MaNan fs: On the next door (Epilogue - Page 16)

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Hello guys...😃. This is SWARNA and here I m with a NEW MaNan FS. This fs isn't written by me. This fs is belong to my frnd SUNIDHI from wattpad. I took permission from her to post this story for IF readers.
Anyways...now move on to the story...!!!!


PROLOGUE...!!!


We both were young when I first saw u.
I close my eyes and the flashback starts:
I'm standing there on a balcony in summer air.

See the lights,see the party,the boll gowns.
See u make ur way through the crowd and say..
"Hello", "Little did I know...

That u were romeo, u were throwing pebbles, And my daddy said
"Stay away from Juliet" And I was crying on the staircase
Begging u,"Plz don't go" And I said...

"Nandu...nandu...beta neeche aao... "
My mom yelled. Oh shit...I was watching him change his cloths...he was looking so HOT...☺️. he was about to open his pant but damn...my mom...!!!
No no don't worry...main iske agee kuch nahi dekhti...You all have no idea as to how much hot he looks in his boxers...😉. Believe me...if one day i will get a chance I will surely eat him up...😳.
But what chance...!!! We both haven't talkl to each othera till now. though we r neighbours from atleast 3 years now.

"Nandu...nandu...jaldi aa..."

Breaking my thoughts i ran downstairs.

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I was hell busy today as some of my relatives had come over here to meet us and I was't able to come to my own room. Can u believe it ??? My own room...well chucking my thoughts I again went towards window only to find him sleeping...😳.

Romeo,take me somewhere we can b alone.
I'll b waiting;all that's left to do is run.
U'll b the prince and i"ll b the princess,
It's a love story,baby,just say "Yes"

Aww......he is so CUTE...!!! But why is he sleeping so early ? I glanced at the clock and found that it's 12 a.m. That bloody relatives took so much time to go...Don't they have their own house...
Forget it... I was able to see him so clearly becoz our house is parallel to each others and even our rooms. So we both can easily watch each other through our windows and the best part is thathis bed is just beside the window...so I can watch him sleeping. He is so handsome...😳.
I always thank aayiappa to give me this room...

So I sneak out to the gardento see u.
We keep quite coz we we're dead if they knew. So close ur eyes...
escape this town for a little while. Oh,oh.

I still remember that me and my bro fought a lot to get a room downstairs but eventually he got that room. I was really sad for not able to get that room and I unwillingly had to take this room. But then he shifted there and one day accidentally I watched him getting changed... Well it was unintentionally as I went to draw the curtains but found him getting changed... I tried to shifting my gaze but he was looking just so irresistible that i can't...☺️. And from that day I always used to see him through the window.

"coz u were Romeo- I was a scarlet letter,
And my daddy said "stay away from Juliet"
But u were everything to me,I was begging u,
"Plz don't go" And i said...

I used to get up by seeing him sleeping peacefully...😛. And if possible I used to even spend my whole day seeing him... And yeah ...!
And whenever he used to play guitar and sing...I just used ti sit in my study table as my study table is just below the window and pretend to study while actually I used to listen him...

Romeo,take me somewhere we can b alone.
I'll b waiting;all that's left to do is run.
You'll b the prince and I will b the pricess.
It's a love story baby just say "yes"


In short my day starts with him...spend with him...ends with him !!! The difference is only that he doesn't know about it...

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OK...guys...tell me how is it ?😃😃.
Plz share ur review so that i can forward it to sunidhi. Plz hit the LIKE button and comment...😳.
We both will b waiting for ur reviews...😃😳.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Index:
Prologue page -1
Chapter 1 - Page 2
Chapter 2 - Page 5
Chapter 3 - Page 7
Chapter 4 - Page 10
Chapter 5- page 13
Epilogue - Page 16
Edited by manancraze - 9 years ago
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Wohaa.. I read this fs on wattpad. That's a very beautiful story & A cute one too.. Aww. I really really loved this... But I would love to read it again.. hope many people will appreciate it.. :*) !! Stay blessed !! !! Keep smiling !!
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hey i have read this on wattpad itself.. it was so nice..😊
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Originally posted by: gtilwani45

Wohaa.. I read this fs on wattpad. That's a very beautiful story & A cute one too.. Aww. I really really loved this... But I would love to read it again.. hope many people will appreciate it.. :*) !! Stay blessed !! !! Keep smiling !!

Thanks for reading it again...😃
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Originally posted by: StarFlies39

hey i have read this on wattpad itself.. it was so nice..😊

Thanks for reading again...😳
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Excellent & cute prologue...
Luved it...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Originally posted by: shaan...

Excellent & cute prologue...

Luved it...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...

Thanks...😃
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Originally posted by: dhillon90

Interstnggg
Continue soon

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Note : The above pic shows how Nandini and Manik talks through writing in paper and showing each other.. do see the pic to clarify your doubts.

Chapter - 1

Hey! Am Nandini Murthy...16 years old teenager.. i live in Shimla and study in Space Academy. My best friend is Navya Mukti and Alya and my hobbie is watching him...

