MaNan ss:My Mermaid doll( Completed ) - Page 43

Originally posted by: Akriti75

Ur story is really awesome 👏 read it in a go. Plz pm me chp 17. I am a new reader.

Originally posted by: jamunamanik

Hiii now only i studied ur story in one go.

Wowww it was awsmmm

But y can't i see chapter16

Originally posted by: 01111993

Awesome update yr

Awww nandu is jealous n wo bhi giant mermaid se

N theirs cute scene superb😊😊😊

Originally posted by: 123ananaya

awsm update
thnxxx for pm
hahaha nyc (ek jhalak)
3 turtl kids of harry
lolo,polo and zolo
funny names
insecure nandu
update soon

Originally posted by: rockstarlover

cute update
everyone was praising manik for his hotness wow😆
manan r so adorable
loved it
thanks for pm

Originally posted by: piyalisukirti98

mind blowing chapter.. but whose ziana ?? waiting for the next update.. continue soon dear keep smiling

Originally posted by: veenu

Chap 16 is amazing yaar

Originally posted by: bikita

I am sorry once again .

Woh actuaally my exams are going on.

So i dont get time to read .

Today i saw your pm and read 16 chapter .

Sorry for being late .

And ha ho ske toh olease pm me 17 chapter .

I am so sooory for not commenting i was actuallly stuck

Originally posted by: sparth

hai ..i just read the update so nice...and manik he always wants nandu to be his side...nice update...

Originally posted by: manan_jeena

Sorry couldn't post reply for Chapter 16. I was not on IF all these days coz I'm unwell. I still am not completely fine but I just came to check here once and I saw your message.

The update was awesome. Manik is scared as well as jealous of Harry. 😆 Possessive banda he is. Let's see what's gonna happen next. Please PM me the next chapter too.