Fake Girlfriend #3 Chapter 43: Page 23 - Page 10

Hi I so love this story please finish it with a beautiful and happy ending I will be sad 😭 and I appreciate your hard work and your efforts for this story look forward to read next part take care keep smiling and God bless you my beautiful and amazing writer 😊 😉

Awesome update

Originally posted by: Rachu14

Hi. Nice confession. Though I feel you didn't do justice to the confession. I m not criticizing or don't want to hurt your feelings but normally the way you describe the emotions and conversations and scenes, I felt you rushed the scene a little bit.

I m not a writer but I have some ideas if u r interested. Normally most writers either end story on beautiful notes or create twists.

My suggestion- how about now you take them to there past. Since they have confessed, how about slowly they reveal to each other how they felt when xyz happened. Like manik can share what he felt when that dadi in India told him that nandini is a keeper and prospose or whatever she said ( you can go back to the chapters and check), and then nandini talks what she felt that time that how will she survive when all this over. You can feel it romance and emotions. also you can make them share how manik felt when that Rahul attacked Nandini, like he wants to protect her forever. I hope u get my point. It's just showing what they went through while being with each other and still unaware of so much. Also what nandini felt when Radhika scene happened.

Again hope you don't mind anything I wrote above. All in friendly advise.

Hey
I do agree with you upon this point.
Fake girlfriend is actually the books which made me so known to everyone. I have slow internet and it takes me like really bad time to write it. I do post easily on wwatt padbut here it is an problem.

That is why iIwanted to get it over and iIcan post sequelon wwattpad
I guess I am goingto rrewritee the chapter.

Thanks

Tq dear
Bt y to del confession
Whatever u want to write portray in someone pov as in flashback back
Just think... Just a suggestion
Whatever u like to protray will be accepted and admired also

Originally posted by: Sadhana143

Tq dear
Bt y to del confession
Whatever u want to write portray in someone pov as in flashback back
Just think... Just a suggestion
Whatever u like to protray will be accepted and admired also

I was to write much more beautiful confession
That is why

Nice idea.. Thank u so much

Chapter 39


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(NO CONFESSION HERE)
(STORY AFTER MANIK ASKED NANDINI TO BE READY FOR DATE ARRANGED BY MANAGEMENT)

"Where -" I wishpered patting my fingers on my thigh.

"Not again! I am not going to tell you " he said and I nodded.

Don't tell me.
Arrogant master of mine!

" You love carnival? " he asked and I nodded

" I am not girly type crazy but yes carnival is fun " I said shrugging and then understood

" Are we going to carnival? " I asked and he nodded

" I am so genius. But I don't understand why management arranged there? Like it will be crowdy right? " I asked curiously

" Um? I don't know " he said and I nodded still being confused.

We soon reached there and may be I am no fan of carnival but I love them. They are fun

"Lets go " he said and I nodded.

We walked hand to hand and bought two tickets.

I looked beside me and saw him smiling. My eyes went to our intertwined hands. I smiled again.

It was all real?

Real.

"So what should we do first. " he asked rubbing his hand together as if thinking something and I snapped back.

I looked around and bit my lips. There was so much to do today.

"Umm. Can we have candy gross" I asked and he gave me small nod.

We walked to counter and bought one big candy gross. I sticked my fmouth into it and my heart swelled with joy when I tasted it. It was all so sweet.

I looked at him and forwarded it to him.

"No" he said.

"Have it. You just need to have a bite from it " I said and he nodded. He slowly pungled his head and had a bit with the Candy sticking all over his lips and cheeks.

I slowly dragged my hand and cleaned his face. His intensity was killing me.

"This was your first bite ever " I asked smiling and he gave me small nod.

"I had it when I was young and kid " he said and I shook my head.

"You should have it more often. They are pleasure " I said having another bite.

After having Candy Gross we went to Micky world which was actually Micky ride which was clam and soft.

"Can we like go to those big roller coaster " I asked and he looked at me.

"You won't cry na?" He asked nd I shook my head.

"Okahe then " he said and we took two tickets.

We sat at front row with our hand crossed together.

He held me close by my shoulder.

"You just need to shout " he said and I nodded giving him small smile.

"Lets begin 123 " Came the voice as the coaster ride moved with small acceleration and increased With The time.

We both held ourselves closure. My eyes snapped closed when I felt coaster getting slow and jumping all over from the track downwards. We yelled and shouted with whatsoever excitement or scare.

It was fun though. I looked at Manik when the ride went down.

He gave me small and we enjoyed till the ride get end .

"It was so much fun man! Can we go back again " I asked jumping.

"No. We need to more fun. Come I will take you somewhere " he said and I nodded. We walked to corner part of fair.

I saw board of Ghost ride. My excitement and smile grew much bigger.

"I know you want to go. Lets go " he said pulling me more by myself

He bought two tickets and we we're asked to sit in a car which was attached to track. It started when it moved with certain much more speed. I looked around and it was dark around.

"Danger Ahead. The cars which feels scary can push right button by your side " the voice said and the car started moving. I looked around it was dark scary set up.

" Don't worry I am there " I said cheerfully to him and he chuckled

" That was supposed to be my line " he said and I laughed.

" I am brave " And as soon as I said.

Sudden voice beside me made me jump over Manik. He held me close to himself.

" Very brave. I see " he mocked.

Suddenly I felt some water on me. I looked up to find a dead body kind of hanging with blood dripping down. I yelled scared and cacooned myself to him. I was scared to even notice what Manik was feeling. Our car suddenly moved with high speed and it seemed like it could crash and there was some girl standing just in front of car. I yelled impatiently for car to stop and it did just in front of girl. She yelled and fell down on her knees. She looked up nd I jumped back.

She was scary with those black eyes and blood teeth of hers. I felt myself crying and closing my eyes. We finally stopped and i looked around .

Manik gave me small smile

Manik even bought me those yummy chocolates.

"Stop looking at them! " I said as he looked at huge teddy.

" Wait I will bring it for you " he said and I shrugged.

" But I want to bring it for you " I said and he chuckled and nodded.

After shooting 4 balls I got that teddy and I bowed in front of Manik while people looked at me crazily.

" This is for you sweetheart. Now don't cry for this "I said and he looked around as people laughed.

" Sweetheart. Eh? " he asked as I stood up.

" Sweetheart! " I said and we laughed.

" Should we go? " He asked and I nodded yawning.

We really had Fun but it was tiring

After having small dinner we drive back to house.

I threw myself on couch. He gave me small smile.

" I still can't understand why date in carnival" I asked

" You know what? " He said drinking water.

" It was no date " he said and I sat up.

" What do you mean? " I asked

" I planned everything " he said walking to room.

" Manik? " I called him.

" You organized. But why? " I asked.

" For making you realize I care for you and you are special Nandini. I have lost my family once and that's why I am quite possessive about them but now you are one of the important person in my life " he said

" Am I? " I asked gulping my tears.

" Very much " He said and I smiled.

" Thank you soo much for today. I never had this much fun and never got to see this side of yours "I said and he laughed.

" Yes me too! Now who would call me sweetheart " He said laughing and I smacked him on his shoulder.

" Aoo! That hurts "He said and I smiled.

" Wow! That's why I did that " I said and walked to my room and shouted quick good night.

My eyes went to moon. I smiled at him.

Shine because I love everything now. Thanks for making me feel soo special. Thank you.

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It was realy nice update.
I enjoyed.
At the end manik's confession.
Now She is realy an important part of his life,

Awww dat was really adorable and cute update
Manan nd der beautiful love for each other...
I jst loved manan date...

Plzzz update new part soon