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Posted: 9 years ago
Sooo
Nandu ,,,,, next update mai paagal ho jaayegi!???
Haa ,, jaroor esa hi hoga !!!
Manik ek aur week , lock ki to!!
Eh monster nai. , Eh to monster ki baap hai 😡
Esi type ki pyaar ko ,,,, mental keh te hai ,, hamari village mai 😕
Manik ki nuts thoda loose ho gaya hai !! Is liye ESA behave kar raha hai 😡
Alisha ji
Is manik ,,, such mai. Ajeeb hai ,,,,
eh kab badlegaa ,,,, aap ki cute and romantic wala jaisa
Eh manik mujhe achha nai laga
😕 😕
Is ko badal deejiye,,,, nai to nandu jaroor paagal ho jaayegi
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome...
Yaar I fell pity for the poor girl, that empty house would be literally eating her up..
Dhruv bluffed her out of the house, but Manik should atleast be a little pity on her
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Posted: 9 years ago
Aliii my god yaar tuh hur cheez extreme mein karthi hai my god lyk agar cuteness dekhana ho tho ul show tat at extreme luv evrything evry small thing vl b at its top n great baby jus too gud...
Now dark ff bola n the darkness s at its peaks itna bada strange Manik phli baar dekha hai my goddd itna kya cruel hai yeh he locked her up lyk a she s criminal in jail... My god u really feel pity for nandu yaaarrr...
Aiyoii aiyapa yeh kis tarah ka pyaar hai Manik ka... Ufff dis guy nah hur cheez over hi kartha hai... W
Woh akelapan se itna dar gaya ki woh usse aise band karke rakh diya ki she does not run away... Ufff dis boy weakness vl land him in trouble n vl make nandu hate him more...
But aliii u wrote it sooo well n hats off for again dis awesome unique idea... This s always nail biting story n cant wait too read aage kya hoga... Damn tensed n waiting eagerly baby
Update soon

Thanks for pm
Love u baby
Pravallika
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Posted: 9 years ago
I mentally hammering my head unlike nandini but the feeling is mutual hehe..

even I feel suffocating imagining her like that...

but it's a dark story so no complaints
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Posted: 9 years ago

It was interesting and intense update dear...
Feeling bad for nandini...
He made everything so suffocating for her...
why manik is doing this...

He is so confusing...

Waiting for next...
Good job dear...
thanks for pm...


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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update
Nandu hvng nothing to do
Srsly Manik locked her up
He's really weird
Why has he locked her?whats going on his mind?
Thanks 4 the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
It's wonderful update dear...
Dhruv did little drama to know the truth..
Nandini fell for his trap...
Manik caught her...
She is so drained of the loneliness..
What will happen next!?
Thnxxx for the pm..
Continue soon...
Looking forward to read the further parts..
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Posted: 9 years ago

Its becoming interesting day by day...

Now druv knows nandinin is with manik...

manik took her mobile away n locked her inside a room...

what's cooking in manik's head?

Is Manik kind of psycho person... or he had became one after seeing nandu?

Why is he treating Nandini so badly..??

Feeling so sorry for Nandu...!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Alisha
THKS for the PM ...

THODA TERRIYING UPDATE THA...DONT MIND...

BUT MANIK KA KHUCH SAMJH NAHI ARAHA HAI...

EXACTLY USSE NANDINI SE KYA CHAHEYE ??????

LOOKS TO ME THAT HE LOVES HER N WANTS HER IN HIS LIFE FOREVER...

AND IF IT IS LOVE THEN HE SHOULD TELL HER...

AND IF NOT THEN WHAT IS HE HIDING YAAR...ITNA SUSPENSE...ITS REALLY KILLING ME...

AND HOW CAN HE JUST LOCK HER LIKE THIS...

SHE WILL DIE OF DEPRESSION...

ALISHA PLZ ENLIGHTEN A LITTLE BIT ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice chappy
The prologue thing came
Manik's character is confusing
Let's wait how it unfolds
Thanks for the pm
Update soon

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