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Posted: 9 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: rockstarlover

awesome update
nandu is so hilarious
but adorable & cute😃
monster manik always obey her orders😆
cont soon

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Posted: 9 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: niti06

Damn hilarious dear most funny part tumhara kajhana peti churaya or bhaag gayi or kya mange princess nandhu se lovely update come soon

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Posted: 9 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: -ChitraRocking-

nice update lols khazana peti manik ki hui chori 😆
gosh nandu is so cute😉 love her and
our dear manik is getting mad being with her
thanks for pm 🤗

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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
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CHAPTER - 4

Manik Pov :
I parked my car outside and came out holding bundles of hats and accessories which were ordered specially by Nandini..ohh sorry sorry..princess Nandini. I was muttering a curse when all of the sudden I heard a blast sound. I got horrified and ran inside only to see mansion filled with smokes.

Manik: " Nandini..!
I shouted and coughed hard. I kept on shouting until she came infront of me .
Nandu: Mai yaha hu..monster Manik...
She said and when I saw her I couldn't control my laugh. She was all darked with her hair pointed upwards with smoke coming out of it. She was holding a tray which was all black by now.

Manik: " Yeh kya huliya banake rakha hain...
I asked and she made a crying face...😒
Nandu: Mujhe bas cakes aur cookies bake karne thai..pata nahi..dhadhaammm hoh gayi aur mai yeshi hoh gayi...
She pouted and I suppressd my laugh. Dumbo..😆..I placed her on bathtub and turned on the tap allowing the cold water to fill it. I got up and grabbed the shampoo and soap bar.

Manik: " Loh pakdo inhe and clean yourself up
I said and stood up but she holded my hand.
Nandu: Tum karo..yeh princess Nandini ka order hain...
She said and I glared at her.
Manik: " Order my foot...😡
I mumbled and then she used her master key and started crying loudly...😭😭
Nandu: Kitne gande hoh Monster Manik..kabhi theek sai baat nahi karte..uhhu😭😭
She cried and I rubbed my temple.
Manik: " Okk..ab rona band
I said and she immediately laughed at me mumbling okk. I knewd..nautanki princess...I couldn't believe that I was actually pampering someone. That too a girl..no no that too a stupid girl who was a mermaid princess from another world. Ishke papa koh bhi yahi duniya mili thi..chalo mila toh mila..Mai hi mila thaa ishke nakhre aur bevakufi koh uthane kai liye.

I was reading out a column when I saw her. Sitting in corner with dull face playing with her hair. I coughed but she ignored. I again coughed and she again ignored. This time I coughed loudly and she glared at me.
Nandu: Kya hai monster Manik ..kitne besure hoh tum..gana nahi aata toh gate kyu hoh...🥱
She pouted and I made a what face. Who the hell sings by coughing...!!!
Manik: " Yeh tuhmara stupid sai face..utra kyu hai..kya hua..
I asked and she came towards me and sat beside me.
Nandu: Princess Nandini sad hai..bahut sad hai. I wanna cry...
She said blinking her tears and I raised my eyebrows at her .
Manik: " Aur tuhmare sad hone ki wajah jaan sakta hu
I asked and she nodded her head at me.
Nandu: Jab mai bore hoti hu..tab mai sad hoti hu..aur jab mai sad hoti hu..tab mai roti hu..
She said and wiped her tears. I gave a faint smile and slapped her head with my book. Suddenly my eyes went outside window and sighen as it was snowing by now. I took her outside and she made a shocking face.
Nandu: Snoww !😃
She exclaimed and ran but I holded her and she made a angry face.
Manik: " Thand lag jayegi..ruko
I said and went inside and came out with her coat and wollen cap. I wrapped muffler around her neck and she rushed towards garden. She played and played like a kid. I turned to go inside but she threwd a huge snow ball at me making me fall on ground and due to which my nose got broked.
Manik: " Aaahhh!
I shouted and holding my precious nose and she rushed to me .
Nandu: Ohh teri..Monster Manik..tuhmara nose toh ulat pulat hoh gaya..ab tum sung kaise paoge...😲
She said childishly and I stood up caressing my nose.
Manik: " Pagal hoh kya..itna jorshe koi maarta hai..aaj naak tod diya..kal mera sar phod dogi
I shouted and she made a crying look. I thumped my feet and went inside while she kept looking at me. I took ice bag and caressed my nose with it. I was cursing on her when my phone beeped flashing Cabir

