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Awesome update..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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chapter-5

Nandini and abhi gone to pick mukti from airport..after receiving her they headed to their home...and finally after getting party invitation from navya,they all pull up themself for party after a long time with eachother...but nandi being reserved personallity..she tried hard to decline party invitation but navya mukbhi being her best friend and after tons of melo drama and emotional atyachar..she finally gives in..

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Party venue
Mukti Abhi Navya are standing altogether ...sipping their drinks...and talking about eachother works and tour...while both hosts and nandi are still missing...

Navya-yaar..ab ye nandini kaha hai abtk ni aai...

Mukti-haan yaar...

Abhi-nandini ka chodo..evn party k dono host ka b pata ni h...

The moment abhi complete his sentence...all the lights get offf in the hall..and everyone starts to look here nd there in confusion..and then suddenly..from nowhere a spotlight fall between the guests..and here comens OUR HERO wearing black tux with red napkin in pocket and with red pipynon collar givong his suit finished standing under spotlight...facing his back towards guest and they all are looking him with confused faces..

Mukti with mocking tone-here comes..our playboy...with some actions..

And the very moment cabir comes and join three of them with a smile..and again the look towards manik..and he turns facing the guest strumming guitar with his breathtaking smile..and every girl in the hall leave a gasp seeing their fanatasy man..dream boy or a perfect greek god..and then our play boy throws guitar and here some more boys join him..

I know you Like me
You Know I like you
Lets get togather gal
You know you want too
Raat din aate jaate
Hoti hai sau mukalatein
Aaghe badhti hai baatein peeche chor de
Raste mein hai tehre aur bhi kitne chehre
Aaj phir apni aakhein unse jod le
Kho jayega Lamha yeh kho jayega
Mud ke na phir ayega Rahon mein usko rok le
Ho jayega hoga jo ho jayega
You know you so hot YOu're on fire
One two three go...
Mil gaye jo chora chori Hui masti thodi thodi Bas pyaar ka naam na lena
I hate Luv Storys
Mil gaye jo chora chori Hui masti thodi thodi Bas pyaar ka naam na lena
I hate Luv Storys
I know you Like me
You Know I like you
Lets get togather gal
You know you want too
Koi aas paas ho samjhe jo dil baat ko
Soche Na aaj yaar woh
KAl ki baatein
Pal do pal saath ho
phir na haathon mein haat ho
Bhulein na yaad aaye
Phir beeti baatein
Aankhon se keh ke yeh Sapna gaya hai
Subah ko jage to
Rasta naya hai
I m man whose got a plan
Need a gal who'll understand
you cud be my gal for sure
One two three go...

Mil gaye jo chora chori Hui masti thodi thodi Bas pyaar ka naam na lena
I hate Luv Storys
Mil gaye jo chora chori Hui masti thodi thodi Bas pyaar ka naam na lena
I hate Luv Storys
I know you Like me
You Know I like you
Lets get togather gal
You know you want too
(He goes towards many girls,gor dance and they all were more than readyvto give in..and finally,his eyes caught the most sexy girl in the crowd giving him most flirtatious and inviting smile..wearing red dress reaching her mid thighs..and showing her extra amount of cleavage..and he goes and dance with her romantically fully on his flirting mode...
Jo Bhi karna yaar kar
Duniya ka na khayal kar
Kehti hai jo bhi usko Kehne dena
Vaado se jo baat kar
Rakhna hai apne pass To
Jane de phir yeh dooriyan Rehne dena
Margi se chalti hai jaise hawaiyen
Waise hi hai meri saari adayein
I'll your n you'll be mine
But love n search is waste of time
YOu cud be my gal for sure
One two three go...

