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Posted: 8 years ago
Itna emotional update😭 manik has gone through soo much his insecurities will be there only nandu can console him n heal him waiting for next part
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Chapter 11-Am I forgiven baby?


Manik's POV..


She drove away...


I kept standing there lost and she didn't turn back..


Why would she? In my turmoils I broke her trust..


Why on earth I behaved that way when she assured me thousand times that she will support me and will be with me...


"What have I done?" I whispered to myself and felt a pat on my shoulder..


"You are losing the person who loves you beyond comparison!" I heard Veer saying and I turned to him..


"Tu ny Acha ni kiya Manik! Hmara na sahi us masoon ka tou khayal kiya hota? You want to die because of that b!tch and what about the angel in your life? The angel who is ready to support you for your whole life! Kya kasoor hai Nandini ka? Why are you doing this to her? Yar wo pagloon ki trha tjy chahti hai and you broke her trust so easily?" Cabir was showing no mercy..


"I thought dying is the solution!" I murmured in helplessness and Soha came in front of me..


"Manik! Veer bhai let go Nandini for you! I let you go for Nandini! Agr hum dono chahty tou tum dono kay beech misunderstandings creat kar skty thy but we sacrificed our loves for you both because we know how much it hurts to see our love ones in pain! Why are you being so heartless? Don't do this to Nandini!" She said softly and held my hand.


"Close your eyes and keep your hand on your heart!" She said placing my hand on my heart and I obeyed her. "Now tell us! What you see?" She whispered innocently and I concentrated for a second..


A blurry vision flashed in my head..


"Nandini!" I mumbled. "She is crying!" I whispered unconsciously and then opened my eyes with a jerk. I looked at Soha with frantic look. "Wo ro rahi hai Soha! Nandini she is crying bohat ziada!" I shouted worriedly and my grip on her hand tightened..


While Soha gave me a sad smile..


"Look at you! Sirf itne si baat say tumhara aur us ka ya haal hai! Socho agr tumhy kuch ho jata tou?? Will you be able to live your afterlife happily? And Nandini! The way she loves you crazily wo tou jeety jee mar jati!" Soha was spitting a bitter reality to me and I felt my whole body covering in the cold sweat of regret..


"Ya kya kar diya myny? What? What should I do guys?" I cried looking at all of them..


"Ask for her forgiveness!" Navya said nodding her head..


"She won't forgive me! Wo mjy maaf ni kary ge! I am so bad! Oh God why am I alive yet!" I cried in frustration and this time Cabir slapped me..


"Tu paida hoty he mar jata gadhy!" He growled angrily and I pouted..


"I am not talking to anyone! Sab maarty hain mjy!" I whined throwing my hands in the air and all started giggling, I too joined them. We all stared at each other for few seconds before running into each other and hugging each other tightly..


"Don't ever do this to us again!" Navya begged and I patted her head..


"If you will try to die next time I will kill you!" Cabir threatened me and all again giggled..


"I love you!" Soha whispered so so lowly but I heard it..


Awww! Soha I really respect your feelings...


"I hate you for making Nandini cry but now you have to mend it!" It was Veer's complaint..


We all parted away..


"So mission Nandini manao? Let's start?" Cabir said winking at me and other three were looking hell excited..


"Ok this is not at all funny!" I snickered at them and they all were smiling at me evilly..


"Why am I having a feeling kay tum log mera jee bhar k mazaak banany waly ho!" I said in a scared tone and they all flashed their teeth at me..


Cabir grabbed my wrist and pulled me back towards his car..


"Firstly we have to measure the intensity of Nandini's anger! Veer notes please!" Cabir said in a serious tone and I was being dragged with him while Veer immediately pulled out his cell phone to make notes..


"Measure the intensity? What the f---!" Before I could complete Veer interrupted me..


"Nandini is going towards farmhouse let's go!" He announced and we all jumped in..


Cabir drove at an exceptional speed and we reached the farmhouse in 5 minutes at the same time Nandini was stepping out of the car..


"Manik go go talk to her!" Cabir said hastily and I run behind her..


