Bas Mere pas Raho. (Ch1)

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CHAPTER 1

"welcome Mr malholtra in agarwal industry .
Its nice having you here" abhi exclaimed
happily offering manik a handshake.

"pleasure" manik returned the handshake
gently with thick profession skilled voice.

"deal ki baat kare" manik direct come to
point .

" ohh yes of course come" abhi said leading
him to meeting room.

AFTER MEETING

"i guess we can seal this deal" manik said
"thats great looking forward to work with
you mr malhotra" abhi agreed.

"mmm" manik looked confuse.
" where is maan uncle i didnt see him in
meeeting also" he finally said .

" oh dad anne hi wale the par meri sister ka
ajj concert hai toh woh waha hai" abhi said
apologetic .

"no no its ok socha mumbai jane se phele
unse mil ke jau" manik said .abhi thought for
some time and

"if you want you can come with me .mein
bus wahi jaa raha hoon concert attend karne
ke liye" abhi said hopefully."dad bhi tumse
milana chahte the"
!!"challein"

IN CAR

"wese tumhara flight kab he " abhi asked as
they have settled down in back seat
following three cars behind carry guards two
manik one abhi.

"11:00pm ko " short and simple answer.

" toh humare sath dinner karke janna" abhi
announced . Manik only nodded . He is
feeling restless and uneasy don't know why.

"we are here" as they enter a building
somewhat like concert hall covered with
poster and decorative materials. They both
get down.

"voice for good cause" manik read from one
of the poster.

" yeah actually meri sister yeh concert uski
NGO ke liye rakha hai.concert se jitne
income hogi sab NGO ke liye" abhi
exclaimed as they were walking in isolated
corridor following with guards as concert
has already start probably they were late.

" woh sirf jaroot mand ke liye gaati hai." he
added "kahti hai logo ke gaane wale bahut
hai, voice ki asali kimat toh tab ho jab woh
kisi ke kaam aaa sake" manik was lost in
word how can someone be like that? He
was curious to meet her .

Soon they reached a big hall full of people.
"so there is the last song " host announced
A guard make way for them to take a seat.
Manik saw maan .
"sorry dad " abhi take seat and apologise. "
mujhe laga tum last bhi missed kar doge"
maan said shaking his head and standing
from his seat.
"young man long time huh" he hugged
manik.
"hello uncle" manik returned the hug .

" acha hua tum yaha agaye sorry mein
meeting attend nahi kar saka"
"its ok unc..l." manik word is cut by melody
of someone playing a sitar.
"come come sit it has started" maan said
excitedly.
Manik try to look at the figure sitting in the
middle of stage with sitar but can't see due
to dim lights. Slowly the lights are on and a
fully decorative stage can be seen.

THEN he saw HER... Angelic her.

Nazar jo teri laagi main deewani ho gayi[/
B]
her voice. Its...Peaceful.
[B]Deewani haan deewani, deewani ho gayi


she raise her eyelashes through her long
wavy hair.spread over her red anarkali suit
with simple black finishing.
HIS favorite..

Mashoor mere ishq ki kahani ho gayi
Jo jag ne na maani toh maine bhi thaani
Kahan thi main dekho kaha chali aayi ...


her crystal black eyes reflect her soul.

kehte hai ye deewani mastani hogayi

her finger flows like air in sitar smooth and
fluent.

Mashoor mere ishq ki kahani hogayi
Jo jag ne na maani toh maine bhi thaani
Kahan thi main dekho kahan chali aayi
Kehte hain ye deewani mastani hogayi
Deewani haan deewani deewani hogayi


Zakham aisa tune lagaya
Deewani deewani deewani deewani hogayi
Marham aisa tune lagaya
Ruhani ruhani ruhani ruhani hogayi


Her lips move in sync with her every note.

Pehchan mere ishq ki ab to
Pehchan mere ishq ki ab to
Rawani, rawani, rawani, rawani hogayi
Mashoor mere ishq ki kahani ho gayi
Kehte hai yeh deewani mastani ho gayi
Deewani haan deewani, deewani ho gayi
Mashoor mere ishq ki kahani ho gayi
Jo jag ne na maani toh maine bhi thaani
Kahan thi main dekho kahan chali aayi


She close her eyes and he can't take his
eyes off her ...he just can't.

Kehte hai ye deewani mastani ho gayi
Deewani haan deewani, deewani ho gayi


she finished and a loud thunder of applause
break in hall . Smile at his direction .

HER smile ... its most beautiful thing he
ever see.
HER voice ...most peaceful he ever felt.

AFTER A WHILE.

Manik was not able to forget her face. So
gorgeous . Her sweet melody is continously
ringing in his ears. He want to see her
again. He want to meet her .

" Daddy" it is her . They all turn to see her
coming toward them smiling brightly. Sound
of her anklets filled the air of hallway.
she directly crushed on maan arms while
abhi ruffles her hair.!

" how was it?" she asked innocently.
"great marvellous iam so proud of you"
maan whispered emotionally. caressing her
hair.

"daddy" she whine lifting her head up from
his arms." no senti today" she said cutely.
Manik was continously staring at her without
even blinking. She will be death of him.
"ok baba, come i will introduce you to
someone" he pat her cheek

" manik meet my daughter Nandani" maan
introduce her to him.

"nandani" manik whispered ."Manik
malhotra" he offer his hand smiling lightly
with a shine in his eyes as she accept it.

Both abhi and maan looked at them
shocked. Becoz.
1st manik never offer handshake first.
And 2nd HE never smile.

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Eagerly waiting for next update.
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Awesome. Eagerly waiting for next update.
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awesome start
very curious to read further
manik is lost in nandini😃
as in love at first sight😉


pls continue soon and if possible can u pls pm me😊
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Manik ko nandini se pehli nazar me pyar ho geya kya? Love this first part. Update soon...
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Loved ur Story dear

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awsm start
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