Manik: " Haan bol...
I asked with irritated voice.
Cabir: Congrats yaar..you cracked the deal. Infact un logo nai Nandini dekha..pagal hoh gaye hai..apne ads kai liye ushe model banana chahte hain...😛
He said and I made a horror face.
Manik: " Model? Woh bikini and all toh nai
I asked and he laughed at me.
Cabir: Abe..bacho kai ad mai bikini aayega sale..
He said and I sighen in relief. I disconnected the call and rushed outside. I saw her talking to her newly made snow man with no eyes at all. Seriously..snow man with no eyes...🤣
Manik: " Ishki aakhe kaha hain...
I asked and she looked at me and then turned to her snow man.
Nandu:Woh..bechara andha haina..toh aakhe kaha sai hogi...
she said and I wanted to commit suicide there only. No suicide is a biggest crime. Better I'll murder her....Yeah...
Manik: " Khair leave it. Ek good news hain...
I said and her eyes twinkled like stars and she clapped her hands in excitement .
Manik: " Deal crack hoh gayi hai..and tuhme kuch ads mai model banne honge
I said and she made a confused look. Haa beta Manik ready hoja ishke stupid questions kai liye..123 start..
Nandu: Yeh deal kaun hai..bechara crack hoh gaya..kaise..aur model kya hoti hain...😕
She asked and I made a victory face. I knew it...
Manik: " Andar chalo..mai tuhme deal..ushke biwi aur bachee..woh crack kaise hoh gaya..sab bataunga theeke .
I said and she bobbed at me with her cute smile. Must say her smile is cute..like really cute.



Nandu's gown

nandu's hat


Next day we reached the ad office. She was flowing with her red gown and hat while I was holding her tight. A lady came and smiled at us.
Lady: Ohh helo Mr.Malhotra..hy Nandini...😊
She smiled and I nodded my head.
Lady: Nandini..let's go..photoshoot hoga pehle hmm
She said and holded her hand taking her away.
Nandu: Princess Nandini..monster Manik kai bina kahi nahi jayegi
She pouted and lady stared at me.
Manik: " Yeah..actually mai aata hu ishke saathI said. I wanted to be with her..don't know why. Lady blinked at me and smiled.
Lady: Ohh..ladkiyo aur baccho koh beech aap kya karenge Mr.Malhotra..Mai hoo naa...
She said and dragged her easily while she kept on looking at me with sad face. I quietly followed her until room and slowly peeped through the door. She was sitting idol on chair and artists were working over her. She sniffed silently and I rushed to her.
Lady: Mr.Malhotra! Aap yaha..I know I'm too hot to resist..phir bhi aap mera peecha kar rahe hain...☺️
She said adjusting her hair and I rubbed my head.
Manik: " Nandini..take this until work is finished.
I said and handed her bunch of chocolates and she hugged my tummy tightly. It was awkward to respond back so I stood still untilll..."Meowww...!" ..We heard a cat crying and my eye's bulged out in horror. Nandini and Cat was real bad case.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
cute update
princess nandu is so so adorable
cuteness overloaded
aww manik wants to be with her
but he doesn't know why😆
cont soon
the dress was so pretty
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
hilarious

princess nandini os damn amazing...

andha snow man hahaha who makes that

wonderful update

loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
Yaar tum muje serious my mental asylum may admit karvaogi papa mummy me same I'm controlling my laugh but pir bi bateesi nikal rahi he 😃 😆 why why u always make me laugh like this chapy was fab dear and too hilarious 😆 I feel pity for monster manik 😭 but princess nandini 🤣 come soon dear with blasting chapy which includes a lot laughter dramas dear I'm waiting luv u
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
Awesome update...
Manan's convo was cute...
Luved it...
Thnx 4 d pm...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
Awesome part yaar continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
Wow wow Update. Princess nandini is damm fun na.. heheh.. princess nandini ki accessories acche se rakhna manik .. hahaha... Ohh poor princess ne kya haal bna liya. but she Is damm cute ... Manik ko order mast deti h . haha.. aww princess is upset. because she s getting bore. aww. yee Snow. I too want to masti in snow :( But she is so adorable. aww manik ko deal mil gyi . or nandini model 😲 Kiddish cute.. Hehe that snowman vala moment ..haha. she is seriously a cute dumbo.. Her questions regarding deal. lol. that was too fun. her dress is so beautiful na. aww. Haha. nandini only wants to be wid her monster manik. haha.. haww. she is sad. but manik is there na. he gives her chocolates. she gives huggiee huggiee. wow cute update. waiting for next update eagerly. Update soon Thanks for pm !! Keep Smiling ! 1

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