Mil gaye jo chora chori Hui masti thodi thodi Bas pyaar ka naam na lena
I hate Luv StorysMil gaye jo chora chori Hui masti thodi thodi Bas pyaar ka naam na lena
I hate Luv Storys
I know you Like me
You Know I like you
Lets get togather gal
You know you want too
I know you Like me
You Know I like you
Lets get togather gal
You know you want too
(Girls watching manik dreamly and he being a naughty guy..ready to test their patience by showing his full playboy image..just through his demanding expression and choose of the lyrics)
Raat din aate jaate
Hoti hai sau mukalatein
Aaghe badhti hai baatein peeche chor de
Raste mein hai tehre aur bhi kitne chehre
Aaj phir apni aakhein unse jod le
Kho jayega Lamha yeh kho jayega
Mud ke na phir ayega Rahon mein usko rok le
Ho jayega hoga jo ho jayega
You know you so hot YOu're on fire
One two three go...
(Manik sings and dances with every girl in the hall..with winks and flying kisses..instigating girls hard desire for him)
Mil gaye jo chora chori Hui masti thodi thodi Bas pyaar ka naam na lena
I hate Luv Storys
Mil gaye jo chora chori Hui masti thodi thodi Bas pyaar ka naam na lena
I hate Luv Storys..
(He ended dance with the same hottest girl whom he pick from the crowd..and the girl was on cloud nine while other was heartbroken..the both dance cozily and sensously fully enjoying eachother proximity..and while guys just roll their eyes..and he finally leave the dance floor fading away with the girl from crowd for some fun and romance in any corner..watching this navbir and mukbhi just chuckles...
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Awesome Updates love it continue soon
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Nice update..
Where is Nandini??
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
[center]chapter-6[/center
Mukbhi and navbir were chitchatting..still standing in a corner...

Navya-is manik ka..kuch ni hosakta...

Cabir-yaar navya..kyu mere bichare frnd k peeche padi reti ho...

Navya-tum tu chup raha karo...

Abhi-vese guyss..manik can nvr change...

Cabir-haan bt tb tk..jbtk use sudharne wali koi aani jati..god plzz..manik ko zameen pe lane wali koi pari asmaan se bhej de...

Navya-manik k to pata ni..pr hame us ladki k bare me soch k bht bura lg raha hai..pata ni kya hoga us bichari ka..bhale kare matarani uska..

They all laughs at nvyas drama..but a deep masculine voice interrupt there masti session...

Voice-what so funny..guyss..

Watching the guy..cqbir and abhi smiles mukti chuckles and navya rolls her eyes...

Cabir-nothing...

Manik-really..??

Abhi-yeah just having a lite hearted random chit chat...

Manik-well hii..abhimayu..

Abhi-hey...

Navya without looking at him in a emotion less voice-atleast lipstick mark to chuta lete...

Manik wiping his corner lips and other chuckles-oh..sorry..you guys know na..how girls behave around me so just that...

Navya nods sarcastically...

Abhi-vese party ka host tha kaha..

Manik-nothing bro..u just know na..k main khubsurat ladkio ko akele ne chor sakta..and being the host its my responsibility..to bs vohi puri kr raha tha...

Abhir laughs while mukti sarcastically nods and navya rolled her eyes...and thn manik notices mukti...and say an awkward hii..

Manik-hey mukti..hows you..??

First mukti get surprised bcoz it was the first time..after their schul someone took initiative to talk or to face eachother...thn finally..

Mukti-well hello..em good how abt you..

Manik-em too very well..so hows your trip...did u won your project..

Mukti lil surprised-how do you know..well you know I nailed it..

Manik-cabir told me..I knew it..u are always best congratulations...

Mukti smiles-thnxxx..

Cabir surprisingly-wo..wo..wo..finally my two bst frnds frm childhood..talked after 6 years...oh my god..and trust me its a good start..

Manik-Agr mukti nahi..to kisi na kisi ko to step lena hi thana..so after so many years I tried to be a lil formal..and us baat ko itne saal ho gae hai...so may be..hame ab bhul jana chahiyeMukti-yeah...and jis wajah se hamari frndship me darar aai thi jb vo wajah hi ni..to us past ko yaad krne se kya faeda...

