#5 Vivah MaNan FF/THREAD 6 LINK-PG 1 - Page 43

Originally posted by: kash321

Hey u knw wat i loved d update
I also reading steamy scene
Bt today u won my heart
I m so happy u wrote d update with ur heart
I was so much into d update
I loved d way manik understood nandini
Super duper update
Its liked i m nt at all dissappointed abt d steamy scene
I was in love with d update nd manik

Originally posted by: zohasad2.0

I loved it. I think this was one of ur best updates coz I could actually feel PaNi as maNan saying all these dialogues. very well done dear!

Originally posted by: Boomchelesa

THAT WAS A WOWWW...Update..!!!! 😊 The last scenes were so warm & graceful..m in awwee..!! And i want it more.. 😳 haha..seriously...i cannot justify my feeling's with words..!!! And i feel it was better than the confession night..tht doesnot mean it was nt good..it was superbbb..!! .bt ye mujhe zyaada special & diff laga..!!

Nandu did so much of planning & plotting..ek din pehle se manik ko tadpaya.only to give him one of the most beautiful gift of his life..!!! The entire plan which u executed for manik was really too good..!! The pics which u used captivated me in some kind of spell..!! Only by imagining manan in those pics..i was blushing..!!! How do u manage to get on my nerves with those words & pics ofcourse..!!!

In morning no msg call nothing..tht followed till 12 noon..& then whn she picks it toh she says she was sleeping..& manik bought tht haha..!! And seriously soha is still his secretary..?? I thought uss fiasco ke baad..she wud hv been replaced.. I think may b she is not -ve type in ur story.!! And Anant cares for nandu...asking about her was very adorable thing..!!!

11:45 at night...waiking a sleeping manik like tht.. 😆 haha..& manik making those assupmtions..was the best scene..bechara..!! And then trust me those decorations & setup were so mesmirising..& nandu ka dress..manik ke saare hormones jaag gaye after seeing her.. 😉 she was tempting..bt he had to control himself..!! Tht proposal was lovely..!!

And then tht gift..prev day he was crying rembreing music, his chachu..& now he can smile whever he think about music coz its connected with his star.!!!

And okkk no 'SURPRISE' abhi bhi baaki hai..!!! Ye sirf surprise manik ke liye nu tha..bt for us too..!! It was so hot & romantic..!! She was hesitating to say wht she wanted to gift him..aww..mujhe bhi ek sec ke baad samajh aaya..!! And trust me strarting from the kissing on her lip to kissing her back..it was etheral..!!! I couldnt get enough of tht moment..he so wanted to mark her as his..he wanted her to say she is his..!!! He was feeling the heat which was created due to their proximity..!!! You nailed this scene..!! But being a true man..he respects her emtions so much..!!! Tht was very beautiful scene..where he conviced her tht he wud do it whn she is comfartble..he can wait..!! 😛

The last para which u wrote was very beautiful thought of manik..!! Overall it was lovely..super duper awesome..wonderful..etc update..!!! And BIG THANK YOU for such a long update..!!! Love u.

God Bless u

Originally posted by: megha94kumari

just too gd..

Originally posted by: gtilwani45

WOW UPDATE. SERIOUSLY A SUPER DUPER UPDATE. .. Totally enjoyed it.. that was so so fun... This update u wrote so so beautifully... I am so loving this .. Nandini did it so much. kitni planning plotting kri.. kyaa dimag lagaya.. Hehehe.. ek din phle manik ko kitna tadpaya. Ignoring him.. manik restless ho gyaa. hehe. Which pics you used. Gosh. ThaT was so amazing. imagining manan in those pics. superb.. You just write so beautifully... hehe.. when nandu was Ignoring manik. gosh ThaT was very amazing scne. Ananat cares for nandu. I think he should say sorry for his behavior. Waking manik in night. manik k assumptions .. ThaT scene was totally outstanding. Or sare decorations. sb kuch beautiful. nandu ka dress is pretty.. Manik..poor manik kitnaa control kra. haha. Nandini ka gift. that was so touchwood.. Manik loves his music. hope vo bhi jaldi mile.. Ohhh nandini ka ye surprise. ThaT was so Hot n Romantic. Manik can't control it.. ThaT was cute when nandu was hesitating to say this. their Romance is just fab. but Manik respect her. he knows she is not ready. usne Nandu ko bhi convince kiya ... Beautiful relationship they had. I love each n every thing. You are seriously great writer. you showed so much emotions. commendable !! Waiting for next update. Thanks for pm .. !! Stay blessed !! !! Keep Smiling !!

