II-Mananff LOVE BRINGS HATRED ALONG(PART-53 + FINAL NOTE/PG27) - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely update
Finally nandani is ready to give Manik chance
Loved it update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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congratulations for new thread
u totally deserve itt
amazing updateee
thanks for taking out timw and giving us updatee
it was overwhelming
loved it
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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firstly many many congratulations for new thread dear
n thanx for pm
update was awesome
girls moment was superb
after a long time they are laughing like this
n in all of this they remembered some sweet n some bitter memories of their life
Navya intiating talk with nandani giving a chance to manik was amazing n muklya also helping her n being her friend they understanding her state giving her time to think about it was superb
all the boys were happy seeing girls laughing like this after long time n they also join in this
wow nandani's ready to give manik a chance
waiting for manik's reaction
cont soon
stay blessed
always b happy
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome Storyline...
Just came across it a week ago...
Read it all in a go...
Hata offf yaar...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Everything is going too gud.. loving this
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PART- 47 GO WITH THE FLOW...!!

So here is the update...!! And please read the note in the end...!! And let me know...!! Whatever u wish for...!!

HAPPY READING...!!
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Recap: all of them enjoyed after a long time...!! Girls talked to nandini to give manik a chance... manik and nandini's eye lock...

At 9 pm-

Finally girls were moving down...!! But stopped listening nandini...!!

Nandini: I AM READY TO GIVE HIM A CHANCE...!! I DON'T KNOW... IF I AM DOING RIGHT OR WRONG...!! OR WHAT THIS DECISION OF MINE WILL LEAD US TO...!! BUT HE DESERVES A CHANCE...!! MOREOVER... I KNOW U ALL CARE FOR ME...!! AND HAVE DONE A LOT FOR ME...!! SO U'LL WON'T LET ME DO ANYTHING WRONG...!! I TRUST U ALL...!!

As nandini was saying all this...!! They were just staring at her...!! Their minds registering what she is saying... and automatically a smile formed on their faces... as they heard that she trusts them...!! They were happy as she took a step nearer to manik again...!!

They just hugged her tight... with bright smiles on their faces...!! Even nandini hugged them back...!! She hugged them tighter... just to assure herself that... whatever she is doing is right...!! She was still scared... but now she trusts them... so for them... she agreed...!!
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They finally broke the hug...!! All of them had bright smiles on their faces... and nandini was a faint smile on her face... which grew bigger seeing them happy...!!

She saw them being happy for her...!! So even she smiled... seeing them happy...!! As now she was changing... and again... that old nandini was coming back... again she was feeling happy in others happiness...!!

At 9.30 pm-

Girls were coming down with bright smile on their faces...!! They were really happy... as finally they were able to do atleast something for manik...!!

As the were descending the stairs...!! Nandini said that she will just freshen and come...!! To which all of them nodded happily as... they will also get time to tell manik about nandini's decision...!!

In the hall-

After their enjoyment session... boys came in the hall... and lied down on the couches there...being tired...!! Cabir dhruv... abhi... three of them were there... but manik was missing...!!

As the girls reached the living room... they saw the guys... lying there on the couches... as if... they have ran in a marathon...!!

Mukti: Oh... Hello...!! Get up... lazy people...!! Ese so rae ho jaise pata nai konsi jang lad ke aaye ho...!! Utho...!!

With this... Mukti pushed cabir... and then abhi... due to which cabir landed on the ground ... and abhi... saved himself from falling...!! And dhruv... being the naive one... sat straight by himself... as he didn't wanted to be pushed by Mukti...!! And then the girls sat on the couch...!!

As cabir fell off the couch... he shouted at Mukti... but then... lied down on the ground only...!!

Alya: grow up cabir...!! U didnt got the couch so u are sleeping on the floor only...!!

Cabir: Alya... come on yr...!! Ek toh upar sone nai de rae... aur ab mai bechaara yaha zameen pe so raha hu... toh usme bhi problem hai...!! (He said making a puppy face...)