Cabir-mtlb you guys..forgiven eachother..

Mukti-forgivness ki koi baat hi ni hai...bcoz he was nvr at fault I just misunderstood him

Manik-thn y u nvr took initiative..I thought u hate me..whatever had happened in past...

Mukti disagreed-no manik I never hated you...its just that I was hasitant..to talk to you..thats it..

Manik smiles to her and she too smiles and thn they both hug...

Manik-i missed you sis...

Mukti-i missed you too bro...

Manik-mukti...i know the past was not easy...and muje pata chala,whatever had happend after that..

Mukti-yeah..sach to ek din samne aana hi tha..nd main past kb ka bhul chuki hu..that wasnt you..you toh just tried to save me..from my friend of a bitch and jerk boyfriend..and unke chakkar I lost you...

Navya confused-ek min ek min...hamari smj me ni aaraha tum dono kya baat kr re ho..tumhari bst frnd or ex boyfrnd k beech ye manik kese aaya..tumne hame kabi ni bataya...

Mukti-its a long story navya..mene bataya tha na abt my bst frnd and boyfrnd betrayal...so manik was the guy who tried to aware me..but I was a stubbirn idiot jo kabhi m ene manik ki suni hi ni...and you know what in college..manik was like brother to me...

Navya shocked-hey matarani..aaj hame pehli baar pata chala..ye rakhshas ko b kisi ladki ki feeling ki kdr hai...em impressed for the first time...

Manik sarcastically-thnxx for compliment navya g..mera zindagi ka to maksad hi yahi tha..to impress you...

Navya rolls her eyes-whatever..(they all laugh)..to fir hua kya tum dono ke beech or tumne hame kabi bataya ni manik was too the part of that raita...

Mukti-actually..me manik cabir dhruv harshad alia..were a gang in college we were bestest of frnd..me and harshad were in relationship frm ninth standard..and thn in our inter skul frst year bcoz of different stream we seprated manik cabir dhruv harshad in same stream..me alia in same stream...and in our inter frst year..we met..soha khurrana the bitch...that tym she was the hottest girl in the skul and manik malhotra was the sexiest playboy..and in their first encounter..they both attracted to eachother...and the problem was that..soha was in my class..and me and alia become their frnds..and slowly we started to get close to her..and finally we trio became...the sexiest three...and soha was unknown..with the fact that manik is my frnd bcoz we usually meet them in free priods or recess...and being the new girl and late admissioned she spent her free time in library...bt thn she finally met with the boyss...and in their frst meeting..soha was shocked to know that am frnd with manik..but I was unknown with fact that they both are staelthily hitting on eachother from so long...when me and alia came to know abt this..being her best friend we warned soha abt manik playboy and heartbreaker image bcoz we thought she is an innocent soul..but muje kya pata tha that she was a f**king bitch...so being a blind gf I asked her to be frnd with harshad..and when manik got tired of soha to he left her..and I was unknown with the fact I thought soha was ignoring manik but vise versa..so she started to hitting on harshad...and manik came to know abt harshad cheating on me..and he thousand times told me..but I never blvd him...I thought manik is doing this bcoz soha is more being friendly with harshad not him...and was ignoring him...so I asked him bcoz of his nasty needs he cant manipulate me against them...so we started to argue..and ek din wo argue itni badi hogi..k hamari frndship me bht badi darar aagai..and we swore not to interefere in eachother life..and this is how I lost my one and only brother...and after that our farewell came..and harshad was cheating on me from last 1yr and finally I caught him on farewell day...he was makingout with that bitch on staircase...and without informing..I ran away from there..and locked my self in room for more then aweek doing nothing but crying and shut the world from me...and again finally bracing up my self after weeks..I face the world with determination..and the first thought in my mind came was manik..and I felt guilty...for not believing him..so I tried to reach him...but muje pata chala k..manik and dhruv flight to london and alia to france..and I got broken and leaving with the guilt...

