#10//The Ex's At War//Chapter 35 on Pg 165 updated on 26/03/2017 - Page 101

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rupmanan1 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
dil to mera bhi tut rha h ek ek krke har writer ki yhi complaints h ... but hum regular readr kya kre hm always aapko support krte h ...


kaddu meri favlate hai ... this story is unique ... hahaha kaddu nandu manik u need to try this but jb nandu samne h to use ye krne ki jrurtnhi

i love maniks silly reason to trap nandu really i mean kitne cute ho yar nandu aur kaddu me fark nhi lgta

and this rewa ye khi chali q nhi jati
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hahahahhaa... That nanfu kadu scene was hilarious... I loved it...


And y is this Manik so complicated man.. Cant he see.. What his wife is going thru...
Such a toddler...



And I miss ur story...t hanks for updating...
Loved it...
You are awesome at writing...keep it up...
Waiting for more.
Update soon
Gbu
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Posted: 9 years ago

nandini was really hurt

she felt manik dont want her now


but manik was busy making plans with manini to manofy his betterhalf


"Daddy whenevel you ale angly shay Nandu Kaddu Nandu Kaddu Nandu Kaddu ten timesh", she raised both her palms to give a count of 10.

😆


Suddenly Manik remembered the other half responsible for producing this daughter..

😆

. He immediately darted towards the balcony to check if I was there and more so to check if I had jumped off the rail. He actually thought that I had attempted something stupid



"Daddy ow ale you going to shay sholly to Mommy"

Well Princess for that we first need to check the mood of your Mommy and then decide",

😃

But for Manini it meant trouble, she knew an angry Mommy meant she had to find her books ASAP, she had to finish her food without a fuss, she had a pull a break on all her mischief's

😆


Besides tum dono hi itne chote ho that I am bound to be confused",

Mom glared at us like she had caught me making out with a stranger. Sometimes she was totally capable of forgetting that I was married in fact had kids with this man lying beside me.

"hello this is my room my bed my wife do you mind stepping out" look.


😆

"Sorry nahi bola na tune?", Cabir muttered into Manik's ears while tapping his pen on the file.

"Try kia tha but volcano ko samajh aaye tab na...I had created such a perfect moment but bammm!! And her Mom was there to ruin it all",

"Kuch nahi ho sakta tum dono ka...you guys are worse than toddlers

😆

"Cabir she looks cute na when she is angry and that frown Manini has inherited it from her they both look uber cute when they do it", he laughed a little loud and that made me glance at me.

😃

"Nandu Kaddu Nandu Kaddu Nandu Kaddu", he went on chanting for a few more times

😃

and they kissed


awsome 👏👏



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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey finally update
As usual awesome update
Love Manini baby she is so cute and best
Manik is trying to sort out things between them
And finally manan kiss omg
Can't wait for next update
Pls continue soon
And pls don't wrap up this story
Thanks tc
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Posted: 9 years ago
loved it
was super awesome as always
well hv read it on wattpad n cmnt too
but still want to be loyal wit if
hehe

about the update
this two are really really
tough nut to be cracked
thy r angry on each othe
every now n thn
thy so wanted to act
thy want ti get rid of 1 another
but in d end
love takes ovr tat
and tat wot matter

manik seriously made a lame excuse
in manofyin his wife
haha holding her as manini
trying to act cute hehe
this guy seriously hv his ways


manini baby d cutest one
always for her parents
she noes how to giv solution to her parents
she seriously gave a grt idea
to take name of her n her mama
wen her pa is angry

awww cabir man
u r only one whi noes them more than anyone
hehe seriously want things to get sorted
he cant see thm like tat
seriously " kuch nai ho sakta in dono ka cabir"

uhhh manik malhotra acting all swt to rewa???
n stupid gal is on cloud 9
haha

ahhh finally
nandu brust out
and manik used manini's technique
and the kiss


tqq so much for PM
i love this story
its everything for me
this was the reason of joing if n wattpad
plz do consider ur decision
i noe u r too bg
n we r being selfish
but its a story wch is making us greedy
pliz paalizzz
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Posted: 9 years ago
These guys have the complicated and irritating and actually really toxic relationship of all times. Nandini is gonna combust at the end. Manila really doesn't care a shit about her self respect and Nandini tries to but can't. Malhotra needs to get a reality check and understand what he says in his anger just doesn't flow away after he isn't angry anymore. And Nandini has equal rights of being angry.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awsm
Amazing
Manini is sooo cute
Plz dont end it soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Forget to mention that I am missing you and your stories terribly. So don't say that we are not missing you. It's just that so many people left kyy forum. May b that's the reason for getting less response. You need to know that we love your impulsive babies and their tail
😉 very much .
So sad that it's going to end. But every good thing have a happy ending. But we will wait for your another story to complete our weekends.
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Posted: 9 years ago
I don't know how to say thank you for amazing story...as usual awesome update...manik mantra nandu kaddu amazing 😆 I don't know how you think this small small things...but really love this story like anything...very sad to know you finishing this story 😭 pls don't do this...
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Posted: 9 years ago


Hayee itna low response... REALLY...WAS IT SO LOW...!!! MAY BE OVER HERE... BUT ON WATTPAD IT WAS QUITE GOOD... 300+ COMMENTS...950+ LIKES... MAY BE MOST OF THE PEOPLE SWITCH TO WATTPAD...

so basically everyone has forgotten this story..dil toot gaya mera itna kharab response dekh k ...koi ni ye gamm bhi seh lenge..
... FORGOTTEN...???? NO WAYS... KABHI BHI NAHI...HO HI NAI SAKTA... CAN ANYONE FORGET THIS STORY...ESPECIALLY MY CUTE LITTLE DOLL...

Kuch time aur jhel lo coz Impulsive babies and their
chotu sa tail will leave soon...
... JHEL LO...???? HOW CAN U SAY THAT... IMPULSIVE BABIES TOH MADE MY DAY HAPPENING.. N THEIR CHOTU SA TAIL IS TO SHO CUTE... I WANT TO JUST GOBBLE HER... PLEASE CAN I TAKE THIS CUTE TAIL .. U GIVE HEL TO ME...WE BOTH WILL DO LOTS OF FUN..
HAINA MANINI...



coming to update... it was as usual great...

I LOVE the" Nandu Kaddu Nandu Kaddu" chant! Actually I have been chanting that since I have read on wattpad... How cute is that..!!!

"Mommy shaid
Kaddu clies when shee ish schaled, Mommy schleams
when shee ish schaled and Daddy gets angry when he
ish schaled...Ale you schaled Daddy?", Manini finished
her baby speech ... MANINI KO TOH CONSULAR BAN JANA CHAHIYE...HEHEEE... SHE ISH SHO AWWWDORABLE...

SHE REMEMBERED WHAT HEL MOMMY TOLD HEL...

JUST LOVED THE WAY MANINI WAS CALMING HEL DADDY N WAS EXPLAINING HIM...

MANIK N HIS TACTICS TO MANOFY NANDU... ASSUMING HER TO BE MANINI..

N THEN HIS TEENAGER ROMANCE... UFFF..

READ IT ONCE AGAIN...JITNI BAAR READ KRUN UTNA KAAM HAI...

IF IT WOULD HAVE BEEN IN MY HANDS I WOULD HAVE ASKED YOU NOT TO END THIS STORY EVER...

THANKS FOR THE PM...

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