MANAN- THE MISSING DOLL(Chapter no.2-pg no.3)(10-7-2016)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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GLIMPSE -

Story of the most loved couple of television Manik and Nandini a.k.a MANAN.

Two childhood best friends working together in a news channel as reporters.

One of them a workaholic and dedicated towards work and the other a carefree person with little dedication towards work.

How will their friendship survive in this cruel world of media?

Stay tuned to find out ...

Index:
Prologue- Page No.1
C.S.- Page No. 2
Chapter -1 on pg no.3
Chapter -2 on pg no.3
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shaan... thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sounds amazing...
Interesting storyline...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Seems like a new concept
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Prologue-

There was hustle bustle in the media house.

They had an important news to telecast.

Everyone was waiting for their trusted reporter to show up with the news tape.

The boss of the media house was very nervous as the channel would suffer huge loss if the news was not telecasted at the scheduled time.

He summoned the head reporter.

The reporter came and assured the boss that the tape would reach them anytime and the reporter who was assigned the task is on his way.

The boss asked the head reporter to make it fast as only few minutes were left and he stormed out of the cabin.

The head reporter sighed and dialled a number but there was no response.


So this is the prologue.

Guys can anyone guess who were the two reporters?

Will the reporter come with the tape on time?

Will the channel suffer loss sure to the negligence of the reporter?

Too many questions????

Stay tuned for the answers.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome prologue...
Luved it...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Character Sketch -

Hi guys here I am with the C.S.

Manik Malhotra - 24 year old , hot handsome,sexy guy. Is a television reporter by profession. Girls are ready to die for his one smile. Has dated a number of girls but didn't cross his line as a man with any of them. Suffered a few heartbreaks as well (not serious types but in a funny way).
Is not at all dedicated when it comes to his work. But is the most trusted reporter of the channel. Has always bailed out the channel from several tricky situations.


(Parth Samthaan as Manik Malhotra)

Nandini Murthy - 23 year old sweet girl. Works as a reporter in the same channel as Manik . But unlike Manik, is very dedicated, punctual and hardworking .


(Niti Taylor as Nandini Murthy)

Nyonika and Raj Malhotra - Manik's parents. Both successful businesspersons. Wants Manik to join their family business but he is not interested.


(Kishwer Merchant as Nyonika Malhotra)


(Ayub Khan as Raj Malhotra)

Venkatesh and Shanno Murthy - Parents of Nandini . Venkatesh Murthy owns a newspaper agency .
Shanno Murthy is a housewife.
They are not so rich as Malhotra's but both the families share a very good bond as they are neighbours since past 30 years.


(Ritu Vasishta as Shanno Murthy)


(Mehul Nissar as Venkatesh Murthy)

Dinesh Khanna - 45 year old man.
Owns a media house IBA News Network.
He is a very honest and dedicated man but panics very easily on petty matters. But is a gem of a person.
Nandini and Manik work in his channel DTv.


(Aman Verma as Mr. Dinesh Khanna)
People call him as DK.)

Bhushan Verma- Owner of rival news channel BNTv. Very cunning and manipulative person. Can go to any extent to take his news channel on top.

At present his channel is on second position.
And no points for guessing, the top spot is held by DKs channel DTv.

Bhushan Verma has good family Relations with the Malhotras.


(Sudesh Berry as Bhushan Verma)

And did I mention about Manik and Nandini's equation...

I don't think I did.

So let me tell you all that -

Manik and Nandini are childhood best friends.

Rest of the characters will be introduced as the story progresses.

Done with the C.S.

Hope you guys like it...

Leave your comments.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing c.s...
Luved it...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHAPTER-1

A guy was sleeping peacefully on his bed.

He wasn't wearing his shirt and his tattoo was visible.


His sleep was disturbed by the constant ringing of his phone.

He kept the pillow over his head and slept again.

The phone kept ringing for few minutes and then stopped.

The guy was lost in his dream world.

He was dreaming about girls.

In his dream-

He was surrounded by a number of girls who were asking for his autograph.