Manik shocked but side hugged her-u were..suffering this much thn why u never came to me..(wiping her tears)..I always thought u still hate me..evn after letting go harshad...

Mukti-no manik nvr..is just that I never got courage to face you..I never overcome with the guilt of hurting you...

Abhi-mukti..baby why you crying..is harshad still effect you..???'..

Mukti-no em nt crying bcz harshad effect me..its bcoz my and manik differences effect me...

Abhi-thn y invr known..abt the special bond btwn you two...

Mikti-bcoz..whenever I talked or thought about manik..I felt my chest heavy..its feel like am drenched in tons of guilt...I felt my self loser...

Manik-no mukti its nothing lyk that...I always found you a grt frnd it is just their fault..who never valued your frndship they are unlucky..you are not a loser..they are...

Abhi-so finally..everything setlled btwn you..two..

Manik smiling -ofcourse...lets past be the past...

Everyone-yeah...

Manik -by the way...dhruv and alia are coming india for their wedding...

Mukti shocked-what..when how...u guyss didnt tell me you are in contact and cabir you...its been years..mene unse mila ni kb aarahe..

Cabir-yaar..dnt freak out...evn me b contact khu chuka tha..vo to jb manik india aaya..tb mera unse again connection hua..and tu or main work k chakkar me..kabi tym hi ni mila to catch up the things...bt haan..in dono k weeding k bare me evn muje b ni pata...so ddhruv being manik cousin obvio use hi pata hoga...Manik-actually..they are coming after two weeks..and shadi Chandigarh wali haweli se hi hogi...thn daima and buasaab will decide wedding date...

Cabir-atleast..kisi k to luv story puri hui...

Abhi-thank god mukti k luvstory puri ni hui..vrna main to kawara mar jata...(they all laugh)...

Next part will definitely have nandini..so waittt...and so sorry..for not showing nandini..but told you..just trust the story...and please please please...give feedbacks..and appreciation..it really means a lot to me...
Thankyou.. :-)
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Awesome update...
Flashback was amazing..
I am happy because pura group ek sath ho gya..
Excited for Manik and Nandini nok-jhok 😉
Continue soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
chapter-7

Scene continuation..

Manik-well guyss...hamsb yaha pr ...abhi vo tumhari reporter frnd...hai kaha...

They all smiles knowing..maniks real intention...abhi was abt to answer but before him navya jumps in btwn..

Navya confused-how do you know her...tum usse kb mile...

Manik-huh!!cabir..tune tere lady love ko btaya ni..k nandini ne hi mera interview..lia tha...hmm

Navya glares cabir thn again turns to manik-and you...stay away from her..she is not like your other flings ok..!!!

Manik nods sarcastically-yeah yeah yeah!!!...by the way cabir lets meet our guest first..vrna vo log sochenge unhe invite krke hosts khud hi.lapta hai..

They both walked from there..

Abhi-vese yaar ye nandini hai kaha...

Mukti-haan navya..call kr use...

Navya on call-hey..nandu...where are you..kbse wait kr re hai...

Nan-navya vo sorry..am just on my way..

Navya-jaldi aa..we are waiting...byee..(hanged up)

Abhi-kya bola...

Navya-she is on way..vese manik nandini me itna interest kyu le raha hai..

Mukti-vo kis ladki me ni leta...

Navya-yeah..bt ek baat to hai..abtk muje lgta tha manik kisi k b care ni krta...nd jb usne mukku ko hii..bola I was more than shocked..yaar..muje lgta tha..he is the most stubborn and egoistic guy..islie vo kabi tuje greet ni krta..but I was really shocked that rakshas was brother to you..I still cant blv that manik too has a soft and caring side...

Abhi-vese iwasnt shocked..kyu muje hamesha se lgta tha..jesa manik dikhta h..vo vesa ni h...

Navya-abhi tu chup rahe..tuje to her..negativity me b positive dikha hi krta h...

