Manan Romantic SS:Be Intehaan(Ch.7 Pg.24 1/11) - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: avneetmalhotra

Awsme n tooo cute n manik is confused aacha h ose oske feeling me bare me jaldi pta lg jaega n yes I m luving your stry


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved it... Waiting for more :-D
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kusum_s

Loved it... Waiting for more :-D


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Posted: 9 years ago
#54
Hey!!!
I just started to read your story!
Both parts are amazing!
Loving this story already!!
You write so well!
Aww Manan are too cute!!
Can't wait for more Manan scenes!
Love how everyone can see something between them!!
Haha Veebha getting jealous!!
Continue soon!!
I would love to get PM for this story!
Can you buddy me if possible, I can only accept, can't add anyone!!:)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 3

They settled down in the dining room and started eating. Nandini was sitting between Raj and Ashutosh (Nandini's father) while Manik was sitting in front of her.
Everyone were eating while Manik was busy trying to figure out his feelings for Nandini. Cabir noticed that Manik was not eating but instead he was deep in thoughts.
''Manik why are you not eating?'' Cabir asked but Manik was still deep in his thoughts so he didn't hear him.
''Manik?'' Cabir called him again and when he didn't reply, Nandini kicked his leg from under the table, breaking his chain of thoughts.
''Ouch. What the hell who kicked me?''Manik asked rubbing his leg.
''Your jaan.'' Neyonika replied with a smile.
Manik looked at Nandini with anger but his anger disappeared when he looked at her making an innocent face. He smiled and started eating.
''What? That's it? You won't say anything to her?'' Veebha asked and Manik just shook his head in no and started eating.
Manan's parents and Cabir smiled.
Nandini just kicked his leg again and when he looked at her, she sent a flying kiss.
''Well now that we are done eating, Raj and I have to go to meet a client.''
And they left.
''Hum yahan bacho ke bich kya karenge? Let's go somewhere Neyonika.'' Shradha (Nandini's mother) suggested to Neyonika and they left.
The rest went in the living room.
''I'm bored, let's play truth and dare.'' Mukti said and all agreed.
They all sat in circle and Mukti started the game.
''So Dhruv truth or dare.''
He thought for awhile before replying.
''Dare.''
''Okay so grab a broom and do your best tango.''
''I'll tell Pushpa to get the broom.''
After a minute Pushpa came with the broom and Dhruv started doing tango with it.
Everyone were laughing and Cabir recorded it and posted it on Instagram.
''Okay my turn. So Nandini truth or dare?''
''I think I won't like your dare so I'll go with truth.''
''Smart girl. So how and with whom was your first kiss?''
Manan looked at each other and burst into laughter.
''It was with Manik. I think we were 5 year old back then.''
''What?'' Veebha exclaimed.
''Yeah. We had seen a movie where the couple kissed and they said that it was magical and it made us curious so we kissed.''
''And how was it?'' Cabir asked.
''All I remember is saying that it was okay.''
''Oh come on, we both know that was a lie as I am an amazing kisser.''
''Shut up Malhotra.''
''Let's just continue the game.'' Veebha interrupted Manik who was about to reply to Nandini.
''My turn. Manik truth or dare?'' Alya said.
''Truth.''
Just then Nandini got a call and she excused herself.
''With whom would you like to have your last kiss?''
''Nandini.''
Before anyone could react, Nandini came back and they continued their game and didn't say anything.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: pdiyar193

Hey!!!

I just started to read your story!
Both parts are amazing!
Loving this story already!!
You write so well!
Aww Manan are too cute!!
Can't wait for more Manan scenes!
Love how everyone can see something between them!!
Haha Veebha getting jealous!!
Continue soon!!
I would love to get PM for this story!
Can you buddy me if possible, I can only accept, can't add anyone!!:)


Thank you 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
amazing part..
nandu is so cute.. "your jaan".. and manik smiled.. awww..
and woah!! first kiss at 5.. hehe!!
and vebha ko shock pe shock..
loved manik's answer ..
waiting for the next eagerly..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#58
Thankyou for the buddy and PM!!!!
You updated already!!!
Woo I'm so happy!!
Really getting into you story!!!
Awww Manan!!
Love how Nandini and Manik act with each other!
Awww when they said 'your jaan' kicked you!!
Hayeee!
Oh so he was her first kiss, my cuties!!
Awww Manik's reply was adorable! I hope Nandini heard him!!
Can't wait for the next part!
Continue soon!!!:)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59
hibdee dee .i have start read your story it.s amazing continue soondee manan as alwayse nice .veebha is not good vibes neh hena .
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60
thanks for pm
I loved it
please continue soon

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