Originally posted by: sneha_glamarous

omg...this was sooo goood...

u wrote it very beautifully...

there wasn't any rush in the romance instead it was written very calmly...

just loved it...

her dress was so good...

just loved the way manik put his desires side n makes her comfortable...

she learned guitar for him...woe...

surprise was awesome...she made him wait for one long day...n he was getting very restless on not talking to her...not seeing her...

n can u please tell me the id of wattpad of urs...

Originally posted by: assuuu

Awesome...
Vry beautiful...
So romantic...
Nandini ne to manik ko dara hi diya tha...
Back to back surprises...
Such a understanding manik malhotra...
I was shocked dat dey will do it...
Thanks dr...
Nic pics nd videos...
Cnt soon..

Originally posted by: Cute_Inaya

It was fabulous ...Superb... Awesome...Amazing update dear...

Full of manan...

Starting... Nandini was ignoring him...

Manik was so restless ki nandini uska phone nhi utha rhi ...

aur hearing about her sickness wo kitna preshan hua tha...

Mukti helped her...

Nandini's surprise was superb... she planned everything very nicely... Actually I loved it dear...

Pics were beautiful...

Their moments were beautiful...

Really while reading na...I am blushing...

Last part ...tou best tha... . he didn't want to do anything without her consent ...

He said ki

they don't need to do it until she's fully ready...

Hayeee... He was so cute...and adorable...

U describe each and every scene very beautifully...

U did a fabulous job yrr...

Loved it alot...

Thanks for pm..

Keep it up...

keep smiling...

stay bless...

Originally posted by: Vandyandy

Hi Anjali

THKS for the PM..

WOW !!!!! ITNA LAMBA UPDATE ...SUPER COOL

AWWW!!!!! NANDU N MUKTI HAVING FUN MAKING MANIK WORRIED FOR NANDU...HEHEHE

SHE HAS BECOME A HABIT OF MANIK IN SMALL SPAN OF TIME... AWESOME...

FIRST BIRTHDAY OF MANIK AFTER HE GOT ENGAGED...

NANDU TOO EXCITED GIVING MANIK HIS BIRTHDAY SURPRISE...

NANDINI NE ITNA SOOCHA MANIK KE BIRTHDAY KO SPECIAL BANANE KELEYE...LOVELY...

MANIK NEVER EVER IN HIS DREAMS HAD THOUGHT NANDINI GIVING SUCH A ROMANTIC BIRTHDAY GIFT...

THE GUITAR... NANDU SINGING... THE GAZEBO... THE PLACE FOR THEM TO BE MORE COZY...ALL OF THEM MARVELLOUS...AMAZING...

NANDU WAS ALL READY TO BE MARKED BY MANIK ...TO ACTUALLY BE HIS FOREVER...

SHE WAS READY TO BREAK THE LINE BETWEEN THEM ...BEFORE THEIR WEDDING...

MANAN KA LOVE SCENE WAS VERY HAAWWTTT...

WOW !!!! MANIK DID UNDERSTOOD NANDU NOT READY FOR THIER INTAMICY ...HE BACKED OFF...EXCELLENT..

OFF COURSE THIER NIGHT WILL COME WHERE NANDU WILL NOT HESITATE TO BE IN HIS ARMS LIKE NEVER BEFORE..

GOOD ONE ANJALI...

KEEP IT UP

Originally posted by: AsthaVerma92

Wow m seriously i nver expected this part in dis story so early...
U actually surprised me ...:::::::
Bt i jst love the fact nandini surrending herselyto manik

Bt Manik's way to respect nandu...

Manan beautiful date Nd Manik's bday...:

Plzzz update new part soon