Mukti-but nvya seriously ye sach hai...manik ko tumne kabi smj ne ki koshish hi ni ki..vo dil ka bura ni h...and ek baar manik jise apna maan leta hai...chahe vo uske sath jitna b bura,kr le...bt kehne k lie to vo nafrat hogi..but manik kabi usse nafrat ni karta..bs ek baar dil se maafi r manik.use hamesha k lie maaf kr deta h...islie to vo kuch b kare ya tum kuch b kaho..main and cabir kabi use islie ni bolti..kyunki hm dono se behtr manik ko koi ni janta..r mere and cabir k lie manik ne jo kuch b kia h..shyd main kbi bata ni sakti...

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Skip time...
Navya and mukti werr standing talking with random women in party snd guys attending bussinessmen..

Navya-yeah..mrs sahani..definetly we will come...

Mrs sahani-thanks mrs dhawan and mrs thakkar..I will be glad..agr aap mere NGO aaoge...

Their talk interrupt ed by abhi...

Abhi to mrs sahani-excuse me..and navya mukti come...He excuses with both..

Navya-kya hua...

Abhi-vo actually..nandini ni aapegi ..

Mukti-wht bt kyu...

Abhi-yeah everything is fine...but actually..HOTEL RAGE me kuch tarrorist ne blast kia hai..snd thn building ko aag laga di hai..to nandini directly..uski coverage k lie chali gai h...and muje b ab vahi jana hoga..u all know na...k nandini apni professionalism me koi b risk le sakti hai..just for a bst coverage..so byee..

Abhi ran from there while mukti and navya,just shout for him...

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Outside hotel rage...

When nandini reached there with her co workers...she found the scenerio heart wrenching...The area was crowded...every victim of the incident was crying shouting...and some were shouting for help...police and ambulances...running from here to there..media reporters were busy in capturing..building was burning prodigiously...

Nandini-oh my god...!!!mitali tale out the camera..rahul take out stand and start to cover it...fast...

Mithul-yes..mam..ok now get ready...

Nandini wearing mike-is it connected..with studio..

Mitali-yeah...

Rahul-ready mam..start..

(Skip,time...)

Nandini-jese ki aap sb yaha dekh sakta hai...hamare desh me aaj fir aatankiyo ni hamare hi logo ke beech ek bada hamla kia hai...ap sb dekh sakte hai,ye building kis tarah se aag ki lapto me jal rahi hai...aatankio ka to pata ni...pr abhi bhi..shyd sare logo ko building se bahar surakshit nikala,nahi,gaya,hai..firefighter..or IRF k hisab se..building me abhi bhi 10 se 15 log maujood hai...jinhe sbhi nikala ni gaya hai...

When nandini was...ranting news..something caught her eyes..and she asked to cameraman to stop recording..and she ran from there...to a fire fighter...

Nandini panting-excuse me...vo vaha..ek bacha fasa hua hai..building k peeche side me...pls aap pehle use jake nikalo..

Fire figt-mam dekhiye..piche wali building me aag puri tarah phail chuki hai..lagbhag waha phase kisi ko b nikalna namumkin hai...r waha se sb pehle hi nikale ja chuke hai..r agr ek bacha bach b gaya hai..to ab hm shyd hi use nikal pae..to app pls abi,jae...

Nandini frowns-what the hell...ap yaha logo ko bachane k,lie hi aae ho..aap kese keh sakte ho..u cant save himm..u have too..vo bachaa..ro roke apni jaan de raha hai..or uski maa vaha pagal ho ri hai..so plz kuch b kr ke use bachaie vrna vo mer jaega..(crying)

Fire fighter angrily-dekhiye aap hame hamara kaam mat bataiye...us ek bache ko bachane k lie hm apni jaan musibat me thodi dalenge..r hame r phase logo ko b nikalna h...to plzz aap jaiye...

