#2MANAN FF : WILL U BE MY GIRLFRIEND/PART 27 pg 39 & spl update pg - Page 11

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Posted: 8 years ago

Part B :

Next morning breakfast table :

"baccha log.. theek sae kha toh lo.." dj said looking at manik nandini and mukthi .. the trio looked at her once and again dug their faces into there books and Nyonika and Dj sighed and started feeding the kids with their own hands while Dadu and Raj were waiting for their chance.

"yeh lo dahi aur sugar.. exam acchae sae dena..." Dj said feeding Mnik Nandini and Mukthi the sugar and curd and Nyonika kissed their forehead and wished them luck and soon they were in college infront of their exam hall... nandini was panicking seeing which manik walked towards her and cupped her face and said

"relax jaan... you will do well.." and leaned forwards to kiss her forehead. She sighed and said

"all the best manik.." to which he smiled and seeing him she too smiled.

****

"navya listen to me.. shaanth ho jao.." cabir said hugging a continuously crying navya and she sobbed more

"cabir jii.. hum fail ho jayangae.." she wailed more loudly and all were looking at her with weird expressions. Cabir forcefully broke the hug and made her look at him and said in a loud serious tone

"shh. Chup .. bilkul chup.."

Navya jumped on her place seeing cabir so serious and stopped crying but was hiccupping and sniffing. He hugged her more tightly and she too reciprocated the hug with equal force and then cabir said patting her head lovingly

"relax.. okay.. just relax... Tumnae sab padh liya hai naa.. toh phir ro kyun rahi ho..?" he asked still hugging her and she sniffed again.. cabir was waiting for her reply and she said after taking a long breath

"vo.. humane sab padh toh liya hai.. hum pass ho jayangae naa cabir.." she asked soo innocently that cabir just felt like kissing her hard then itself but he composed himself and said

"jii cabir ki jaan,. You will do well.." and kissed on the top of her head and she blushed to the deepest shade of red and hugged him more tightly making him chuckle. A fake cough brought them back to reality and they broke their hug unwillingly

"baby don't you think we missed something.." Dhruv said looking at Aliya and she nodded her head in a yes crossing her arms on her chest.

"so bol.. kya ho raha hai..??" Dhruv asked narrowing his gaze on CaVya while navya was searching for a place to hid and cabir was looking here and there confirming their doubts.

But before they could answer the warning bell rang and all rushed to their respective rooms for writing the exam.

After exam :

All the couples assembled in the canteen and were talking about "how they performed in the exam" when mukthi said

"finally... day after tomorrow is the last exam and this semester will be over.. aur phir we have 1 month holidays.. im soo excited.."

"I second you mukthi.. inn exams ki wajah sae I didn't go for shopping.. so ill be compensating for it in our holidays.." Aliya said clapping her hands and Dhruv made a bad face making everyone laugh.

"hum toh ghar jayangae.. maa papa ki bahuth yaad aa rahi hai.." navya said in a sad tone and cabir looked at her with wide eyes and freaked out immediately

"what..???? you will go home for 1 month.. no... tum kahi nahi jaa rahi ho samjhi.." he declared and navya frowned and said

"aur vo kyun... hum toh ghar jaa rahae hai bas.." and turned her head to the other side.

"navya agar tum chali gayi toh mera kya..??" he said like a small kid whose candy has been snatched.

Rest all were looking at them as they were aliens and then manik broke their conversation

"guys guys.. stop fighting... whats going on..??"

"umm.. humae chalna chaiyae.. ek aur exam hai naa.." navya said in a low tone taking her bag and cabir too got up saying

"come I will drop you.. phir mummy kae paas jana hai.. she had some work with me.." and just whne they were about to take one more step all shouted

"STOP" and the very next moment they were surrounded by their friends who were not ready to leave them so easily and Cavya were trapped.

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Edited by neeju_chinnu - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Part C:

"cabir jii.. aapki mom suddenly humsae milna kyun chahatae hai..?" navya asked adjusting her dupatta and cabir just smiled faintly in reply.

"kuch boliyae naa.." she again asked him and he shrugged his shoulders indicating that even he didn't knew about it.

Both were sitting in cabir's house and his mom was in the kitchen cooking. navya was hell scared and nervous same was the case with cabir. He held her hand and gave it a light squeeze and blinked his eyes in assurance.