"Nandini! Hey!" I called out but she didn't stop. I ran faster and held her left hand but the next thing she did was totally unexpected as she turned back and slapped me with her right one...


What the...


"Don't you dare to touch me again!" She shouted..


"Baby baat tou suno!" I tried again once again holding to her hand and dishoom this time she punched straight in my nose...


"Ahhh! Yaar It hurts like b!tch!" I cried holding my nose back and Nandini pushed me away..


"You deserve more then this!" She shouted and stormed back in..


I stood there holding my bleeding nose..

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Cabir's POV..


"Soha! Nikalo mery 10 thousand!" I said in a victorious tone as Nandini slapped Manik..


We were looking at them from the car only..


"Cabir bhai!" Soha whined and I chuckled..


"Soha! We told ya! Manik pety ga!" Veer said laughingly and boom another punch..


"Here goes another one! Yayee!" I clapped happily and we all laughed..


I was having a feeling that everything will be ok...


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Manik's POV...


"Intensity of Anger-- Very High!" Cabir said in a sympathetic tone while girls treated my nose..


"Ouchhh!" I cried when Soha accidentally hit a paining spot..


"Sorry sorry!" She immediately apologized and I nodded..


"So first of all we will start with the flowers!" Navya announced and I looked at her with a hope!


"Will it work?" I asked with a pout and she nodded excitedly..


"Hopefully!" Her eyes were glittering..


"White peonies! Order done!" Veer said and I showed him a thumbs up.


It was 3 am of the night when the florist delivered so many peonies. Soha and Navya sneaked in Nandini's room. She was sleeping soundly and stuffed her whole room with the bouquets..


"Now all we have to do is to wait till she wakes up!" Soha said enthusiastically rubbing her hands..


"I am sure she can't resist flowers!" I said wickedly..


But sadly I was so wrong because next morning I was sleeping when she kicked open the door of my room..


"Good morning!" I exclaimed cheerfully but dishoom she threw the peonies bouquet on my face. Then she run back and came with another.


She threw all the bouquet on my bed and I kept sitting there helplessly.


Cabir, Veer, Soha and Navya too came running. They all stood like obedient students along with me as Nandini scolded us to her heart content..


"What do you think of yourself!!? Phool bhejo gay aur main maan jaoan ge? Stop it! Am not a fantasy girl! Am a---!" She was ranting and kept ranting while I was listening to her with innocent pout..


Other four were standing in their pajamas and were giggling when suddenly...


"And you four!" She turned towards them and they all jumped on their places in fright. Soha hide behind Veer and peeked from his back. "Stop helping him!!" She shouted and glared at them as if she will eat them..


"Aray! We are not helping him! Hmari trf say bhaad me jye ya!!" Veer said with a fake smile and Nandini showed him her finger..


"Stop acting!" She shouted again. "I know you all are a team! Dare not to fool me!" She retorted back and all nodded obediently..


"Nandini listen!" I tried lamely and she turned back to me with full anger which forced me to gulp the lump in my throat...


"Chup! Dare not to lie or to die!" She screamed and stormed out of the room..


"Itna gusa?" Navya said in a shock and I fell on the bed with a crying face...


"Don't get disheartened honey! I have a superb Idea in my mind!" This time we all looked forward to Soha's idea..

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I knocked Nandini's room door and waited anticipatedly..


God please is bari wo maan jye!


I looked at the sleeping kitten pair in the basket and read the tag tied with it's handle..


"I Am Sorry Love!"


It was Soha's idea and I was there with it..


I knocked it again but again no response..


"Nandini!" I called out for her and finally the door opened with a jerk..


"Kya hai?" She roared and I gulped nervously, faking a smile..


"Wo! Am sorry!" I said sadly and extended the basket at her..


She kept glaring at me and I was sure that once again she will throw the basket on my face but suddenly she snatched the it from me. With that she slammed the door on my face once again my nose hit it..


Fu*k..


"At least she took it!" I heard evil four shouting in happiness and I cried holding my nose..


"Now it's my and Cabir's turn to plan!" Veer exclaimed and I gave him a deadly look..


"Shut the f**k up! Stay away from me!" I shouted and stormed inside my room while the other four shameless creatures followed me with their stupid plan..

