Manan Os - Stay Away !! (Completed)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hii again everyone !! Another OS on the way for all those who appreciated my first OS and those who loved that dark & possessive Manik😉
This story also includes possessive Manik...
So just read the glimpse and tell me ur views !!

Synopsis

Manik pulls Nandini away from Abhi's grasp and then shouts..
Manik : W*F!! How dare you touch her?? Who the hell are you?? She is MINE !! STAY AWAY FROM HER !!😡

Abhi smirked at him and asked Nandini

Abhi : Nandini kya tumhe koi problem hai agar main tumhe hug karo??

Nandini : Ofcourse not Abhi !😊

Manik stood there shocked while Abhi smirked again !
Nandini : Manik listen wo...

Manik just held her hand tightly and pulled her in a room. He locked the room and pinned her to the wall.

Manik : Toh tumhe koi problem nahi agar wo tumhe hug kare??😡

Nandini gulped.
Nandini : Manik meri baat...

Manik : F*****g hell answer me dammit!! Haan ya Naa?😡

Nandini also lost her temper and shouted back !!

Nandini : Fine! Haan koi problem nahi hai😡

Manik : Kyu?? (He shouted)

Nandini : Bcoz I love him !! (She too shouted)

She tried to walk away with that but Manik caught her and again pinned her to the wall. His hands digging in her waist while eyes showing anger, hurt, pain and betrayal.

Manik: Agar tumhe lagta hai ki iske baad i'll let you go and cry for you then you are so wrong Ms. Nandini Murthy !!
Coz I will never let you go!! You are MINE !! ONLY AND ONLY MINE !!!

So how was it?? Acha ? Bura? Bohot bura?😛
Please give ur reviews !!

Love,
Riya
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey...

Interesting!!! Very interesting... Hahaa its cool to see Manik get all angry n possessive..its annoying though...but its sooo attractive wen it comes to Manik!! Probably its the unique trait that helps us identify with him nd relate to him in a better way...

Eagerly waiting for this one!!! Update soon!!

Love,
Doyel 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice luved the glimpse waiting for the os
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Posted: 9 years ago
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The glimps is amazing..continue soon :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Manik and Nandini are in a relationship since last 3 months. Manik said that he is not sure about his feelings but wants to give them a chance. So Nandini said if they are not sure they'll not disclose their relationship to anyone.

They meet secretly and pretend when they are in college. With each passing day their feelings grew stronger. But none had confessed. Both were excited to take their relationship to a new level.

Manik was making preparations for his style of proposal which he was goin to execute on her birthday which was 5 days ahead.

But destiny had some other plans for both of them !!

***

TWO DAYS BEFORE NANDINI'S BDAY

Nandini was happily coming to college as she was excited for her birthday. It was her first bday with Manik and she was way too excited. She was walking through the corridor when someone pulled her in a class.

Nandini : Manik !😡

Manik : Aree waah ! Tumne toh mujhe bina dekhe hi pehchaan liya 😉

Nandini : Haa toh aise mujhe tumhare alawa kon khichta hai😡

Manik : Smart !😉

Nandini : Don't you know Nandini Murthy is already smart!😆

Manik : Acha ! So you want me to shut your smartness...Hmm??

Nandini widened her eyes and then stammered.
Nandini : Wo..woh Ma..manik tumne mujhe yaha kyu khicha??

Manik : Kyu tumhe koi problem hai??
Pulling her closer by waist.

Nandini : Manik ! Chodo kya kar rahe ho...class shuru hojayega.

Manik : Toh hone do! You think I care? (Nuzzling in her neck)

Nandini : Ma..manik please.

Manik : Please what Nandini?

Nandini : Let me go !

Manik : No! Not before this.

And with that he kissed her hungrily smooching the blood out her lips. While she surrendered and replied with equal passion. After good 10 mins he found her breathless and broke the kiss.

Manik (panting heavily) : I missed you !!

Nandini (panting heavily) : Manik kal hi toh mile the.

Manik pouted on this and said
Manik : Toh? Maine tumhe miss kiya toh kiya! Bas!!

She chuckled on this and he smiled.
After that they both went to their respective classes.

***

College was over and Manik was searching for Nandini. He couldn't find her anywhere. She was not picking up his call and he was now damn worried.

When he reached near the store room he heard some noises. So he went there to check. What he saw shocked him.

Nandini was hugging a guy and both were smiling. This increased his rage and he straight away went to them in anger.


Manik pulls Nandini away from Abhi's grasp and then shouts..
Manik : W*F!! How dare you touch her?? Who the hell are you?? She is MINE !! STAY AWAY FROM HER !!😡

Abhi smirked at him and asked Nandini

Abhi : Nandini kya tumhe koi problem hai agar main tumhe hug karo??

Nandini : Ofcourse not Abhi !😊

Manik stood there shocked while Abhi smirked again !
Nandini : Manik listen wo...

Manik just held her hand tightly and pulled her in a room. He locked the room and pinned her to the wall.

Manik : Toh tumhe koi problem nahi agar wo tumhe hug kare??😡

Nandini gulped.
Nandini : Manik meri baat...

Manik : F*****g hell answer me dammit!! Haan ya Naa?😡

Nandini also lost her temper and shouted back !!

