MaNan SS: Awargi! Chapter12/Pg76/8th-Oct-2016/PmsLater - Page 34

Update was amazing.
I realy appriciate ur afforts towards yr writing passion.
They both are messed up,
Both can't see each other with someone else.
Soha character first time in any story is innocent. 😆
I love ur different experiences with characters.
Superb.
So curious to see what she will wear any thing red or may be green. Can't say bcz both are hell stubborn.
Next part soon plz.

IT WAS NOT AT ALL CRAPY MAW...I TO LOVED THAT CHAPTER
HEHE...BOTH CAN'T SEE EACH OTHER WITH ANYONE... 😆
SUCH A STURRBON HEAD THEY R...PATA NAHI NANDINI AAB KONSI COLOR KI LEHRNGA PEHENGI...
EXCITED FOR NEXT CHAPTER
CONT SOON 😳

Awesome update... ...
What is stopping manik to come close to nandani...
Loved the jealous manik n in jealousy he burnt her dress too awesome.. ...
Loved it.. ...
N it was not at all crap...

Its not at all a crap

it feels like i'm commenting after ages
sorry for not commenting befire ...was busy with my exams

coming to the updates
it was super duper awesome😃
veer's entry made it more interesting
manik to khud se kuch karega hi nahi
now veer will act as cupid😆but he himself doesn't knows😉
how much i love this jello manik😃
he will cross every limit of madness when he is jealous

hope this jealousy only makes him confess and accept his love

poor girl nandini can't take her rejection anymore😔
she did a great thing by deciding to move on
at least now manik will get some brains

veer is so cute
and soha is chipku but i liked her character too

cabir was right ...both are crazy
inspite of fighting so much
still she cares for him...awww
she stole his sleeping pills😆

and manik's jealousy about green dress😆

it was so beautiful

he was jealous..he is showing some progress..dont know when he will accept his love?

his jealousy and feelings are very well written

lovely update

kabir is awesome..

loved the update

Amazinggg...suprrbbb...mindblowinggg update
Jealousss manik...manik nandu aur veer ko ek saath nhii dekh skta aur khud bhi nandu ko paas nhi aane deta...lehenge ka kya haal bna diya...lovd it...continue soon

Very nice update and really enjoying cold war 👏
Nxt part pls update soon.!!! Tc

Hey...don't feel bad.. it was a good update everyone in his life has lows and highs ...the gr8 part is that you have updated taken efforts to type it down...Thanx a ton for giving us a new experience in your every story there is something zara hat ke...Hats off keep writing
God bless

Awesome update