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Boom...


I busted the balloon which Cabir had thrusted in my hands..


"Seriously? 'Sorry! I am such an asshole' really??" I said in a cold freezing tone and Cabir nodded excitedly showing me his teeth..


"It's true! You are an asshole! Now Soha and Navya will bring Nandini to the Balcony at the same time you will stand in the garden with these balloons!" Cabir was so excited..


"You can't be serious man! Tell me it's a joke!" I cried out in helplessness while Cabir smacked my head..


"No it's not a joke now shut up gadhy!" He said angrily and Veer forcefully put some glycerin in my eyes..


"I don't need it!" I said angrily pushing him away but Cabir held my hands behind my back..


"It's needed for effects! Myny saas bahu serials me dekha tha! Is say bht acha impression parta hai!" Veer was also super excited about the plan...


Soon we were outside in the garden and I was really looking like an idiot because I had balloons in my hands moreover I was wearing a birthday hat on my head with sorry words engraved over it with tears dripping off my eyes because of the stupid glycerin..


Suddenly we heard girls giggling and laughing on something...


"It's time! Go Manik go!" Cabir whispered and I froze on my place..


I didn't want to go in front of Nandini like this.


"No please! Am not going!" I begged..


"Shut up!" Veer showed me eyes and both of them kicked me towards the fixed spot.


As soon as I came in Nandini's sight, her laughter halted..


I stood there staring at her..


She was beautiful as always..


Our eyes met and her turned stern. Her eyes had compliants. She was very angry.


"Am sorry baby!" I said loudly and she suddenly looked away. Breaking the trance..


"Please! Don't look away! Forgive me!" I cried again and she looked back..


"Manik Malhotra! Do something original!" She shouted angrily and run back..


Suddenly all my hopes shattered and I fell on my knees over the heap of the snow..


"Manik!" All four came running to me and I literally cried..


They all put their hands on my shoulders but I angrily shoved them away.


I peeled off that stupid hat and popped all the balloons in anger..


"You guys are doing nothing but making a fool out of me! Mjy ni karna kuch bhi! I just want my love back! Mjy nahi aati nend us k bina! Mjy ni rehna us k bina! Usy bolo k wo maan jye! Main...oh God!!" I didn't what I was saying but all I wanted my Nandini back..


"Manik we will talk to her! We will plan something good please don't cry!" Cabir said hugging me but I shook my head..


"No!" I said backing off the hug and wiped my tears. "This time I will do something all by myself! Thanks for your help guys!" I said with a gratitude and this time I aas determined on my place..


I will seek her forgiveness...


I was sure of it...

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Nandini's POV..


"Am sorry baby! Please forgive me!" Manik's words rang in my ears and I absentmindedly cut the vegetables on the cutting board..


Am I doing fair?


He said sorry so many times and I knew that he really mean it but I was still hurt..


Was I acting rude?


Ok if I think from his point of view and imagine myself in his shoes then his insecurities caused him to act like that is it?


Keeping in mind to his past history, he was lonely. He had no one to asure that everything will be okay! No wonder he didn't trust me enough to share his life..


Since last three days I have ignored him completely but I was craving for his arms, for his touch, for his hugs and specifically his kisses..


I love him so much..


I am acting really harsh I think and---


"Ouchhh!" I cried when the knife pierced in my finger cutting a deep wound. "Ahhh!" I cried out loud holding the finger but cut was so deep so the bleeding didn't stop..


"Nandu!" Navya shouted as soon as she came in and I almost collapsed on the floor...


Sh!t I was losing blood..


"Oh God! Manik!! Manik!!" She shouted for Manik rushing towards me and I shook my head. Soon Manik came in followed by Cabir..


"Fu*king hell Hey Nandini!" Manik screamed in worry and with in seconds he was beside me..


He quickly wrapped his one arm around my waist pulling me in him..


My head rested on his broad chest and with my quivering uninjured hand I gripped to his jacket in my death grip..


"What the hell is in your mind my stupid lady?? Kya chahti ho tum?" And his scolding session started and he inspected the wound. "Fu*k it's so deep!" He cried out in worry and scooped me in his arms. "Cabir call the doctor!" He ordered Cabir and walked upstairs towards his room.