Nandini disgusted-kese insaan ho aap..vo bichara mar jaega plzzz...

Fire fighter-to hm kya kare..konsa sb bachne wale hai..koi na koi to marega...vo b sahi...(nandini looked stunned)...hatiye hatiye..bht kaam hai hme...(saying this he walked out from there..)

Continued in next chappy
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#18
chapter-8

Nandini is crying and,worring looking towards the baby..who is shouting from the lobby window for help...but no one is saving him..and finally..forgetting everything..she just walked further with determination...and when she reached the door... one IRF officer block her way...

Irf-mam..aap ander ni jaa sakti dikhai ni de raha..kitni aag lagi hai...

Nandini-dekhiye plzz..us..us baby ko bacha lije...vo kbse waha phasa hai...plzzz...

Irf-dekhiye main us building me puri tarah aag phail chuki hai..waha jana or bachana na mumkin hai..to plzz app.jaiye...hatiye yaha se..(saying this he drag her from there at a safe place after numerous pleading and ranting..but seems like man was deaf..and he walked away too..)

Nandini self thought-kya karu..kese bachau..use..god...aage se jaungi to ye log jane ni denge..(she starts to think..and suddenly something caught her eyes...)yes..us khidki se jati ho..kisi ko pata ni chalega...

Nandini stealthily walks toward a window...and starts to climb...and sudde people around noticed her..and they shouts snd run towards her...nandini crew member to notices her...and they to call for her...people before reached her..but she climbed successfully...leaving everyone shocked and confused...

Mitali-oh god..mam is inside now..ab hm kya karenge...

Rahul-yaar..pata ni vo ander kya kr ne gai hai..

Naira-hope she is fyn...

Voice-hope??who should be fyn..???naira.. /???...

And they three freezed at their places listening familiar athoritive voice of their bosss...

Three shoked in union-SIR!!!'''and their eyes popped out from socket...watching this..abhi frowns in confusion...

Abhi-what..itne shocked kyu ho...or nandini kaha hai...

They all start to tremble in fear...

Naira-sorry..vo actually..mam..mam.na..

Abhi demanding voice-mam kya..kaha hai nandini..

Rahul stuttering-sir..ac..act..actually..mam na..vo vaha...

Abhi angrily shouts-SHUT UP...or btao nandini kaha hai...

Mitai closed her eyes and state sir wo nandini ma'am Ander hai
Abhi confused-what..

Mitali panting in fear-vo mam..pata ni kb hotel k ander chali gai...

Abhi shocked-WHAT!!!!!'...nandini ander hai kb..kyu kese...

Naira-sir pata ni..hmse shoot rokne ko kaha or fir pata ni kaha chsli gai..or thodi der baad hme hotel k piche se chillane ki awaz,aai..jb waha gae...to dekha logo ki bheed thi..pata and nandini mam khudki k ander climb kr ri thi...

Abhi angrhily and worried-idiotss...

And he ran towards where nandini
had gone...Inside hotel...

[Nandini POV]

I am walking in the corridor...almost everything has burnt everything is looking dark, I still can feel the burning smell..and dont know where is the boy..am shaking with fear..but still am determine to save the lil innocent life..after whatever has happened outside...I am still shocked how can a human be heartless and merciless towards another human..today,somewhere I am feeling ashamed on humanity...

All the way to the corridor thinking all this I reached a place..which is burning terribly..nothing is in vision...and there I start to look for the boy..but he is no where to be seen..then suddenly..I heard a sob..and I start to chase the direction..and finally I realised it is coming from burning room..and I tried to get in...but door was burning furiously...and my eyes caught the room window and I jumped inside...the room was burning hot...I saw a lil boy sitting in a corner like a ball weeping and sobbing..he was just looking abt of 5 or 7 yrs old...

Nandini-baby..come ..(he was so scared thst he nodded in no)...hey relax...am here to save you come...

Finally...he agreed and came near me

Boy-really???'''

i nodded..
..but he was looking a lil dizzy...so I took him in my arms..

