Manan FF-Sometime destiny cheats(chapter-1 udated on page3)

Swarna17 thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
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Hola guyz!!! i'm SWARNA nd i'm a newbie here!!! i'm thinking of writing a ff based on one and only our manan!! so here is the prologue do tell me about it!! i will post it wgen u all will give responce about it. good or bad plz COMMENT


PROLOGUE
A girl of 17 years was sitting on a bed. it seems that she was not from this world. she was lost in her thoughts when suddenly the door opens nd a girl arround 17 came screaming- What are you doing here?? ha i'm calling you from last 10 minutes nanduuu...

Nandu- why?? what happend?? navya
Navya- oh nandu comeon yaar its your b'day net month
Nandu- so what?? its just a birthday na.

Navya became sad nd thought nandu i know u are still not recovered from that accident.. plz matarani aave her from betraying its 6month ... but them ashe chucked the thought
nd said-ohh nandu c'mon now nanu is calling us chalo ita dinner
nandu just hummed...

In mumbai:-
A boy arround 17 was just enjoyin with his friendsss.. but it seemss that he is not enjoying at all. He was lost somewgere... Suddenly his 1 friend c tapped on his shiulder and said Oh manik malhotra khakhoye ho?? everything ok right!!!

Manik- yeah!!! i'm fine dude!! nothing happend
boy- oh cm'on manik its me i know something is fissy ha tell me yrr
Manik-Ahh!!! cabir yaar nothing happend i'm telling you!! anywayss you all enjoy i'm just feeling tired... so i will join you all tommorow in college.. bye!!

Cabir said to himself something is really fissy manik malhotra!! us camp ke baad tu bhut khoya khoya rhta h pta krna parega!!




So tell me shiuld i continue it or just chuck it haan!
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CHAPTER1- PAGE3
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shaan... thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#2
Awesome prologue...
Sounds interesting...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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No, don't chuck it...
It is awesome dear...
And I love mysteries so please do continue...
I am hell excited to unwrap this mystery which has so much pain and heartache...
So do continue..

Keep writing...

Stay happy forever humesha,
CHAHNA
Swarna17 thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#4

Originally posted by: shaan...

Awesome prologue...

Sounds interesting...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...

Thank you dear!! its means allot and i will try to post it as soon as possible but i think not much people liked it.
Swarna17 thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: miss_writer

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<font color="#0000ff">No, don't chuck it...</font>
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<font color="#0000ff" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="5">It is awesome dear...</font>
<font color="#0000ff" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="5">And I love mysteries so please do continue...</font>
<font color="#0000ff" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="5">I am hell excited to unwrap this mystery which has so much pain and heartache...</font>
<font color="#0000ff" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="5">So do continue..</font>
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<font color="#0000ff" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="5">Keep writing...</font>

<font color="#ff0000" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="5"><b>Stay happy forever humesha,
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<font color="#ff0000" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="5">CHAHNA</font>

thank u chahna.. i will post it but i want a suggestion can u olz help me??
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Swarna17

thank u chahna.. i will post it but i want a suggestion can u olz help me??

Please go ahead I will be glad to help u
Swarna17 thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#7

Originally posted by: miss_writer


Please go ahead I will be glad to help u

umm. thatss so sweet of you and i think we are buddy ha :P hehe sry ha i'm little funny but what i'm saying that phle me kya post kru c.s ya fir chappy
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awsome

intresting prologue .

waiting for story to proceed ..
love the mystery..

cont ..

stay blessed ..
Swarna17 thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Manansamkhan

awsome

intresting prologue .

waiting for story to proceed ..
love the mystery..

cont ..

stay blessed ..

thank you dear i will try to continue soon and thankss for commenting its mean allot
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Swarna17

umm. thatss so sweet of you and i think we are buddy ha :P hehe sry ha i'm little funny but what i'm saying that phle me kya post kru c.s ya fir chappy

cs will be better dear...

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