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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHAPTER 1 part 2- Manan's meet...
Hlw guys I m back with a new chappy...so read like and comment...guys if u all have any suggestions regarding my story ...feel free to write...without much talks lets start our chapter...
Scene- night
Location- restaurant
Manik has arrived and mr kapoor was waiting for him...
Mr k: aiye aiye mr malhotra...
Manik: I m sry mr kapoor...apko itni baar mere ghar se wapas jana pada...
Mr k: are aisa kabhi kabhi ho gata hai...
Manik: let's discuss about the deal...
Mr k: of course... Mr Malhotra Hamari yeh jo project hai profit Mein Based hai ... if you can gain a lot of profit by a project ...by the way Hamara project mein level of expenses is high and my khosis Karoonga ki Aapko Hamari project may koi bhi dissatisfaction na ho...
After that Mr K started explaining Manek about what is the is the project all about
After sometime the conversation over
Manik: pk Mr Kapoor I am agree to your agreement but Mujhe Umeed hai ke aap mujhe disappoint Nahin Karenge...
Mr k:so mr malhotra deal toh sign ho gaya hai its time for celebration...lets go to the near by bar...aj toh celebration banati hai
Manik: actually I am not in a mood to join...u push ahead...ap sab jaiye and party hard
Mr kappor: dont be a spoil sport manik...we just signed such abig deal I dont want to hear a single word u have to go...
Maniks provo: this is how I got dragged to this place a cripy kind of place actually koun anna chahega idhar...people drinking dancing with the girls ...so much negetive energy and mr kapoor got busy after entering the bar...some totally drunk rolling on the ground and some were taking drugs in the side...girls were dressed in a cheap kind of way...two girls came to us and lead us towards the table...soon everybody was enjoying except me...aghhh...I want to get out of here any how...some cripy kind of female trying to get close to me ...I somehow managed to save my izzat...giving them a stern glare...shooting daggers at her...soon she swallowed audibly in fear and flew away in jet speed...
Manik: yeh kaha le aye mr kapoor mujhe...the place I hate the most...oh I cant stay here any more...I m leaving...manik got up and was about to leave when there was a announcement...
hlw everyone...welcome to oir bar...i think ap sab apne mind ko relax karke full enjoy kar rahe ho...ap ki josh or apko aur jayda relax karne...taan oir maan mein aag lagane aa rahi hai iss bar ki sabsi acchi dancer ... Nandini...
Everyone in the bar shouts: nandini nandini nandini...
Manik: cabir isske bare mein baat kar raha tha...dekhu toh koun hai yeh...
Nandinis entry...






Teri baahon mein jo sakoon tha mila
Maine dhoondha bahut par
Phir na milaa... aa..

Duniya chhoona chaahe mujhko yun(manik was looking at nandini and he was mesmorised)
Jaisay unki saari ki saari main(manik came back to his seat)
Duniya dekhe roop mera
Koi na jaane bechari main


Haaye, tooti saari ki saari main
Tere ishq mein hui Awari main(nandini eyes was filled with tears)
Haaye, tooti saari ki saari main
Tere ishq mein hui Awari main..

Koi shaan bulaaye(nandini comes to manik)
Koi daam lagaaye
Main bhi upar se hansti(nandini offered manik a glass of wine)
Par andar se haaye..(manik refused to drink)


Kyun dard chupaye baithi hai(eye lock between them)
Kyun tu mujhse kehti hai
Main toh khud hi bikhra huaa(nandini looks at manik,smiles and leaves)



Haaye andar andar se toota main(nandini moves and after him manik also moves after her)
Tere ishq mein khud hi se rootha main
Haaye andar andar se toota main..
Tere ishq mein khud hi se rootha main


Main jee bhar ke ro lun
Teri baahon mein so lun
Aa phir se mujhe mill
Main tujhse ye bolun:

Tu anmol thi
Pal pal bolti thi
Aisi chup tu laga ke gayi
Saari khushiyaan kha ke gayi..

Haaye, andar andar se toota main..
Tere ishq mein khud hi se rootha main

Haaye, teri hoon saari ki saari main
Ho.. par tere liye bazaari main!
After the song is over nandini disappeared from the stage...
Manik's eyes searched for nandini...
Manik: bhai sahab woh jo ladki yahan thi kahan gayi ...
Man: woh toh gayi usska working time khatam...

THE NIGHT OVER AND ITS MORING NOW...MANIK IS IN THE OFFICE...
Manik calls aliya...
Manik: hello aliya ...jara cabir ko bhejo...
Aliya:yes sir...
After sometime cabir arrives...
Cabir: han manik bol...
Manik was reading a file ...he keeps the file...
Manik: cabir kal wo jo restaurant mein meeting thi uske pas ek bar tha
Cabir: han hai toh...
Manik: uska jo woh dancer hai nandini ...I need all information about her...
Cabir: nandini- woh bar dancer...tumhe uska info kuin chahiye...tumhe toh inn ladkiyon se sakht nafrat tha...
Manik: shut up cabir...uss ladki...uss laki ke akhon mein ek dard kuch bahut bada dukh tha jo meine dekha hai...woh hass toh rahi thi lekin woh bilkul khus nahi thi...aisa laga ki woh wahan kisi aur reason ke baje se hai...kuch bahut bada...
Jitni jaldi ho sake I need the information...
Cabir: ok I will bring u...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Different story , nandu as bar dancer. And manan Meeting . Let's what make Nandini work as a bar dancer?? Continue soon. Thanks for the pm dear. Stay positive and keep smiling. Update soon if possible a little long one. Take care bye
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It was wonderful update dear...
Manik was so irritated to go to bar..
Manan came face to face...
Manik is curious to know about Nandini...
Let's see what happens next..
Thnxxx for the pm..
Continue soon...
Looking forward to read the further parts..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing update...
Loved it
Thanxx for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome

lovely

manik ke dil me nandini ko dekhkar kuchh kuchh hua

hope love jaldi hi ho jaye

update fast plz
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow..
their first meet is interesting.
I really liked it.