I tried to walked out...but burning door locking our way..so I turned to see the same window from where I sneeked in...firstly..I hang the baby outside thn I climbed out from the room and again started to walk..from the same way..frm where I have came...but I realised..now fire has increased..and making my tries difficult...to came out..and burning wood planks and pieces started to fall in my way...so I took my jacket and wrapped around the boy so that he wont be hurt...and again started to walk and tried to found new way to get out...finally I reached reception...front door almost has burned so I have to take cabinet door...and I walked there...and now I too start to feel a bit week...but I cant show..bcz already fright boy will fright more...walking after few secs..I saw a ray of hope...there is a large window showing way outside ppl are running from here to there...and I felt myself smiling...

Nandini-look..baby..we finally abt to get out..

boy looked me with questioning eyes..as if askingg for assurance...and j nodded with smile he too smiled...I rushes to window in attempt to get out from here..but bfr we reached..a huge burning plank...fallen in my way..blocking our way to go out..and I almost thought the hope of getting out from here..but I cant give up so easily...so finally,I decided to take risk...I drop the boy to ground...i saw a rod on ground..I took it..and tried to shift from window...it was hard to replacing it..but I have to do it...and finally..I succeded..again I took the boy in my arms..and felt my self more dizzy..and my eyelashes heavy..but I gathered all the strength..and climb the window...

Yes!!!finally...I got out...my god..am feeling myself smiling fully..as if a baby got his fav chocolate...but hey...again I start to felt my head and eyelashes heavy...my body is getting loose...and I unintentionally..drop the boy from my arms...Outside


Abhi and others were pacing to and frow worriedly outside...

Abhi-yaar ye nandini..abtk bahar ni aai..or ye fire fighters...ye kbse use dhondne gae hae...

Mitali eyes popped out and scream s-SIR!!!nandini mam...

They all turned to look nandini...who is trying to climb out from window with a baby...they are not qble to see clearly bcoz of fire smoke...but they felt...nandini..feeling unconscious...and abhi was abt to run to her...but they saw nandini nvr hit the floor...but a pair of arms hold her...and they still are nt able to see the face..the figure took nandini in arms in bridal style..and walks towards them...ripping the smoke...and when they saw,the person their eyes got wide in surprised...

Abhi and crew-MANIK..!!!!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow awesome part..
Nandini is doing great job..she saved a little child..
Manik entry was amazing
I like it...
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
chapter-9

[Manik POV]

Me,and cabir are attending our guest..while my phone rang...flashing my PAs number..so I picked...

Me on call-hello..WHAT!!...how..ok we will be there soon...

Actually,it was indeed important call..the news my PA told me...I got shocked..he told me..that our foreign deligates..who were supposed to come tomorrow for an important project they were staying at THE HOTEL RAGE..who has been targeted by terrorist...so now me and cabir have to rushed there..we have to be hospitable to them..bcoz they came india for our projects...

Me hastily-cabir...

Cabir-yeah...

Me-bro there is a problem...Actually..in which hotel our foreign deligates are staying has got targeted by terrorist...we have to rush man...

Cabir shocked-what..!!!

Me-yes...come on man we have to rush...

Me and cabir went to navya and told her abt the situation..what she told us left us numb. ...that abhi and nandini are already gone there...then we asked her to take care of guest and we walked from there too..

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Me and cabir reached there and start to look here and there,but found nothing and no one..every single person just rushing and running here and there,we were not getting where to go and who to ask. Then finally..I decided to search them seperately cabir rushed towards front and I rushed behind the building.

