonment. She was too innocent to understand this corrupted world and now, he would make sure to protect her from everything evil around. He would build a new fairytale for her, where this pious soul could cherish her innocence. He knew her memories had been scarred, but he would give her so much happiness that she would forget all the negativity. If wanting to give all the happiness to someone is love, then well, yes he was in love! Only he had the right to be close to her, to console her, to wipe her tears and to dry her hair after a shower. He loved the way she called his name whenever she was in trouble! It made him believe that she trusted him to protect her, to hold her, to hug her when she needed it. He would never let this trust get broken. Even, if this wasn't love, he knew Meera had destroyed him for any other woman! No matter what happens, in this kabaddi of life...One thing he knew for sure was they didn't need a team to win...together, they were just perfect! His trail of thoughts were broken, when he heard his phone buzz.

"Yes, Mr. Sharma! I've decided the name of our Indian outlets. Our Indian brand will be called "MeerVan: Just Perfect! Please get ready with the papers, we will be launching our first outlet very soon! "Yes, Sir and with that he cut the call.

Vivaan gently planted a kiss in Meera's hair before heading towards the washroom with a bright smile!

It was indeed a new beginning for both of them!

So, finally done with the second and last part of "Main Hoon Na! Hope you all like it.Please do hit the like button and also give your reviews as comments. As usual, appreciations and criticism both are welcomed!

Will come back with something new soon. With lots and lots of love👏...

This is Tiara⭐️ signing off.


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Posted: 7 years ago
#14
beautiful update dear
so vivaan has finally realized his love
plzzz do write more
and thanks for the pm dear😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#15
Excellent dear..very nicely written...👏👏..plz do continue writing...😳😳..And thanks for the pm..😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#16
Very emotional and good update vivaan support meera in her bad condition.
But you ended this ... i want to read more... please write more.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#17
So lovely emotional closed to heart
Pls update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#18
Amazing👏 . superb

That shower scene remind me of Manan...But MeerVaan are no less😊

thanks for update ... waiting for next
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Posted: 7 years ago
#19
Loved it...
I wish ki abhi thode aur parts hote😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
#20
Nice continuation!!
It's just too cute. It was a great decision to put everything in Vivaan's point of view, it gave a whole new set of feelings and perspectives to the character and the setting of your story. It gave depth but stayed soft so the reader was perfectly touched by the story without being uncomfortable!!

In whole, I loved it!! 👏

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