#7 MANAN FF LOVE IS MY LIFE PART 203 ON PG 8 - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
#21
wow amazing update.. totally enjoyed it.. manan or unki nok jhok awww sho cute .. or unka romance to beautifully portrayed... waiting for next update eagerly.. update soon... Congratulations for ur new thread.. many mAny congress ..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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FIRSTLY BIG BIG CONGRATULATIONS FOR NEW THREAD...YAYIEEE YIPIEEE

SECONDLY THE UPDATE WAS SUPERB...

IT WAS PENNED DOWN BEAUTIFULLY...

THE WAY HE KNOWS HER IN N OUT...KNOWS WHEN SHE CRIES OUT OF HAPPINESS N WHEN IN SADNESS...HATTS OFF TO HIM...

NANDINI HAD PUT PASSWORD LIKE THIS... OMG...THAT WAS SOOO CUTE... N MANIK JEALOUSY N THEN HIS TEASING...SUPERB...

N THEIR INTIMACY... OHHH GAWDDD...THAT'S SPLENDID... HIS CONTROL IS COMMENDABLE...

LOVE EACH N EVERY PART OF THE STORY...

N YEAH STILL THAT MYSTERY ISN'T SOLVED...

PS: HAPPY NEW YEAR TO U TOO...

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Yeeeh new thread
Congress dear
Superb update...
Waiting for next
👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
#24
the update was amazing and romantic and the password scene wad awesome i loved it
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Posted: 8 years ago
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PART 202 :


shonaaa...shonaaa...!!!!

kabirrr tu itni suba suba chilla kyu raha hain...!!! and mukthi utters closing her eyes and ears...!!!!

"madam gyara bajne vale hain aur tumhe ye "suba suba" dikra hain" and abhi utters walking towards them sitting beside mukthi...!!!

RESHMA : finallyyy

RAJ : suba ho hi gaya aap sab ke liye

NAVYA : are abi kaha...yaha tho teen hi log hain...!!!

Pariii...!!! and dhurv comes rubbing his eyes..!!!

ye lo choutha and mohan utters smiling getting down from steps..!!
KABIR : are batao na shona kaha hain

RESHMA : apne kamre main

RAJ : wo neche nahi ayi abi thak

NAVYA : ohh helloo...kya hua...kaha jare ho bandh ankhon se..!!!

ABHI : ab ye bi koyi puchne vali bath hai kya navya

NAVYA : aishhh...chelooo...!!!

MUKTHI : hehe chelo..!!!

ABHI : haan haan chelo

RESHMA : ye bache bi na

RAJ : pure pagal hain

thud...thud...thud...!!!

"Uhmmm..!!!!" and nandu stretches her hands without opening her eyes tilting her head a little only to smile biting her lips receiving a kiss on her ear lobe..!!!

"Manikk..!!!" and she whispers after slowly opening her eyes seeing herself completely pressed to him while he simply nuzzles more into her placing another sweet peck on her neck..!!!

thud...thud...thud...!!!

"Manik...chodo naa..!!!" and she utters trying to free herself not looking him...!!!

"Nahiii..!!!" and he utters hugging her tight making her turn completely towards him..!!!

thud...thud...thud...!!!

NANDINI : manik please...patha nahi kon hain darwaze pe..!!!

MANIK : ek baar meri tharaf dekho

NANDINI : manikkk

MANIK : ummm dekho tho sahi nahi tho nahi chodunga

Moving her eyelashes she looks him ever so lazily only to sigh witnessing his closed eyes while he smiles to the fullest and "suba suba chehre pe ye laal rang kyu..!!!"

Opening and closing her mouth like a fish she stares him blinking her eyes continuously while he chuckles and "bolo..!!!"

NANDINI : wooo...tummm...

"tumhe dekne ke liye mujhe, tumhe dekne ki zarurath nahi hain...aur ab batao...ye laal rang kyuuu...!!!" and he whispers tracing his nose on her cheek while she hugs him hiding her face in crook of his neck making him smile huge in return..!!!

NANDINI : Ye awaz kaisi hain

MANIK : very smart par nahi main tumhe chodne nahi vala hoon

NANDINI : manikkk...please...thoda dyan do tumhe bi sunayi dega

"Nandini tum" and he stops opening his eyes and yeee..!!!

NANDINI : chelo dekhthe hain

"are you serious..!!!!" and manik utters nodding his head while nandu quickly runs and "kabirrr... dhruv...dyan se...!!!!"

KABIR : relax shona

DHRUV : ham teek hain

MANIK : pagal hogaye ho dono...balcony se khud ke kyu are ho...!!!