itss amazing.

lets see manik kaise dhunta h nandini k bare me.

m eagerly waiting for next update.
Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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CHAPTER 2
DEKHI RE DEKHI ...NANDINI DEKHI....
Manik is waiting on his cabin for cabir...but our mahan cabir has given no sign of coming and this has irritated our manik...manik is going to kill cabir today...tired of moving here and there manik launches him self on the couch. cabir's entry...
Directly kneeling down...
Cabir: bhai maf kar de...
Manik turns around...
Shouted...
Manik: cabir...but manik couldn't see cabir...
Arre kaha hai tu...
Cabir: bhai nicche...
Manik looks down...
Manik: uth...uth...haldi uth...
Kya hai...hai kya...
Cabir: bhai nandini ka ghar ka adress mil gaya...
And all the anger melyed as ice melts when kept in flame...and a wide smile flowed in his lips...
Manik: mil gaya...cabir...( manik gives a tight hug to cabir)
Cabir provo: baccha liya bhagwann...par mera dost to pura gaya...
Manik: chal dikha address...
Manik takes the shot from cabir...
Manik looks at and reads the address...
Manik: yeh kya...yeh toh ek basti ka adress hai...
Cabir: han toh woh wahi reheti hai...
Manik: nandini basti mein reheti hai...
Tears covered manik's eye...
Manik: na jane aisa kya hua hai...par mein pata laga hi lunga...
In the morning...
Manik got up early in the morning...which was really impossible...and the funny part is ...ghar ke sabhi servants manik ko aise dekh rahe the jaise din mein chand delh rahe ho...aur soh bhi pura tayar...up to date...
Manik: kya hua tum sab log mujhe aise kuin dekh rahe ho...kya mein koi celebrity huin...
All servants looked down...
Manik: nahi na ...toh back to work...
Driver cholo...
Driver: par sir kaha...
Manik: mein tumhara boss yah tum mere...
Driver:: sir ap mere...
Manik: cholo...
Manik arrived to nandini's basti...the condition of the basti is toatlly unhygenic...drains aee dugged...awefull smell...home town mosquitoes and other insects...
Manik gets down of car...
Suddenly some dirty boys of the basti have a high jump on manik...
Boys: yeh yeh...uncle...uncle...
Rubbing their dirty untidy hands on manik's attire...
And manik totally fed up...
Mqnik: go ...go from here...jao...
And now another boy came there...
Boy: arre didi aaa rahi hai...cholo...
And this boy took all the flow of dirtiness with him...
There comes nandini from the other side...
Boys go to her...
Boys: didi hamare saath khelo na...
Nandini: bachho abhi time nahi hai...bad mein...
Boys: didi kuch paise do na chocolate khane hai...
Nandini looks into her purse but she couldn't find a single penny in her bag...
Nandini: abhi toh nahi hai...baad mein dungi...
Nandini leaves manik follows her...
Nandini didn't had money so she has to walk the whole way...and so did manik also...
After walking some distance nandini stopped near a hospital and worked inside it...manik also followed her with a doubt...
Nandini moves to a ward where a small child ...must be of 6- 7 yrs old is sleeping on the hospital bed...his legs are banded...
Seeing him...ters made their way from nandini's eyes...
Manik was looking at the door...peeping inside...
Nandini: rahul...
Waving her hands through his hairs...
And the boy gets up...
Rahul: nandini didi...
Nandini: tu kisa hai bhai...
Rahul: didi payyer mein bohut dard ho raha hai...aur docter ne bola ki woh mujhe thik nahi karege kuinki ap ne payment nahi kiya...
Nandini: nahi ...nahi mere bhai...mein tumhare treatment mein koi bhi muskil nahi annne dungi...mein doc se baat karungi...
Nandini got up and moves towards doctor's cabin...
Doc: aiye miss murty...
Nandini: doc apne mere bhai ka treatment kuin band kar diya hai...
Doc: I m sorry miss murty but apne payment nahi kiya hai...
Nandini: but doc it's a huge amount...5 lakh koi kam amount nahi hai...mein paise de dungi...
Nandini sits on her knees folding her hands...
Plz ap uski treatment band mat kijiye...plz
Doc: it can't be helped...sorry miss murty ...
Doc moves out of the room...
Nandini still sitting down cries her heart out...so much of pain and no body was to listen...but jisne suna shayad wahi kuch kar sakta hai...only hope on ...MANIK...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I m angry on u...itna late update kiya woh bhi chhota sa

anyways...cute and emotional update

msniks impatience was cute

servants treatment to Manik was hilarious

so Manik getting to know d real outer world...

hope he helps her.. obviously he ll do

now update fatafat
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: KYYian

I m angry on u...itna late update kiya woh bhi chhota sa

anyways...cute and emotional update

msniks impatience was cute

servants treatment to Manik was hilarious

so Manik getting to know d real outer world...

hope he helps her.. obviously he ll do

now update fatafat


I m really sorry dear...exams the...abhi bhi hai...issiliye chotu sa uodate...but yeh story bhi chotu sa hi hai...par ab fatafat update dungi...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: MadhusmitaMm


I m really sorry dear...exams the...abhi bhi hai...issiliye chotu sa uodate...but yeh story bhi chotu sa hi hai...par ab fatafat update dungi...


😡i hate u ...online hai par phone mat utha...

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