"Is this some kind of stupid revenge of yours? If yes! Then stop doing it! Bola na myny sorry! Why are you hurting yourself! I will never do this again am sorry! I won't leave you--!" Once again he was scolding me but I was more interested in inhaling his cologne fragrance which always used to drive me crazy, it was still driving me crazy. I rubbed my cheek with the soft fabric of his shirt and closed my eyes.


Why I was so angry with this person? I am such a dumb fellow! Who can be angry from such a cute person..


Soon I felt my back hitting the soft mattress of the bed and I was not ready to let him go at any cost. Before he could back off after lying me on the bed I clinged to him tightly..


"Ni Manik please! Don't leave me!" I mew like a kitten and I can imagine his little startled little happy expressions because soon his grip on me tightened. I shivered in his arms and soon I felt his warm lips on my temple. I choked with the emotions in his neck and he hugged me more closer..


"Hey shhh! Everything is ok!" He cooed in my ear and I was still trying to make myself believe that I was in his arms..


"No nothing is okay! Tum chaly jaoa gay mjy Phir say chood kay! Tum Hamesha aisy he karty ho! Main nahi reh skti tumhry bina! Tumhy ya baat kiun smj main ni aati?" I was literally crying and he was caressing my hair with so much love.


What the hell!? I thought I will be very strong in front of him but as soon as I got the warmth of his arms I forgot everything.


All of a sudden I felt like a stubborn baby who was complaining to her mother for leaving her alone. Though the baby was angry as hell but still she was clinged to the mother because the baby had a doubt that if this time she will let go of her mother she will leave the baby alone once again..


"Main nahi jaoaj ga Nandini! Am sorry I broke your trust! I promise I won't do it again! I am so guilty! Pata ni mjy kya ho gya tha!" His voice held so much of plead and I slid myself in his lap. Now head was balanced on his arm and my legs were on the parallel side. He hugged me a little higher and I hide my face in his neck again..


He kissed my hair and I sighed under his touch when the door knocked.


"Manik doctor is here!" Cabir said opening the door and Manik didn't let me go..


She was a lady doctor. She sat beside us and smiled..


"Cute! Loving husband wife!" She mumbled softly and I eyes snapped at Manik who was not at all looking affected from the Doctor's comment. He was just concentrated on the way the doctor was treating my wound. The antiseptic hit the wound hard and I cried Manik's name..


"Doctor please! Just a little careful usy dukh raha hai!" Manik panicked and I smiled inwardly..


His care was so loving..


"Sorry!" Doctor immediately apologized and again resumed her task..


"I will give an injection the pain will be relived!" Doctor said and I nodded but..


"Injection??" Manik's eyes were bulging out of his sockets. "No no! No injection! Nandini will not take the injection!" Manik tried to hide me in his arms and I giggled..


"Manik it's okay! I can take it!" I said softly cupping to his cheek and he looked reluctant. Doctor held my arm and Manik was once again looking so panicked. Now he was holding me in his death grip. Doctor injected the injection and got up..


"Dukh raha hai?" He asked worriedly rubbing the place where the injection was injected and I sjook my head..


"When you are with me! Then nothing hurts!" I whispered snuggling in me and I smiled against his skin..


Everyone left and it was just us now again. He sat resting his back with the bed board and I was in his lap. We both sat in silence and I listened to his heart beat.


My eyes were getting drowsy because of that injection and he was patting my head like an affectionate mother..


After whatever the stunt he pulled on me I deserved this much TLC at least..


"Am I forgiven baby?" I heard his plead when I was dozing off.



"No! Itne bhi kya jaldi hai?" I whispered sleepily. The last thing I heard was his hearty chuckle and felt his lips pressing on my forehead.


And I was fast asleep in his strong arms...

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Wearing a lehenga Choli I almost hopped off the stairs and saw everyone doing the haldi rasam. I and Manik were on a funny business. He was following me like Tom and I was running away like Jerry!


He was seeking forgiveness and I was teasing him..