I reached the area which almost has burnt completely. I felt pity on the person who had been still stuck there. Perhaps,must be dead till now. I was just rushibg from here to there what I saw I got freeze at the place,I wasnt understanding anything. I saw nandini almost had jumped from window and panting heavily with a baby in her arms wrapped in a jacket..it must be hers, I guess...and her face was looking tired exhausted and dusty. But the point is what is she doing here and in this condition.So, I thought to approach her and just took two step towards her...I felt she is abt to fall..or feeling dizzy..and then before she hited the ground I rushe to her and caught a hold of her arms. I was just looking at her beautiful tired face but then I heard some people crying near me. I turned and found the boy who was with nandini,a man and a woman is hugging him and crying..they must be his parents. Shooing the thought of boy and his family I lift nandini bridal style in my arms and started to walk further, gaping at her and lost in thoughts..what actually she was doing with the boy,how she got in this condition,why she is looking exhausted. I zooned out from thought by a figure who rushed towards me and stopped in front panting heavily. I looked up and found abhi. He was looking hell worried.

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Abhi-thankgod manik..u reached on time..hey but what happened to her.

Manik-she fainted..lets go took her to hospital.

Abhi-i dont think they will take her. Cox almost all the hospital has filled with the incident victim.

Manik worried and suggestively- yeah right..so lets take her my home..and thn call my family doc he will check her.

Abhi nervously-u sure!!

Manik a bit loud-yeah..sure as hell..now lets go..get the car..

Abhi sits with nandini backside while manik on driving seat. Checking her from rear mirror every now. And finally they reached home.Manik took her to his room and made her lay down on his bed.thn abhi calls the doctor...

Doctor reached in half our and checked nandini..while abhi and manik look tensed...after checking nandini..doctor start to write prescription and manik being impatien ask.

Manik panicked and bombared all ques on doc-doc..is she ok...what had happened to her..how much time she will take to get her consciousness back..

Abhi watched manik with shocked expression. As if he saw some ghost,he was thinking that why manik is being worry for a person who has been stranget to him before his interview.

doc-mr malhotra...look,there is nothing to worry its just that,some smoke filled in her lungs thats why she having problem in breathing.now I injected her she must be fine and get her consciousness in some hours,dont hive her stress and ask her to take rest as much as she can. Now I will take leave,take care of your sister be a good brother to her...

Listening docs last line manik eyes popped out from socket and abhi started to laugh hysterically. Manik glare him and turns toward confused doc.

Manik angrily-I am not her brother nor she is my sister.how on earth this thought came in your mind doc. She cant be my sister ever.

Doc-oh..am sorry mr malhotra..but its you...everyone knows you as a playboy..so she cant be your wife or gf. And seeing you this much concerned left me to think that she must be your sister. So sorry...

Manik-its ok..

Doctor walks away from there and manik turns to laughing cabir and glare him.

Abhi laughing-seriously..bro and sis..kh my god...I cant blv now someone actually claimed you as nandini brother...

Manik furiously-shut up..sister..huh!!my ass...

Meanwhile abhis fon rang-shit mukti..manik I will receive it thn come...

Manik nods,and when abhi walk out from room he look at nandini and walks towards her and sit beside her on bed. And start to drool on her while caressing her hairs lightly. He was observing her everysingle features bcox for the first time he was watching her from this close. He found her more beautiful from near. Her silky black long hairs,on which he can runs his finger all day long,her big dove shaped eyes with long eyelashes,her rose petal like pink pouty lips, to which he can kiss untill it get swollen and her long cylinder neck which he can fill happily with his hickeys and love bites happily,he laughed at his thoughts and again stare at her face..it is so angelic still being so tired and without any make up..but still his face and eyes speak something else..something so much painful...This girl is really different from the girl he dated she actually have power to make MANIK MHOTRA worried for her...he too dont know why he was worried for her may be beacause she is a pure soul,who without thinking abt herself her life just jump into fire to save a child who actually isnt nothing to her. Nowadays where this kind of crazy girl been found..she really is an angel and a tough girl..not like the one who just start to cry if their nails tip got broken a lil...he again laugh and stared at her for a long time..caressing her face and hairs...

Manik whispers in her ears-when you will wake up ANGEL!!!!!!!!!!!

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