MaNan SS-Still I LOVE YOU DISCONTINUED Pg 18 24/03 - Page 3

Interestin story line waiting for the nxt update
Thanx for a lovely story

Awesome,

Nice update...girl must be nandu...wld b interesting to know further...waiting for nxt

"Stop" Manik shouted and the car immediately stopped.He still felt her presence in the air.His heart is not ready to accept that she is far away from him.He got down the car and took his steps towards the crowd and made his way to see the lady.

Only god knows how much he prayed that it should not be her.But his heart stopped when he saw HER.His eyes filled with tears instantly and his legs shivered to take a step forward.But,having no other option other than being strong he went towards her who was lying lifelessly while her surroundings are gossiping about her.
She was in a pale saree and anyone couls easily tell that she is really weak by seeing her body.He wiped his tears and checked her pulse with trembling hands.
He got his breath back after feeling her pulse under his fingers.He immediately scooped her in his arms and ran towards the hospital.
"Sir,what's your name..??" Nurse asked having a form in her hand while the stretcher moved forward to the doctor.
"Manik Malhotra.." He answered and his eyes are sticked to the stretcher.
"And patient's name sir..??" She asked again.
"Nan...NANDINI..."He answered with shaky voice.
"Nandini Malhotra.." Nurse repeated the name while writing and Manik just stared at her but didn't stop her.
He so wanted his love to tag his first name but destiny had its own ways and he lost that love.
He sat helplessly while the doctor was examining her.
"She is too weak...She needs complete rest.." All Manik could understand from doctor is these two lines.
"Can I...Can I see her..??" He asked slowly.
Doctor nodded and he took his steps towards the room.
"I never thought I'd see u like this..I thiought u would be happy...after leaving me...but...what she is doing alone...that too in Mumbai...where is her husband...why is she so weak...and..." His mind started throwing questions to which even he don't know the answers and then his eyes fell on her feet which have some brown marks.
Tears dropped from his eyes seeing his love and he hesitatingly touched her feet.
She slowly opened her heavy eyes and saw the blurr image in front of her eyes.
Within no time,she started shivering at her place.
"Pl..please...I'm so..sorry...pleaaase..let..let me go..."She started repeating the words with the left over energy.
Manik was shocked with the words as he couldn't understand why she is asking him to leave her.He slowly moved forward and touched her forehead.
"Nandini...It's me Manik...see...shhh...relax...See I'm Manik..." He said moving close to her and then she figured out the blurr image.
"Ma..Manik..."She called his name weakly yet surprisingly.

Nice update
Really want to see where this story takes up..

Dear I love ur work too the extreme...keep writing

Amazing sweetie.. don't be upset..

Res!
Pakka promise will unres soon.. btw nice prolouge actually interseting!!
Baaki ke first two parts ka jaldi read karke review dugi..!! *wink*
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Waise i dont have any right to say as i dont read but that doesnt mean you will get upset from this nadaan chotu si bachi.. continue soon! *wink wink*

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A big huggy for u baby!! Kya updates the wah! I loved all of them!!

Starting from CS.. Dekh pehle bata du i got angry reading aryaman married to nandini but fir i thought that tu itni achi hai tune kuch socha hi hoga isliye aisa kiya.. i trusted u isliye ja ladki tujhe maaf kia..cabira fir se angel hayee maza aa gaya!!

Ab first part..manik is back yo! Kya baat to feel love in air..haye abhi bhi manik apni nandu se pyaar karta hai ye padhkar to mere dil me guitar violin sab bajne laga..haha thoda dramatic ho gaya! Aur ye kya manik aur shy ye kabse ho gaya!! haha but still update was amazing babes!!

Ab second part..hmm iske liye kya kahu samjh nahi aa raha bas itna kahugi ki ye bohot jaldi khatam ho gaya tha..yr abhi to padhna start kia aur inni jaldi khatam ho gaya!! But babes update was wonderful.. weak nandini strong manik cupid cabir aur khalnayak aaryaman..lolz! Khoob jamegi ye story jab mil jayege ye chaaro formula..Ahan i am loving it!!

Sorry kaan naak sab kuch tere pakad ke inne late review ke liye kya karu yr inna busy rehti ho but i hope ki tu apni iss nadaan si frnd ko maaf kar degi aur mera ye review tere chehre pe biggy biggy wali smile aur next update meko dedicate kar degi *rofling* aur late reply ko compensare kar dega!!

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