I also did the rasam by applying Haldi on Cabir and Navya's face. I was searching for Manik and suddenly heard Veer and Cabir talking..


"Cabir I have heard kay this haldi rasam firm the bond of lovers!" Veer was saying..


"Yeah yeah! Sath janmo tak ka rishta!" Cabir too spoke and I bite my lower lip..


"Is it really true?" I asked to both of them and they batted their eyelashes innocently before bobbing their heads..


"Yes yes! It's very true!" Both exclaimed and I made a plan in my head. I was stupid as I failed to figure out the meaning behind their smiles.


I got up!


"Where are you going?" Cabir asked laughingly when I picked up one of the 'haldi' bowl from the floor..


"Manik ko haldi lagany!" I told him simply and he laughed more.


"Seriously?? Manik aur Haldi? Impossible Ms.Murthy!" He said sarcastically and I frowned..


"Challenge Mr.Dhawan! Manik haldi lagye ga!" I challenged him confidently and he snickered..


"Hahh darling! Manik will apply this sh!tty thing once the cars will start flying! You know him don't ya?" He was openly making fun of me??


"Oh shut up! He will do it!" I said angrily..


"Tum haar jaoa ge!" Cabir said shaking his head..


"Mr.Cabir Dhawan! My belief in Manik is 1000 times more then yours! So just wait and watch!" I stuck my tongue out at him and stormed towards Manik's room..


I reached his room door, suddenly I stopped..


Oh sh!t am I scared of his anger?


Naahh! Wo pehly bhi tou itna itna gusa kar chuka hai! Ab kitna kar lay ga? Haan. And yes! I am tou angry with him so wo ziada kuch ni kar paye ga!


Don't be so scared Nandini! Haldi he tou lagani hai...laga kar wapas aa jana yeah...no problem..


I raised my hand to knock the door and found it shivering..


Shusssh! What the hell?


"He will apply this sh!tty thing once the cars will start flying!" Cabir's voice rang in my ears and I cursed him wholeheartedly for scaring me, also for challenging me..


Unwillingly and sort of animatedly I knocked the door but no response.


I pushed the door and it went open. I slowly walked in and realized that Manik was in shower..


Oh thank God...


Now I will get a grip of myself..


But before I could do anything the bathroom door flung open and my back; which was facing the door, stiffened..


Suddenly the whole room was filled with his freshly showered odor. His shampoo and mixed body wash fragrance hit my nose and my grip on the haldi bowl tightened. The spicy smell which made my mouth water for him was his after shave..


"Hey baby! You are here?" The husk in his voice from few steps away made me gulp and I remembered why I was there..


Slowly and carefully I turned only to found my legs turning jelly because he was just standing in his trousers with his upper body bare still dripping wet..


Why am I having a feeling that tables are already have been turned and without even starting the game I lost it??


I just stared at him like a fool and he raised his eyebrow, folding his arms across his chest.


His eyes traveled from my face to the bowl I was holding and I immediately hide the bowl behind my back..


God Nandu!! Fool fool fool!!


"Is this bowl is for me?" He asked in a serious tone and I shook my head frantically...


I saw his lips turning into a smirk and I knew I was in a deep sh!t..


He walked towards me and instinctively I moved backward.


Soon my legs hit the bed and I tumbled falling straight on it but before that Manik had snatched the haldi bowl from my hand..


I was lying straight on the bed and he was smiling at me with tongue in cheek..


Idiot...he understood why I was there...


"Ohh! So miss doctor was here with this?" He remarked sarcastically pointing towards the liquid and I tried finding my words but none came out..


He bite his lower lip and placed his both knees on my either side..


"What? Voice lost?" He asked innocently and I tried to get up but he immediately pinned me with the bed..


"Manik let me go! You are not forgiven yet!" I tried to sound angry but my voice dipped at the back of my throat when his lips pressed over my neck sucking to my sweet spot. Immediately I felt my body going all limp. All the energy felt drained out..


He know my weakness!! Sucker!!


Suddenly I felt something wet on the other side of my neck and realized it was haldi..


Sh!t..


I wriggled under his grasp only to cause him tighten his grip..