KABIR : door kitni baar knock kiya patha hain

DHRUV : hame laga tu baira ho gaya hain isliye aise aye

MANIK : haa tho door kolne thak ka intezar nahi kar sakthe the kyaa

KABIR : nahiii hame shone ko dekhna tha aur

DHRUV : gud mrn bi kehni thi

"Tum dono ki tho" and before manik could do anything kabir and dhruv hug nandu from either sides resting their heads on shoulder..!!!

"Gud mrn..!!!" and they both utter in unison making manik look them bewildered while nandu smiles and "guddd mrn and sry hamari vajah se tum dono ko aise ana pada..!!!"

DHRUV : teri kaha galthi hain pari

KABIR : hame patha hain ye hi gada tujhe door kolne nahi dera tha

MANIK : listen

DHRUV : shhh

KABIR : teri vajah se already hamari beech kaafi duriya agayi

DHRUV : na ham hamari pari ko gud mrn keh sakthe hain,hug kar sakthe hain,sath so sakthe hain aur na hi gud nite keh sakthe hain

KABIR : lekin ab aur nahi...hamne bohuth zyada vakth dediya hain tumhe and now we are not going to leave u alone...meri shona ke sath...!!!

"meri jaan ko mere paas rakne ke liye mujhe kisi ki permission ki zarurath nahi hain...aap logo ki tho bilkul bi nahi...!!!" and he simply pulls nandu hand with a jerk making her hug him accidentally...!!!!

"ahhh...choona math...meri mangethar hain...!!!" and he walks inside picking up nandu in his arms cutting them both while they were trying to hug nandini back...!!!

manikk kya karre ho..!!! and nandu whispers seeing kabir and dhruv sad plus angry faces...!!!

KABIR : manik tujhe tho main

Knock knock knock

MANIK : pehle door kol ja bey

KABIR : tu

NANDINI : kabir...please...!!!

"huhh" and kabir glaring manik goes to open the door while nandu looks manik and "tch...manik...please...!!!"

MUKTHI : pagal ho door kyu nahi kolre the

ALIA : kab se knock kiye jare hain

"Ufff...!!!" and navbhi nod their heads while manik makes nandu sit on his lap pressing her to his chest hugging her completely from back...!!!

baby tu and alia stops staring at manan...!!!

NANDINI : manikkk...manikkk... chodo...!!!

MANIK : nahiii

MUKTHI : tu ne princess ko aise kyu pakad ke baita

MANIK : kyu ki aap sab usse kane aye ho

ALIA : what

KABIR : shonaaa...mujhe sona hain teri godh main...!!!

DHRUV : mujhe biii

MANIK : oyeee...tum log meri jaan ke paas aoge bi nahi...aur tum dono waha kya karre ho...aao in dono ko thakiya chahiye tho ban jao yaha ake...!!!

NAVYA : manikkk

ALIA : mujhe tho khud nandu ki godh main sona hain

MANIK : listen tum charo na mere hothe huye iske paas ayenge bi nahi aur agar zyada noutanki ki na tho main bina bathaye ise utake le jaonga jaha tum log pohunch bi nahi payenge...!!!!

ABHI : hehehe acha hain kam se kam nandu ko shanthi milegi

MUKTHI : shut up jab manik naam ki pareshani uske sath hogi tho wo kabi shanthi se nahi reh payegi

MANIK : oh tho tum chahthi ho ki main nandu ko kayi leke jao tum sab se dur

nahiii...!!!!! and FAB 4 shout in unison while navbhi and manik giggle watching their horrified expressions...!!!!

NANDINI : manik bas ab

are nahi abi kaha nandini...in charo ko tho bas manik hi jawab de saktha hain...!!! and abhi utters settling beside them on bed...!!!

MUKTHI : ohhh wow look who is talking...tum ek min ke liye ache se bath thak nahi kar sakthe manik se aur

MANIK : aur tumhari vajah se dekh bichare ko kya kya karna padra hain I mean wo mujhse bi bath karne laga hain matlab mujhse se...isliye kehra hoon chod meri jaan ko aur dyan do thoda apne pyar par and this goes to u all idiots especially kabirrr..!!!!

ABHI : haaa seriously ek baar bichari navya ko tho dekho

"chup...muh bandh karo apna...!!!" and navya hits abhi angrily while manik laugh nodding his head...!!!!

KABIR : manik kal rath kya hua

Haaa...!!! and manik suddenly looks him seriously stopping his laugh...!!!

KABIR : itni suba suba ham sabki class lera hain wo bi itni achi se aur meri shona chup hain sur neeche rakke seems like something is missing u know jo hame nahi patha hain..!!!

yaa actually main bi thabse notice karra hoon...sooo what's up buddy...!!! and dhruv winks to manik while he rolls his eyes and "idiots...!!!"

