#5 Vivah MaNan FF/THREAD 6 LINK-PG 1 - Page 92

amazing part
and emotional update
please continue soon

Awesome

Manan going to meet in next...

awesum

Are yr .. kya se kya ho gya.. aryman kya h nandu ka.. no don't show something betwn them.. Manik already love nandu..bs.. Nandu bhi janti h.. media conversation was very awesome. emotional too. nandu becomes also emotional. Babies are so cutee. aww I loved bacchas.. cute... But I just want manan to meet .. waiting for their meet.. Dekhe ab kya hota h.. Stay blessed

I'm liking this majnu manik..
But what's the relation between nandu & arayman ???
Plzzz dear clear it...
W8ing 4 next update

Amazing update!!!

Originally posted by: KYYian

srry anjali..but I don't think I can read d story further..

ur story was cute and realistic..there were tiffs betn manan during engagement to vivah journey..but u changed d whole concept.. 2 yrs seperation..gheesa pita twist..I don't understand what was d need of this?..

I don't know who is aryaman to Nandini? but I wouldn't have bear if manik has smone else in his life even if he wasn't in love wid that girl..

ur story is going in way of Ekta Kapoor shows

I m not bashing u or I don't mean to hurt u..u r an awesome writer, no doubt of that..its jst that I can't take this twist now.. d story has deviated from its core..

all d best..

I think u have already stopped sending PMS..and if u start sending it again, plz don't pm me..

I will miss this story..I will miss waiting for ur. updates

u shldnt have bring this seperation..instead u could have shown like manik going after nandini and manofying her..it was not that difficult to guess bcoz Cabir was already living in. London and if she has went wid him, then anyone would have guess that she went to London..

ssly I m so much disappointed wid u by this twist

may u reach more and more threads to this story

Originally posted by: KYYian

And yes dear plz don't feel bad by my comment..

go ahead wid what u have already figured it. out abt ur story..

jst bcoz u lost one reader doesn't mean u shld feel bad..otherwise ur other readers will bash me if u think otherwise abt ur story..I request go ahead..

may ur story get more and more readers..

actually when u weren't updating in June-July whole month, I read ur whole story again from d prologue..I still remember u said it will be like movie Vivah.. and smone said, plz don't bring such twist like Vivah.. hmmm yaha to kuchh jyada hi bura ho gaya..

hmm Koi baat nahi its jst a story..

Amazing update... m sorry for commenting sooo late.. but m busy with somrthing so cnt get tym.. Story is turning more nd more intrsting.. Manik's harsh words, hurt nandu, manan sepration is soo emotional.. Now new twist Aryaman.. yaar plzz dnt make him nandu's bf.. plzz.. Manan ko jldi milana..