"Stop resisting!" His voice was ice cold And inspite of such cold temperature of the room I felt sweat glistening on my skin..


Too much authoritative..


With his free hand he pushed the fabric off my shoulder. I anticipated of what was he upto. He slowly licked my skin and I held back a moan, then he blew the spot and I sighed. Then he stopped. I wondered of what will he do and when I thought he won't do anything he pierced his teeth in my flesh..


"Ahhh! Manik!" I let out a yelp and I desperately wanted to slap him hard more then that I wanted to hold him..


I was tired of his dark hickeys around my neck and shoulders..


Soon he started sucking it causing me squirm under him helplessly..


During this whole session my left side of the neck and my left arm was totally covered with haldi while my own choli was wet now because of his wet body..


"Manik!" I cried his name when I felt the cold sticky material covering my bare waist too...


Finally he pulled away and stared in my eyes..


"You are so bad! Advatage mat lo! I am still very angry!" I said angrily poking to his chest and he chuckled touching my nose with his haldi covered finger..


"Am I? Tum khud lai ya haldi! You trapped yourself in it willingly tou mera kya fault hai hmm? And you are angry with me this is the biggest lie of the century! Come on accept it!" He said softly and so lovingly that I made a pout. He bent down and pecked my lips tenderly..


"Mjy bhi tmhy haldi lagani hai!" I whined and he chuckled shaking his head..


"Okay! So suppose if I allow you to apply this eww thing on me tou badlay main mjy kya mily ga?" He demanded with a smirking face and let go of my hands unknowingly.


"Kya chahye janab ko?" I asked teasingly and traced my finger nail on his neck line traveling down..


"Soch lo! Kuch aisa mang liya jo tum day na pai tou?" He asked in a serious tone and there was no hint of humor in his voice..


The fun was turning into seriousness..


This man change colors in seconds..


Oh Manik..


I raised my palm and cupped his cheek..


"Ask for anything!" I whispered lovingly and he leaned down on my lips. Only inches apart...


"Aj ki raat! Sirf tum! Aur! Main!" He whispered seductively over my lips and my breath was lost somewhere when he pressed his lips over mine without giving me a chance to say anything..


I moaned in his mouth and he slid his tongue inside taking possession..


My answer was yes and they way I responded to the kiss was the indication..


He was almost going mad with the passion and was teasing me off limits. I couldn't wait to feel him against me..


I was so desperate but he was such a strong man with so much of control..


I was breathless when he let me go and I panted. He laid beside me and took deep breaths..


"Your lips!" He growled, closing his eyes and I blushed. Suddenly an Idea hit my mind and I immediately dipped my hand in the haldi bowl. Then without wasting a second I rubbed it all over his face and before he could do anything I jerked up the bed but that idiot! He was fast, he followed me and pinned my front with the wall..


I was once again panting and he pressed his chest in my back..


"Acting naughty doctor!" He whispered in my ear and his tone was cold..


"Man--!" I tried to protest but he started lifting my hair reveling my almost bare back to his hungry eyes.


"This back of yours! It's looking empty!" The husk in his voice made my legs wobble but I steadied myself with loads of difficulty. I felt the thick liquid on my back and what I realize was that it was his cheek..


The haldi I applied on his cheek that he was returning back..


"Manik!" I sighed his name when he kissed my back. Suddenly I felt his teeth reaching the hook of blouse and the strings he had untied them already. My hands fisted on the wall and his hands plamed mine on the wall..


"Manik tu-m kya ka-kar ray ho!" I stammered breathlessly and he unhooked the blouse fully..


Sh!t!! This guy will be my death..


He lifted his both hands and uncovered the shoulders fully. I immediately held it close to my chest and Manik was busy in decorating my skin with the haldi. His hands proceeded further to the hooks of the lehenga and boom there was a loud knock on the door..


"Nandini! Are you in there? Please jaldi aa jaoa!" It was Soha. I immediately turned and the fabric was about to slid but this time Manik held it..


His eyes were filled with so much of desires which clearly told me his agendas..


"Nandu??" This time it was Navya..


"Ha-haan aaye!" I shouted and Manik was smirking..


