MaNan ss:My Mermaid doll( Completed ) - Page 13

I know i didnt comment here
par this story is also cute and funny like others...
Coming to update...
Manik is baking cake for her...wow...
Lo itni mehnat se cake banya nandu is already eating pizza...oh christ pizza aur cake ek sath kha liya...
Ab itna sara khana khaya h to pain to hoga hi...
Nandu's dialogue was funny"
"pet me dard h to muh ku kholu"(seriously kaisa doctor h chappal se maro plz us ko koi)..
I love that part where Manik is making her style...
So he got best CEO award and why wont he got it when his lucky charm is there...
During speech trisha/trishna(jo bhi hai) thought manik would mention her...really she has high hopes matlab bande ko chodd diya fir bhi...
Manik is stuffing pasta in nandu's mouth on stage too...everygirl should get boy like him par kaha milte h agar kabhi bola bhi khila do toh bolenge tumare hath nhi h kya...
Poor nandu she is not abe to do hang out becsuse of barish...
Painting...nyc idea Manik..
Haww poor girl had marks...
What kind of cheap doctor..aise karta h koi...nandu is very innocent
Manik should break that doctor's wrist...

And plz dont say that we are getting bore with your stories
bcoz iam toh enjoying and even waiting for your update...
Plz dont end your stories so soon...

Originally posted by: rockstarlover

awesome update
manik is again rocking in his business wow
he dedicated his award to nandu
loved his speech
hate that doc😡😡
cont soon
don't be upset dear
we love all ur stories
they r really really awesome😃

thanks and gonna update soon...😳

Originally posted by: Bhumi.vachhani

Amazing keep it up waiting for the new part!!

THANKS...😛

Originally posted by: Tasniya09

Nandu to innocent ta bundle hey... love this girl to the core...
Update soon

THANKS...😃

Originally posted by: kavitamoolimani

AWESOME.


AWESOME.


AWESOME.



Thank you,

THANKS...😳

Originally posted by: nanoNikki

Hey its awesome plz keep smiling and keep writing take care 😊

THANKS DEAR...😳

Originally posted by: niti06

Thanks for the pm dear 😊 nandhu is so so so innocent yaar manik's care and love for her is great full size pizza or ek full cake kayegi to stomach karab ni hoga to kya sahi hoga 😆 give me that doctor I will kill him or beat him black and blue 😡 come back soon dear luv you 😳

THANKS...😃

update was awesome

lovely

hilarious

nandini pizza and cake dono kha gayi.. wow

lovely update

and no chance ur story is boring..plz don't end it..its sooo amazing

I m loving it

Originally posted by: mehak_ahuja

Awesome update

God it was so so sk good..

The story is so diffrent

Just amazing

THANKS...😳

Originally posted by: Sakshi196

I know i didnt comment here
par this story is also cute and funny like others...
Coming to update...
Manik is baking cake for her...wow...
Lo itni mehnat se cake banya nandu is already eating pizza...oh christ pizza aur cake ek sath kha liya...
Ab itna sara khana khaya h to pain to hoga hi...
Nandu's dialogue was funny"
"pet me dard h to muh ku kholu"(seriously kaisa doctor h chappal se maro plz us ko koi)..
I love that part where Manik is making her style...
So he got best CEO award and why wont he got it when his lucky charm is there...
During speech trisha/trishna(jo bhi hai) thought manik would mention her...really she has high hopes matlab bande ko chodd diya fir bhi...
Manik is stuffing pasta in nandu's mouth on stage too...everygirl should get boy like him par kaha milte h agar kabhi bola bhi khila do toh bolenge tumare hath nhi h kya...
Poor nandu she is not abe to do hang out becsuse of barish...
Painting...nyc idea Manik..
Haww poor girl had marks...
What kind of cheap doctor..aise karta h koi...nandu is very innocent
Manik should break that doctor's wrist...

And plz dont say that we are getting bore with your stories
bcoz iam toh enjoying and even waiting for your update...
Plz dont end your stories so soon...

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