#5 MANANSS: OUR WILD LOVE! (LAST EXCERPT -117) [COMPLETED]

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Sreedevi A

@Staars_Firefly

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Posted: 9 years ago

#81

Thank u for another shot dear..And as always it was awesome and please please dont stop writing You are a wonderful writer of this forum so plese dont take such heavy decisions in haste

..Keep smiling and may God bless you.

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Achiniti

@Achiniti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#82

Wow beautiful n cute update

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Madhavi

@MADHVIMADHU

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Posted: 9 years ago

#83

U r amazing writer... Yaar... one of my favorite... Pliz my only love ko b update kro yaar... Bahut time ho gya... Tumhari woh story b bahut achchi lagti hai mujhe... Pliz... 👏update soon... 😛

Edited by MADHVIMADHU - 9 years ago

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LoveIsManan

@LoveIsManan

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#84

That was so cute..
She is really her daddy's princess..
I love all your work..

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Hema_

@Hema_

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#85

Please don't do this your stories are beautiful :(( this excerpt was lovely.. <3 continue with the stories please

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sneha_glamarous

@sneha_glamarous

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#86

thanks for the pm...

what...???why...???? u r putting ur stories on hold... no .No nooo u can't do this...

i toh read each n every update of urs n comments too...u can't do this...!!!!

I'm toh even eagerly waiting for your another story that when will u remove the hold tag from that n u will continue but here toh u r thinking to put the hold tag on other stories too... please don't do this...

anyways now coming to Excerpt... it was good actually very good... loved the adiva n his papa bonding...

adiva don't want to leave her papa n wants to go with him...this reminds me of my childhood... rather it must have happened with every kid...

"Manik, can u stop spoiling her so that she can be an independent girl in future?" I hissed.
"This is not spoiling but showering my love on my
child, my dear wife." He corrected me ......loved the way he defended himself...

pinki promise...awww how cute...!!!

adiva wants to hv chocolate...
when manik brought chocolate for her daughter only n didn't bought anything for nandu she was getting jealous from her own daughter... awww

but got excited when manik said he has bought something for her too...
You can just have me, wife." He chuckled cockily and
leaned even more, ruining my imagination. ...LOVED this scene too...

on whole entire chapter was good...

Edited by sneha_glamarous - 9 years ago

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nanoNikki

@nanoNikki

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#87

Very lovely update plz keep writing and keep smiling god bless you 😊

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Geet *wink*

@dreamy_doll15

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#88

Wow.. I just love wild love. m so happiee reading their further life. itss beautiful. the way u showed n father n daughter bond was beautiful. its hell amazing. Manik n Adiva's bond was something very pure... believe hi nhi hota ye purana vala manik h.. hehehe.. Adiva she is a cutiepy like her mommy.. Hehe..nandini get jealous of her own daughter. awww so adorable. Amazing ... Thanks for pm.. Hey Alisha.. don't ever say this. ur stories are hell amazing. I seriously love ur every story. miss my only love too.. Waiting for next update... :*) !! Stay blessed !!

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Swagatika

@sws2

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#89

Loved the update

Loving the daddy-daughter moments

Thanks for pm

😊

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akshima1995

@akshima1995

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#90

Loved adiva n Manik's bonding...
N adiva's cute antics in front of her daddy...

Love all ur stories please don't put then on hold
Tysm for pm

Keep smiling always
😊

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