How much I wanted to rub that bloody smirk off his face..


But I loved it on the same time.


He bite his lower lip and I raised my eyebrows to ask what. He just shook his head and hugged me close to adjust the blouse..


"So?" I whispered softly in his chest and he hummed. "Plans for tonight?" I tried not to sound desperate. He again hummed and I giggled. "Giving me some silent treatment?" I asked poking to his chest and he again hummed wrapping his arms tightly around me, placing his chin over my head. "What humm?" I asked softly and he kissed my hair..


"Will you come with me tonight? Jo main kahoon ga? Jahan main lay chaloon ga chalo ge?" He asked looking at my face and I smiled..


"Mr.Malhotra! I am ready to travel the whole world with you! Jahan ap wahan main!" I told him with a naughty wink and he let out laugh pecking to my forehead..


"I Love You Manik!" I whispered snuggling in him and he sighed in satisfaction..


"I Love You Too my silly doctor!" He teased me and I looked at him with a jerk..


"Am not silly! You are silly!" I complaint and he laughed again...


"Ji ji! Am silly and you are the most siyani lady ever right?" He said shaking his head..


"Ji any doubt!?" I said bobbing my head and he kept laughing.


That's how we were..


Passionate! Insane and silly at the same time..


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Ufff! This haldi! It's so difficult to remove it. All thanks to the hot shower I took..


I was really feeling fresh.


Rubbing my hair with the towel I came out of the bathroom only to see a gift box lying on my bed.


I just jumped with joy and rushed to open it..


I peeled off the cover and the dress inside made me aww!


It was a beautiful peach colored gown with shoulder straps and the upper had extra floral design..


It was so pretty..


I was going almost mad with happiness and then saw a note also lying in the box.


I read it aloud dancing around the room..


"My dear Doctor!


You are my love! The reason of my existence! Tum na hoti tou I would have been dead by now! Give me a last chance to say sorry! I promise! I promise aagy say jab bhi tumhri eyes main tears ayen gay wo khushi kay hoon gay! Please be ready I will be at your door in an hour!"


And the letter ended making me feel giddy..


I felt whole zoo fluttering in my stomach..


I was having a feeling that tonight will be the best night ever..


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Unknown POV..


"I am trying to get a hold of him! But he is a big guy now! He is a 30 year old man! It's very difficult to have him! Moreover his girlfriend! He is always with her!" I begged helplessly..


"So what!!!???" She roared from the other side. "I want your son! I want him! And If his girlfriend is always with him! I won't mind having her here too!" She spoke evilly and slammed the phone..


I gritted my teeth and swore on that rich b!tch! Then I dialed Rakesh's number..


"Yeah! Rakesh? Get them both!"


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Tadaaa! Yar itne mushkil say I managed hufff! But thankfully it's here! Kindly! Kindly comment long and I hope the update was good enough and you guys are not disappointed!

Love,Mawara


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Posted: 8 years ago
Yipeee,!! I am the first
Actually Di chappie padha hi nai ...
Toh isliye res

Love u Di
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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome update
poor manik
nandu slapped him punched him
but he deserve this
loved how everyone was trying to help him
his ways r so adorable
finally everything is right between manan
their moments r so passionate
loved it
cont soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
great awesome update


nandu plan failed 😆

lagane aayi thi haldi khud laga ke chali gayii
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Posted: 8 years ago
superb...sab frds manik ko help Kar rahe hai..mission Nandini manao...hahaha...love it
Edited by siyaaaali - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing update.
Full of cute hot Manan.
I loved the way Manik applied haldi to her.
That was realy hot way to apply.
Amazing.
Will wait for next update.
Wanna know how he is gonna say sorry in his style. 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
Superb nice part but last part kich dar lagraha he manan ko kuch nehi hona chahiye hope for best.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update..

Manik try to manofy nandini..

Haldi scene was mindblowing...

Loved the update...

Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Di,kya hogaya aapko...itni shock kyu de rahi ho...don't torture us...kitna amazing update tha...ruthna-manana...slap -punch...their lovey-dovey moment...but in last you give a 440 volt ka shock...hope manan will be fine...

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