KABIR : nahhh...ham iss topic ko chodne nahi vale hain...!!!

babyyy tum batao na...!!! kuch hua tha kya kal...!!! and mukthi utters with alia sitting on bed making nandu hard to control her blush while manik bites his lip and "tum logo ko kuch kaam hain bi ya nahi suba suba agaye muh utake wo bi ye sab bathe karne...!!!!"

KABIR : are wah tu itna sharif kab se ho gaya

"haaa...batha...batha" and dhruv utters reaching manan's back hugging them both together...!!!

MANIK : arggg choddd

NAVYA : guys bas yaad bi hain abi thodi der tum log kya puchna chahre the manik se

KABIR : haaa

ALIA : ohh yess manik ye ring ki mystery kya hain

MUKTHI : hey haa ye asli ring tere paas kaise ayi

DHRUV : and ab bahana math kar

KABIR : batha jaldi sach kya hain

MANIK : nahi yar mood nahi hain

"manikkk...!!!!" and nandu whispers staring into his eyes turning towards him while he sighing stares her back and "itna bi kya zaruri hain...hogayi na sagayi...!!!"

NANDINI : please

ABHI : kya hua kuch bol kyu nahi raha tu bathana nahi chahtha kya

"wooo" and manik stops looking nandu and then "promise me ab jo main bolunga tum usse sunogi aur apne dimak se bahar pekogi"

NANDINI : ye tum

MANIK : please...just promise me...!!!

NANDINI : teek hain...I promise...!!!!

MANIK : thank you

KABIR : nyonika karvayi na sab

MANIK : hmmm

MUKTHI : I knew it I so knew it

MUKTHI : hmmm

DHRUV : wo apne bete ke sath aise kaise kar sakthi hain

MANIK : hmmm

ALIA : she is so bad so sooo bad

MANIK : hmmm

NANDINI : manikkk

MANIK : hmmm

NANDINI : sach kya hain

Manik remains silent staring her while she licks her lips and "kiske paas se mili tumhe ye anguti...!!!"

MANIK : kisi ke paas se nahi

NANDINI : manik please...main sach sunna chahthi hoon...!!!

"aryaman...!!!!" and manik whispers closing his eyes taking a deep breath...!!!

NANDINI : kya kaha

"tumhari hath se anguti...aryaman ne nikali thi...!!!!" and manik utters opening his eyes looking everywhere except her...!!!!

ABHI : ye kya kehra tu

NAVYA : aryaman kaise le saktha hain anguti

KABIR : aur wo bi kyu

ALIA : I mean what will he get by doing that

MUKTHI : vaise bi ham sab janthe hain ki wo kaisa hain

DHRUV : dosth hain ham sab tho wo aisa kyu karega

ABHI : nahiii...manik jo main sochra hoon kya wo...!!!

NAVYA : ek second...nahiii... matlab...!!!

KABIR : kyaaa

DHRUV : tum dono ye

ABHI : aryaman ko nandu pasandh hain

MUKTHI : haa tho ye bath ham sab...shit...shit...shit...goddd

ALIA : what the hell

KABIR : lekin tujhe ye patha kaisa chela

DHRUV : pura bol pehle se

Manik who was staring nandu since long bites his lower lip and "sach kahu tho mujhe kuch nahi patha tha...jab nandu ne sabke samne kaha ki jo ring soha ke paas thi wo nakli thi thabi maine notice kiya tha uss ring ko...phir baad main jab maine soha se pucha tho usne kaha ki usse wo ring nyonika ne di thi...!!!!"

NAVYA : tho aryaman

MANIK : nyonika ko wo ring diya

ALIA : don't tell me that he was on her side to seperate you

MUKTHI : kehna kya hain iss main usse tho main chodungi hi nahi

ABHI : lekin usne nakli ring kyu di nyonika ko...jab uske paas asli ring tha tho...

"nahi tha uske paas asli ring...!!!" and manik utters still staring at nandu who was busy staring her hands...!!!!

KABIR : kya

MANIK : uss din se pehle jab drama hua tha...rath ko aryaman wo ring lene ayatha yaha...!!!

wo jantha tha ki nandu kabi us ring ko apne hath se nahi nikalthi...isliye chup ke se use lene aya aur uske hath se nikala bi tha badi mushkil se...lekin wo uske hath nahi kayi neche gir gaya aur use apne hath main lene se pehle nandu jaag gayi..!!!!

pakda nahi ja saktha tha isliye uss ring ko chodke chup chap bahar chela gaya...!!!!