Nandini : Fine! Haan koi problem nahi hai😡

Manik : Kyu?? (He shouted)

Nandini : Bcoz I love him !! (She too shouted)

She tried to walk away with that but Manik caught her and again pinned her to the wall. His hands digging in her waist while eyes showing anger, hurt, pain and betrayal.

Manik: Agar tumhe lagta hai ki iske baad i'll let you go and cry for you then you are so wrong Ms. Nandini Murthy !!
Coz I will never let you go!! You are MINE !! ONLY AND ONLY MINE !!!

With that he picked her up on his shoulder and opened the room and walked out. He threw her in his car and started his car. All the while she kept protesting and he didnt pay any heed to her shouts.

Within 10 mins they reached Manik's house. Manik dragged her inside and jerked her on the couch.

Nandini was crying till then and asked him.
Nandini : Why are you doing this Manik???😭

Manik : Wow!! Like seriously Nandini tum mjhe puch rahi ho ki main aisa kyu kar raha hu? Aur tumne kia woh?? Uska kyaa huh?😡

He grabbed her arm and pulled her to him digging his nails in her arm.
Manik : Kyu Nandini?? Why did you do this?? Hum dono ne decide kiya tha naa ki hum humare relation ko ek chance denge...Phir kyu?? (He shouted)

Nandini : Ma..manik listen wo tum...

Manik : Not.A.Word!!😡

Nandini : Manik lekin...

Manik: I said shut up !! (He roared)
And he pushed her again. This time she got angry.

Nandini : I won't !! Aur tumhe meri baat sunni padegi Mr. Malhotra!!😡

He turned with a jerk to her when she mentioned Mr. Malhotra.
Manik : Kya kaha tumne?? 😡

Nandini : Mr. Malhotra! Aur ab tum sirf sunoge!! Tumhe pata bhi hai Abhi kon hai??

Manik : Listen mujhe kuch nahi sunna tum...

Nandini : Tumhe sunna padega😡 Abhi ! Yes I love him !!

Manik closed his eyes and clenched his fists. She continued
Nadnini : You know why? Kyu main usse itna pyaar karti hu?? Kyunki Abhi mera BHAI hai !! Suna tumne??

Manik looked at her in shock. He opened his mouth to say something but no words came out.

Nandini : Kyu Mr. Malhotra? Ab kuch nhi bologe??

Manik (feeling very guilty) : Nandini...

Nandini : Don't ! Mujhe kuch nhi sunna...Kyu Manik?? Tumhe mujhpar itna bhi bharosa nahi tha?? Kya itna weak tha hamara relation?? 😭 I regret ke maine tumse pyaar kiya Manik!!

Listening this Manik went numb. She loved him and he failed her. He was guilty for doing this to her. He walked towards her and pulled her gently by her waist towards him.

She started struggling in his arms.
Nandini : Manik leave me! Let me go! I hate you !😭

Manik : I'm sorry Nandini ! I know maine galti ki hai...mujhe maaro, gussa karo, jo bolna hai bolo but please dont go away from me..please!

She started hitting on his chest murmuring 'I hate you' and at last hugged him when she got tired. And he kept on repeating 'I'm sorry'

Manik then broke the hug and sat on his knees. She looked at him confused.

Manik : Nandini! Yeh main tumhare birthday pe karna chahta tha but I only ruined it all and ab main aur wait nahi kar sakta. I know jab humne yeh relation start kiya tha tab maine hi tumse kaha tha ki main sure nhi hu. But trust me jaise jaise time jata gaya meri feelings aur strong hone lagi. Jabse tum meri zindagi mein aayi ho everything is perfect! And main tumpe trust karta hu sabse jyada but i..i'm afraid ki koi tumhe mujhse cheen na le. I don't want to loose you Nandini! You are my everything cz I LOVE YOU!! I LOVE YOU NANDINI!! Please don't leave me and I'm sorry !

Nandini was still crying but now with a smile on her face. She too kneeled down and cupped his face.

Nandini : Manik tumhe insecure hone ki koi zarurat nahi hai. I was and will be always yours. Main tumhe chod kar kahi nahi jaane wali. I LOVE YOU TOO MANIK!!

Manik got super happy listening this and hugged her tightly and she giggled in his arms.

Manik : Thankyou thankyou Nandini ! I love you!

Nandini : I love you too!!

The End


Okay so I'm thinking to stop writing as no one is interested in my stories. There is no response from ur side😭 Ek word ka comment hi kardo... agar koi response hi nahi toh kiske liye likhu??
I was thinking of writing an SS after this but now I wont!
Thankyou

Love,
Riya
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I think you love possessive Manik...so do I...
The os was wonderful ...specially Manik ka gussa ...bechare Abhi ko punch nahi laga...bach gaya..lol
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I love this one too...it's so fun to read possessive Manik... And plz don't think no one is interested in ur story... It's just that forum main silent readers jyada hain aur regular one kam...u r doing good girl...😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I just love possesive manik . Write more like this
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow... so beautiful!! I wish we'd see something like this between Manan. They re just love and you are an amazingly amazing romantic writer. Keep it up!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awsm story..short and seet..
insecurity relation bigaad skti hai but thankfully manan k beech sort out ho gya..
manik ka temper but koi ni nandini hai na sambhalne k liye..
it was nice story i loved reading it and enjoyed too..
so ab college k star couple finally manan honge..
thanks for the story and plzz dnt stop writing..

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