"chalo bacchon.. lets have dinner.. see what I have prepared... sab tumharae favourite dishes hai navya.. cabir nae bata ya tha.." cabir's mom was talking continuously while navya froze on her spot and cabir wanted to shout loudly asking his mom to stop all this but couldn't.

"arae wahan kyun khadae ho.. come sit.." cabir's mom called them and they both went and sat and were eating silently when cabir's mom said

"kya.. itnae chup kyun ho.. koi marr gaya hai kya yahan..??" she said seriously and both cavya nodded their heads in a NO.

"toh phir.. itne chup kyun ho tum dono ?? " she again asked and on getting no reply she continued

"cabir.. har roz toh chapar chapar karte rehatae ho naa.. aaj kya hua..??" to which cabir said

"aisa kuch nahi hai mom.. bas.. kuch nai.." and again continued eating looking at navya every now and then. Actually cabir's mom was sitting in the centre with cabir on one side and navya on the other.

"arae navya beta tumnae toh kuch bola bhi nahi... jab sae aayi ho bilkul chup chap baithi ho.. mera cabir toh bolta tha ki tum non stop batein karti ho.." and bulls eye

"kya.. cabir jii nae bola ki hum non stop batein karate hai.." she asked looking at cabir's mom who nodded her head in a yes and navya fumed in anger

"cabir jii.. aap aisa kaise bol sakte hai.. hum non stop batein karate hai haan ?? boliyae ?? " and poor cabir got sandwiched between his mom and navya.

"arae usae chodo beta tum batao.. cabir bol raha tha ki tum sharuk ki bahuth badi fan ho.. tumnae Fan movie dekha ??" cabir's mom asked navya diverting navya's attention from cabir and she was successful. Navya was again non stop talking and talking .. and by the end of dinner cabirs' mom and navya gelled up so close as if they know each other since ages and cabir was forgotten long back. He didn't even want to intervene between the duo as he was admiring their bond secretly.

"toh bolo kaunsa flavour ice cream chahiyae tumhae..??" cabir's mom asked navya

"choco butterscotch" cabir and navya said together and blushed looking at each other and cabir's mom smirked.

They had ice cream and finally the day came to an end and cabir's mom asked navya to stay back as it was late in the night and navya happily stayed back. Cabir wanted to share room with navya but navya forgot him long back and staright away walked with his mother to her room.

***

"And from that day she started coming to our house frequently as mom was very much fond of her and so we are friends now" cabir narrated the whole story and navya was hiding behind him holding his shirt tightly.

"itna sab kuch ho gaya and you didn't bother to tell us.. very bad cabir.." Abhi said in a sad tone

"arae kuch hua toh nahi naa.. we are just friends..." cabir said in a irritating tone and manik rose his eyebrow and said

"accha.. just friends haan.."

"haan.. just friends.." cabir said looking here and there and all mouthed an ohh

Before anyone could interrogate further cabir's phone rang and he moved aside dragging navya along and everyone looked at them with open mouth.

"someone pinch me.." Dhruv said and as a favour Aliya pinched him tightly and he said "ouch.. itna bhi zor sae nahi.." and rubbed the place where Aliya pinched him.

"matlab sach mae cabir aur navya.." nandini left the sentence incomplete and all nodded their head in approval..

"wow.." the girly clapped happily and Abhi said "lo ek aur bakara bali kae liye tayyar.." which for his luck was not heard by the girls specially mukthi.

Night in Malhotra Mansion ( after dinner )

Nandini knocked Raj and Nyonika's room door and they called her in

"beta you need not knock the door.. tum andar aa sakti ho.." Nyonika said after nandini came and sat beside her

"bolo beta baath kya hai.. manik tujhae pareshan nahi kar raha naa.." raj asked caressing her head lovingly and she nodded her head in a no

"toh.. kya hua beta.. you can share.." Nyonika asked and nandini spoke

"vo.. mom.. papa.. vo I mean.. vo holidays.." nandini was searching for words when raj said

"agae bolo nandu.. holidays what..?"

"vo.. holidays hai naa.. I wanted to go home.. mumma papa ki bahuth yaad aa rahi hai.." nandini said in a low tone and they sighed in relief and raj said

"bas itni si baath... mai toh dar gaya tha.."