NAVYA : aur kisi ko kuch patha bi nahi chela

MANIK : hmmm

ABHI : kitne pagal hai ham sab

KABIR : lekin manik phir tujhe ye ring kaise mili

MANIK : sach kahu tho kismath tha ek din aise hi kamre main volet ko dund raha tha aur achanak ring mil gayi table ke neche

DHRUV : wo kehthe hain na jis cheez pe jiska naam hotha hain wo usi ko miltha hain tho shayad wohi hua hain yaha pe bi

MUKTHI : thank god sab ache se hua lekin I can't believe ki aryaman ne aisa kiya I mean

ALIA : true it's very shocking

MANIK : guys let's just end this topic now

Everyone look manik staring at nandu who was still busy staring her hands completely lost in a different world...!!!

understanding the situation they stare each other and decide do let go the topic...!!!!

KABIR : vaise yar tum log bi na suba suba patha nahi kya leke baite ho

NAVYA : haan ye bi nahi socha ki kabir naam ka bhukad kaise jee payega...bina kuch kaye wo bi itni der...!!!

DHRUV : hmmm well bhuk tho mujhe bi lagra hain

ALIA : tho what are we waiting for

MUKTHI : chelo jaldi se ready hothe hain

Getting down from bed nandu silently starts walking towards washroom while every one stare each other worriedly not knowing what to do...!!!

Closing his eyes for a moment manik too gets down from bed and silently assures everyone that he would take care of her while they all walk out knowing only he could handle her whatever the situation might be...!!!!!



This was supposed to be a valentine update par as usual am late and am sry for that...Happyyy valentine's dayyy...late hoon par bhuli nahi hoon...next update main kya hoga guess kijiye and wanted to tell u story almost ending ko ari hain and nahi please don't panick abi jaldi katham nahi hoga it will take some time but just wanted to tell u so that aap prepared rahe...!!!!

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesomeee amazinggg prt
Aryamnn nyonika ki side tha...aur manan ko separat krna chahta tha...kisi ke face pr nhi likha hota wo kesa person hai...continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#27
ANUUU
Awesome update...muahhh

YAAR Manan KI jaldi SHADI karva de ...plzzz
It's been so long they waiting to be one ...
I'm happy BCOZ Manan BAHUT happy hai SAGAYI jo HOGAYE

Ufff... Yeh Fab 4 Manan KO shanti SE Jena denge ''
Abh TOH Manan KO AAKELE CHOD do ...Paanch saalon SE duur the yeh love birds ...AUR abh duur NAHI reh payenge

And this Aryaman ...how dare he '' SOOCH BHI KESSE LEYA usne KI Nandini KO Manik SE aalag KAR dega ...huh
AUR Navya me SAHI KAHA ...Manik KO hi Milne thi WOH ring
God also wants them to be together now ...
But Nandu is in total shock ...she thought Aryaman to be her good friend ...but he betrayed her ...
And that NEYONICA so called mom of Manik she can go to any extend to separate Manan ...
Now BAS Manan jaldi SHADI KARTE ...

Abh next post soon Anu
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Posted: 8 years ago
#28
Wow..
poor manan intne saare intruders unke romance ke beech
Aryaman was on nyonikas side.. this was shocking
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Posted: 8 years ago
#29
Hey dear thanks for the update...
I just really loved the update...
Manan are happy together...
I can't believe aryaman is behind all this ...
He always shows that he is happy for nandu but he is so evil...
Manan will overcome this trouble together ...
Plzzz dear try to update soon...
I just can't wait to read further...
I know every good thing comes to an end but I really miss this story...
Bye take care
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Posted: 8 years ago
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finally this ring mystery got solved...

i didn't expect aryaman will be the reason behind this ring stealing... yeah I always had doubt on him that he is somehow is negative character. as when he n nandini had gone for shopping n coffee n when they came back at that night in their bedroom when nandu fell on manik n there was some pins on their bed n somehow reason was aryaman... i had my doubt on his legality..


nandini...its must be difficult for her to digest this news... 😔 feeling sad for her ... when ur friend turns out to be your enemy that hurts. friendship breakup is more painful than couple breakup...!

morning scene was very good ...
loved the way fab5 cribs for nanduz attention... just loved it...

the way kabir n dhruv came to their room from balcony... heheee

manik not Sharing nandu with anyone... n making her sit on his lap n caging her in his arms...that was very cute scene...
n dhruv hugging them from behind...hayeee

just loved it...

kya kya kya...story finish hone wali hai???? hawww

whatever it is... come with its season 2 on wattpad...right after its ending...okay??



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