And he was giving his autograph with a smirk on his face.

Suddenly a girl came towards him and smiled.

The guy got nervous and scared seeing the girl smiling.

The girl then took a bucket full of water and thew the water on him.

And SPLASH...

The guy immediately got up from his bed as he was completely drenched in water.

His dream was broken and he came back to reality.

He looked at the person who did this.

Guy- What the hell!!!!!! Is this the way to wake someone up?

Other person in a tone of anger- Mujhe to ek hi tarika aata hai kisiko uthane ka specially jab wo insan kisika phone nahi uthaye. Samajhme Aaya Mr. Manik Malhotra.

The guy wiped his face and said- Nandu ki bachchi ruk. Abhi Batata hoon tujhe...

Saying this he ran behind the girl who already ran out from the room to save herself.

Yes guys...

The guy who was sleeping was none other Manik Malhotra and the girl who threw water on him was Nandini Murthy.

Nandini rushed out of the room to the kitchen where Nyonika was busy in preparing breakfast.

Nandini - Aunty please bachao mujhe is monster se...

Manik - Monster huh... Abhi Batata hoon tujhe...

Saying this he came forward to catch her but she hid behind Nyonika.

Nyonika - Tum log niklo kitchen se bahar. Now... Tum dono ka roz roz ka drama hai Ye. Keep me out of this.

Manik was still trying to catch Nandini.

Nyonika in a stern voice- I said out. Both of you... Now.

Both Manik and Nandini stopped their chase immediately and left the kitchen like obedient kids.

Nyonika sighed and said- Pata nahi kab bade honge ye dono.

She then resumed her work.

As soon as Manik and Nandini came out of the kitchen, Manik again started to run behind Nandini.

Nandini ran towards the garden and took the pipe which was kept for watering the plants.

Nandini directed it towards Manik.

Manik - Nandu No. Stop it yaar.

Nandini showed her tongue and said- Why should I stop? This is your punishment for not picking up my call.

Manik - Nandu... I am telling you... Ek baar tum mere haath aagayi na to bahut bura hoga. Sochlo.

Nandini - Soch liya... You cannot catch me.

Manik - So you won't stop... And to top it you are challenging me.

Manik looked at something behind Nandini and smirked.

Nandini - Yes.

Manik - Ok fine. Then don't blame me...

Nandini - Blame you . For what???

Manik - For this...

Saying this Manik started walking towards Nandini.

Nandini got confused and threw the pipe down.

Manik came to Nandini and lifted her in his arms.

Nandini - Manik ye kya kar rahe ho.

Manik - You will know it soon...

Saying this Manik went to the swimming pool and threw Nandini in it

Nandini got shocked with the sudden fall.

Nandini - Manik ye kya Kia tumne. Mujhe swimming pool me kyu pheka.

Manik started laughing and said- This is your punishment for waking me up by throwing a bucket full of water on me.

Nandini - Ha ha ha. Very funny... Now give me your hand. Mujhe pool se nikalo bahar.

Manik still laughing gave his hand to Nandini.

Nandini got an evil plan and pulled Manik in the pool.

Now both of them were in the pool.

Manik - Nanduuu...

It was Nandini's turn to laugh now.

Manik - Haslo ...

Manik took Nandini in his arms and twirled her around.

Both of them began their water fight.

Manik hugged Nandini from behind and turned around with her.

They played in the pool for sometime.

Nyonika then came to them and said- Chalo bachcho jaldi se bahar aajao pool ke. Breakfast karlo.
Kaam pe nahi Jana kya?

Hearing this Nandini remembered why she had come here.

Nandini - Oh shit... mai toh bhool hi gayi.

Nandini immediately came out of the pool and said- Manik get ready fast. We have to go.

Manik too came out wiping himself with a towel which Nyonika gave him.

Manik - Waise Jana kaha hai?

Nandini - Tum Chalo to sahi.

Nyonika - Ek minute. Bina breakfast ke to mai Jane nahi doongi tum dono ko. So jaldi se aake breakfast karlo.