"aur beta. You need not ask for our permission agar tumhae jana hai toh.. vo tera hi ghar hai baccha.. jab bhi man chahae tu jaa sakthi hai.." Nyonika said lovingly and nandini lied down in her lap and said wrapping her arms around her waist

"I love you mom.." to which she giggled and said "love you more.."

"mujhae toh tum log bhul hi gayae.." raj complained and they laughed at his comment and said

"waisae nandu.. mainae pehalae hi tumhara trip plan kar liya tha.. tum manik mukthi aur tumharae sarae dost.. sab log milkae jana.. tumhara jab tak man chahae tab tak wahan rehna okay.." he said and nandini hugged him tightly and said loudly

"I love you dad,.. sacchi mae.." to which he laughed loudly and said "love you more beta jaan.."

"chal ab bahuth raath ho gayi hai.. tu jakae so jaa.. warna tari maa bolaegi ki tarae face pae yeh jo dark circles aa gayae hai naa vo meri carelessness ki wajah sae aa gayae hai.." Nyonika said in a teasing tone

"hawww... momm... yeh dark circles nahi hai.. vo bas thodi stressed hun naa isiliyae.. agar do din so jaungi toh sab theek ho jayaega.." nandini said and pouted cutely.

"okay mom and dad.. byee good night.." nandini got up and kissed their cheeks and in return got kisses and she happily came to maniks room and laid on the bed totally ignoring him and covered herself with the blanket and closed her eyes.

Manik noticed her happy behaviour and went towards the bed and sat beside her and asked pulling the blanket off her face

"kya hua.. itni khush ho aaj ki bina marae warning diye hi room mae aakae so gayi..??" she got up excitedly and said hugging him

"day after tomorrow after exam... we are going manglore.. wow.. im so excited.."

He too hugged her back and said "that's great.." and broke the hug and saw tears in her eyes and asked worriedly

"kya hua nandu..?? why are you crying ??" to which she nodded her head in a no and said "these are tears of happiness manik.. im so happy.." and hugged him again. Manik without breaking the hug laid on the bed and within no time both were sleeping peacefully in each others arms.

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Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely update...
Love Manan moments and Manan...
They are so cute...
Continue soon...
Update soon ok...
Don't stress dear everything will fine...

And and and want update from spy at my house...please yaar jaldi se update do...
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Posted: 8 years ago
So sorry to hear about the news
Hope you are coping well
Hold on to your strngths and make her proud. I am sure she is watching you and blessing you.

The update was awesomeee
Just love the way Manik loves Nandu and is possessive about her.
Nandu is one cutypie
Cavya part was fun
Eagerly waiting for the gang to do loads of masti in Mangalore.
Thanks for pm
😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazinggg suprrbbb awesomee update
Thnx for pm me
Wowww cavya ab toh cabir bhi bali chad gea...lovd it
Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hey.. how are you now?
Listen, be strong... difficult hoga living without the person you love so much but life toh chalti rahegi na...

The update was nice. Long. Manik and Nandini are great. Would love to read some mukti- Nandini moments too
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Posted: 8 years ago
Heyyy!
I'm so sorry to hear that you lost someone very close to you! I can imagine how upset you are.. Even though they aren't with you physically.. I'm sure she's still always around you! Be strong and stay positive!<3
Thankyou for the PM!
Another lovely update, beautifully written!
Nice long update too!;)
Awww love Manan!
There studying session was too cute!
Love the way Manik helps her and teases her too!
Hehehe lol changing her dress!
The family moments are so sweet!
Haha finally everyone knows about Cavya!
Too funny!!
Ooh what's gonna happen next! Excited to see Mangalore scenes!
Continue soon!!:)
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Posted: 8 years ago
so cute.. manan learning together was awesome part.. maniks plan to get her wid him r too good.. loved it

excited for manan trip to manglore

loved d update

jst got to know abt ur dear one.. feeling srry and stay strong..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi Chinnu
andari laa,, nuvvu koodaa forum vadilesaavemo Anukunna
Update baavundi
Kasta veedu chesukuni updates ivvu talli
Story Madyalo aagite kastam
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update..
Maniks realy naughty..
Manan romance..
Cavya bond..
Manik teaching nandu..
Luvd it..
Thnkz 4 d pn.

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