#5 Vivah MaNan FF/THREAD 6 LINK-PG 1 - Page 39

Such beautiful chapters ... Loved them ...especially the last one ... Like how you took it slow instead of diving into the big step ...liked how you took their relationship to the next step of passion ... Base 2... Instead of the home run ...
Keep the passion going !!

Continue soon

Thank you !!!

very romantic update...
loved it

set up pics were just awesome...

nandini made manik's bday very special...

cont soon
waiting

amazing

superb

mindblowing

what an update

what a bday celebratn

simply lovely

everything was awesomely awesome

d decor, d guitar, d song, d tent ...mindblowing

nandinis gift was awesome...gifting herself...n manik ka concern...I loved them...

I love ur writing

loved d update

Wow.. luved it.. nandu ka surprise ws awsum.. update ASAP

Beautiful ... <3
Do updte it fst!

Hey u knw wat i loved d update
I also reading steamy scene
Bt today u won my heart
I m so happy u wrote d update with ur heart
I was so much into d update
I loved d way manik understood nandini
Super duper update
Its liked i m nt at all dissappointed abt d steamy scene
I was in love with d update nd manik

It was beautiful ❤️ Specially Manik realising that Nandini isn't ready yet! 😃

I loved it. I think this was one of ur best updates coz I could actually feel PaNi as maNan saying all these dialogues. very well done dear!

Loved the update dear...the surprise was awesome...loved it vry much...n manik...he is so caring...i loved it when he thought about her...
Will be waiting fr next...
Cont. Soon...

THAT WAS A WOWWW...Update..!!!! 😊 The last scenes were so warm & graceful..m in awwee..!! And i want it more.. 😳 haha..seriously...i cannot justify my feeling's with words..!!! And i feel it was better than the confession night..tht doesnot mean it was nt good..it was superbbb..!! .bt ye mujhe zyaada special & diff laga..!!

Nandu did so much of planning & plotting..ek din pehle se manik ko tadpaya.only to give him one of the most beautiful gift of his life..!!! The entire plan which u executed for manik was really too good..!! The pics which u used captivated me in some kind of spell..!! Only by imagining manan in those pics..i was blushing..!!! How do u manage to get on my nerves with those words & pics ofcourse..!!!

In morning no msg call nothing..tht followed till 12 noon..& then whn she picks it toh she says she was sleeping..& manik bought tht haha..!! And seriously soha is still his secretary..?? I thought uss fiasco ke baad..she wud hv been replaced.. I think may b she is not -ve type in ur story.!! And Anant cares for nandu...asking about her was very adorable thing..!!!

11:45 at night...waiking a sleeping manik like tht.. 😆 haha..& manik making those assupmtions..was the best scene..bechara..!! And then trust me those decorations & setup were so mesmirising..& nandu ka dress..manik ke saare hormones jaag gaye after seeing her.. 😉 she was tempting..bt he had to control himself..!! Tht proposal was lovely..!!

And then tht gift..prev day he was crying rembreing music, his chachu..& now he can smile whever he think about music coz its connected with his star.!!!

And okkk no 'SURPRISE' abhi bhi baaki hai..!!! Ye sirf surprise manik ke liye nu tha..bt for us too..!! It was so hot & romantic..!! She was hesitating to say wht she wanted to gift him..aww..mujhe bhi ek sec ke baad samajh aaya..!! And trust me strarting from the kissing on her lip to kissing her back..it was etheral..!!! I couldnt get enough of tht moment..he so wanted to mark her as his..he wanted her to say she is his..!!! He was feeling the heat which was created due to their proximity..!!! You nailed this scene..!! But being a true man..he respects her emtions so much..!!! Tht was very beautiful scene..where he conviced her tht he wud do it whn she is comfartble..he can wait..!! 😛

The last para which u wrote was very beautiful thought of manik..!! Overall it was lovely..super duper awesome..wonderful..etc update..!!! And BIG THANK YOU for such a long update..!!! Love u.

God Bless u