Manik went and got ready. Nandini too dried herself and both quickly had breakfast and rushed to their work.

Done with first Chapter.

Hope you guys like it.

Please give your comments.

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It was a very lively start
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CHAPTER -2

Manik and Nandini reached a secluded place.

Manik - Nandini ye hum kaha aagaye hai. This place is too scary yaar.

Nandini whispered in Manik's ears - Manik be quiet. This is our next assignment. So let me concentrate.

Manik - Itni khatarnak jagah pe layi ho aur chup Rehne ke liye keh rahi ho. Are you serious? Mujhe nahi karna koi bhi assignment yahan pe. Mai jaraha hoon. Tum akele hi pura karlo ye kaam.

Saying this Manik turned back and left from there.

Nandini shaked her head and said- Darpok kahi ka?

Then she went towards the building site and peeked into the window of the building.



The building from outside was actually scary but what Nandini saw inside was way more scary.

The hall of the building was filled with number of people who were drinking and partying and there were a lot of girls who were being paraded before those people .

The girls were being auctioned.

Nandini took out her camera and started clicking the pics of the people.

Suddenly she felt a tap on her shoulder.

Nandini gulped her saliva and turned back to see a short and stout man staring at her in anger.

Man- Kaun hai tu? Aur yahan kya kar rahi hai.

Nandini laughed nervously and said- Kuch... Kuch bhi to nahi. Mai... mai to bas yaha se guzar rahi thi...

Man- Zyada chalaki mat kar. Tu bhagne ki koshish kar rahi thi na. Par ye khayal apne dimag se nikalde. Yahan ek baar Jo aajata hai to uska bachke bhagna namumkin hai.
Chal andar mere sath.

Nandini - Arey nahi Bhaiyya aap galat samajh rahe ho. Mai in ladkio me se nahi hoon Jo andar hai. Mai to abhi abhi aayi hoon.

The man didn't listen to her and dragged her inside.

The man told his boss everything.

Man- Boss ye ladki mujhe building ke bahar mili. Tak jhak kar rahi thi.

The boss looked at her and instantly recognised her.

Boss- Oho to aap pahuch hi gayi humtak. Arey Dekho Bhai log mashoor news reporter Nandini Ji aayi hai hamare yahan. SWAGAT nahi karoge sab log inka.

Nandini struggled to free herself from the man who had caught her.

The boss looked at the camera and snatched it.

Boss- To hamari photos kheechi jarahi thi. Huh...

The boss threw the camera on the floor and broke it.

Everyone started to laugh.

The boss came near Nandini and caressed her cheek with one hand.

Nandini turned her face to the opposite direction.

The boss got angry and held Nandini's wrist and twisted her hand.

Nandini shouted for help- MANIK...

Suddenly Nandini's hand got freed from the grip of the boss.

Manik - Arey yaar chilla kyu rahi ho.
Mai yahi to hoon. Dheere Bolo.

Nandini immediately turned and saw Manik holding the hand of the boss .

Nandini ran to Manik and hugged him infront of everyone.

Nandini -Manik Thank God tum aagaye.

Manik - Tum bulao aur mai na aau aisa kabhi hosakta hai.

Saying this he separated Nandini from him and started beating the boss and the man who had caught Nandini.

Manik - Tumhari himmat kaise Hui Nandini ko hath lagane ki.

Saying this he beat the two of them so much that he broke their arms.

The other goons also joined in to beat Manik but he alone was sufficient for all of them.

Nandini - Manik leave them. Wo dono marjayenge.

Manik - Nahi Nandu. You stay out of this. Mai zinda nahi chodunga inlogo ko. How dare they touch you and misbehave with you?

In the meantime Police arrived and took the goons in their custody.

The police praised Nandini and Manik for helping them out in arresting the goons.

The girls were freed and they thanked Manik and Nandini for saving them.

The girls were sent to an NGO.

Nandini and Manik left from there in their car.

The journey was silent.

Nandini didn't dare to speak anything as Manik was in a bad mood and angry.

Done with another update.

Hope you guys like it.

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