I am sitting on my study table studying.. ok!!! Trying to study.. Maths sucks!!! 🤢 Totally sucks !!!
I shifted my gaze from my books to the window and...
Shit!!!!
Holy shit!!!
Cow shit!!!
Donkey shit!!!
Shit shit shit!!!
Why the hell is he seeing here? Aur upar se he caught me staring! Life can't be more embarrassing.. Being flushed i hid my face in the notebook. Gathering all my courage i again glanced at him only to find him laughing...
Bloody Moron!!! 😡

I quickly wrote "Stop laughing" big enough so that he can read in my Maths notebook and showed him.
He also quickly wrote something in a paper and showed me...it read "You are so cute Nandu..." 😳.

Blush crept and my cheeks turned red.. .☺️I was so happy like so so happy...😛"Thanks."

But just then my ever so grateful mom again called me...
Ufff!!!
Ayyiappa!!!!
Why does mom always have to blast my bubble.. i mean we just started talking and... forget it...
I quickly wrote "Bye.. gotta go" and showed him.

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It was evening and Navya Mukti and Alya had come for a chit chat session. These girls are my lives... We were busy chit chatting when Navya suddenly asked me-

Navya : "Baat aage bada..?"

Nandu : "Nahi Navya.."

Mukti : "One sec.. on which topic are you both talking? Is something there which me and Alya don't know..?"
Mukti suddenly asked.. i was hesitant at first but then these are my best friends so i started narrating them my story-
Nandu : "Umm.. vo actually Mukti i like a boy..."

MukLya : "What? Seriously? Kaun hai vo?"
They both started bombarding me with questions..
Nandu : "Calm down.. vo you know him.."
I say pointing outside my window where Manik was doing something on his laptop..
Nandu : "I like him.."
MukLya : "He is so hot yaar Nandu.."..."Badi achi choice hai.."
And again this stupid blush crept..☺️...Urgh!!!!
I glanced him and found him looking in my direction itself.. Our eyes met for sometime and then he waved a hi towards my direction.. i responded and then he drew the curtains.
I turned to see the girls but they were already gushing over him...Like seriously? 😡
I elbowed Alya who was just not shifting her gaze from the window..
Nandu : "He is mine.."
Alya : "Nandu yaar ye tujhe kaise mil gaya?"
What????
What does she mean?
Mukti : "Alya ab humari Nandu itni cute hai to usi ko to ye milega.."
Nandu : "Thanks mukti.."
Navya : "Nandu ye sab chor aur ye bata tum dono ne baat kiya..?"
Now Navya asked.. Ab usko main kya bolu?
Nandu : "Umm.. actually Navya hum abhi tak baat to nhi ki par.."
I showed her the paper through which we have recently talked...
Mukti : "Awwiee..😳..So cute yaar!"
Alya : "But iss generation mein bhi tum log dono paper dikha dikha ke baat kar rahe ho.. aur vaise bhi i think he doesn't like you..."
Alya added! I felt bad with her words..
Navya : "Tu ye kya bol rhi hai Alya?"
Alya : "Umm.. vo i mean ki usse to hot aur sexy ladki pasand hogi na.."
Alya added but i heard her muttering "just like me" in her breathe.. What's wrong with this girl????😡😡😡
Mukti : "Alya tu chup hoja.. don't demotivate her.."
Alya : "Acha chalo guys.. lets go Mom is calling.."
She informed and they all left bidding bye and hugging me. I laid over my bed and started thinking about our latest conversation. Why was Alya behaving so weirdly? Am i not hot? My little thinking session was disturbed by a melodious voice.. I followed it and found that Manik was singing...

Kaise kahun ishq mein tere
Kitna hoon betaab main
Aankhon se aankhe mila ke
Chura loon tere khwaab main (x2)

I directly went and sat on my study table listening him.. his voice always drown me...

Mere saaye hain saath mein
Yaara jis jagah tum ho

There is so much intensity in his voice...
Main jo jee raha hoon
Wajah tum ho..
Wajah tum ho.. (x2)

I so like this man.. He is mine.. totally mine...😳

Hai ye nasha, ya hai zehar
Iss pyar ko hum kya nam dein ||
Hai ye nasha, ya hai zehar
Iss pyar ko hum kya naam dein

Wind started blowing heavily due to which the curtains also started moving to and fro revealing Manik time to time. He was so engrossed in singing that he didn't realised it. His passion towards music is something so commendable...

Kab se adhuri hai ik daastaan
Aaja usey aaj anjaam dein
Tumhe bhuloon kaise main
Meri pehli khata tum ho...

Will we never be able to talk? Will he never like me? Will we never date? Will i never be able to touch and kiss that mole above his lips?

Main jo jee raha hoon
Wajah tum ho..Wajah tum ho.. (x2)

He completed the song and came forward to close the windows properly as it was very disturbing. He reached towards the window and as soon as he saw me...he smiled and then knitted his eyebrows in confusion. I didn't got it and asked him what he is talking through gestures. He walked away and again came back with a paper.. wrote something on it and showed me...
Manik : "Why are you crying?"
I realised that i was crying thinking all those bullshits.. I quickly wiped my tears and wrote
Nandu : "Its nothing" and showed him.
Manik : "You sure?"
Nandu : "Yaa"
Manik : "Ok then good night"
nandu : "Good night"
Our little paper conversation was over and i was feeling a little better now. I directly went towards bed and slept peacefully.


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Phew...!!! Khatam ho gaya...koi so to nahi gayee...😆.
Agar nahi gayee ho to hit the LIKE button and do COMMENTS...😳. Will be waiting for ur reviews...😃

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