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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey guys. Writing something 1st time on Ravika, tell me how it is.

--By Shiri--
We were on the college tour. We
spent one night in the tent. We
were the 1st year students so
were taken more care, each of us
were given single tent. It was
nearly 11 pm when i came out of
my room. I saw someone sitting
outside. I went to him.
"Ravi?"He looked up and
smiled at me.
"soi nahi abhi tak?"
"tum yahan kya kar rhe ho?"
"tum sach much nhi janti, ya sirf
pretend kar rhi ho?"
Yes, I know, he likes me, from the
first day of college.
And i, have a crush on him the
very day. And he is here to
protect me. Coz he care for me.
"but why are u outside?"
"then where should i be?"
"what do u prefer more? Me, or
the mosquitoes?"
He stood up with a confusion.
"andar aa jao"
i went inside saying this and he
followed with a smile.
We entered in and i sat in.
"cover it or they will come in"
i said casually.
"who?"
"the mosquitoes!"
He smiled and covered the door
screen.
"aao, baitho"
he sat near me and kept
admiring. I turned my head but
he kept his on my shoulder.
"look at me"
i heard.
I looked at him.
"would u mind me kissing u?"
He said looking straight into my
eyes. I was speechless. I didnt
know what to say. Then i realised
him coming forward. I closed my
eyes. I Suddenly felt Something
on my fore head.
He had touched my forehead
with his lips. Then slowly pressed
his lips which automatically made
me close my eyes. He then looked
at me.
"Devika!"
I opened my eyes. He leaned
forward.
He gently pecked on my lips.
Then i realised him making a
distance. This time i took the
charge. As he was going
backward, i dragged his one side
collar. He was surprised. I leaned
forward. But did the same thing.
I gave a small kiss on his lips.
This was useful coz he now cupped my face. My hands were now on his chest he kissed me gently. I responded. It started with a soft kiss but soon turned to a passionate one. It was unexpected, but was my first kiss. Actually, our!
"i love you"
he said after we were finished.
I hugged him as tight as i could and he closed the embrace.
It was not the end, it was our new begining.

Love,
Shirisha

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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow very nice! keep updating
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Posted: 10 years ago
#3
aweesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


but too short !!!!!


but aqwesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


write more !!!!!!

please!!!!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Incredible... A beautiful piece of work. *sighs* Ravika is so mesmerising. Please do write more.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#5
Keep writing about ravika. Atleast they have agood peaceful life in our minds. Dont think,these serial walas have ever given a good happily married life to any couple.

Ravi & devika & their melodramas,keep on going.

It s time to put an end to it. Then what,noone knows about nivi & saaket involed in it. They will plan for something else.
Before that if ravika have a baby it s fine.or this story will just kill us audience.

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