Navya: Cabir...!! Ek bohot achhi jagah hai tumhare sone ke liye...!! Aur tumhe suit bhi bohot karegi...!! (Navya said with the most innocent face... Cabir looked at her... still lying on the floor...!! Then navya continued... ) FOOTPATH...!! (She said changing her tone to sarcasm...)

Listening this cabir glared at her... and then...

Cabir: Haan... tumhe toh pata hi hoga .. vo jagah kaisi hai...!! As u have the experience...!! Nai...?? ( he said... in sarcasm...)

And with this navya turned red in anger... as she has no answer... so she just picked up a cushion from the couch and hit cabir with it...!! But cabir caught it... and kept it under his head and said...

Cabir: thaki nai kya... abhi tak...?? Aur nai thaki ho toh... go eat someone else's head...!! And let me sleep in peace...!!

With this cabir... just comforted himself more there on the floor... and smirked seeing navya frowning...!!

Navya was about to say something...!! But then Mukti... got Pissed seeing them... fighting and said...

Mukti: enough both of u now...!! Bilkul chup...!!

And that was it... both of them... stopped their... fight there and then...

Mukti: Where is manik...??

Abhi: he is out...!! Talking to his dad...!!

Mukti: uncle se... abhi...?? Is he ok...??

Abhi: haan uncle is fine...!! It's just... manik has not talked to him... since long... so is now talking...!!

Listening this Mukti made an ohh... face...

All were sitting on the couch... only cabir was on the floor ...!! Girls were waiting for manik to return...!!

Then finally manik came... and girls just stood up... again that grin spread on their faces...!! To which manik frowned on not understanding why we're they smiling... he looked towards the boys... and asked what happened to which they shrugged their shoulders...!!

Manik: kya hua ...?? Aur cabir tu zameen pe kyu so raha hai...??

Cabir: ( dramatically) ye zaalim ladkiya ... mujh jaise shareef Insaan ki sharafat ka fayada utha rai hai...!!

Mukti: Chup... kar... dramebaaz...!! And manik u listen to us... we have a very important thing to tell u...!!

Manik: achha... even we have to tell u gilrs something...!!

Alya: Nai manik... first listen to us...!! So the news is...

Before alya could continue ... cabir interrupted...

Cabir: Nai pehle hamari baat...!! So... it's...

Mukti: Aree... Teri Baatein hamesha faaltu hoti hai... we have something really really good news...!! Haan so manik...

Cabir: what do you mean by meri news hamesha faaltu hoti hai...!! Abhi sunegi naa... toh tujhe teri news faaltu lagegi...!!

Mukti: shut up cabir... pehle hum... batayenge...!!

Cabir: nai hum...!!

And this continued... between them... they kept fighting with each other...!! And others were irritated seeing them fighting like this ... but then thought to sort this out first... so they tried calming them down... but no use... and finally they both said it together...

Mukti: NANDINI IS READY TO GIVE MANIK A CHANCE...!!

Cabir: IT'S NANDINI'S BIRTHDAY... IN 15 DAYS...!! MANIK HAS MADE A PLAN...!!

They both blurted simultaneously... and then there was a pin drop silence... as girls were thinking of birthday... and boys were surprised... with this news... given by the girls...!!

And manik... he was just... numb... listening to Mukti...!! Only her words were roaming in his mind...!! He then looked at Mukti to be assured that... what she said is.. it true..!! To which Mukti just came forward and hugged him tight... and said... still being in the hug...!!

Mukti: HAAN... MANIK... NANDINI... UR NANDINI IS.. READY TO GIVE U A CHANCE...!! GIVE UR RELATIONSHIP A CHANCE...!! SHE IS READY...!! AND U KNOW WHAT SHE SAID...!! SHE SAID... HE DESERVES A CHANCE...!!

Manik couldn't say anything out of happiness... so he just hugged Mukti back... really tight...!! And a lone tear escaped from his eyes...!!

Seeing this... even alya... dhruv and cabir... joined them in the hug...!! All had tears in their eyes...!!

Navya and abhi were standing there and admiring... them... their friendship...!!

Then they broke the hug... and manik asked Mukti to tell him each and everything in detail...!! To which Mukti narrated everything...!! How they... saw her lost in his thoughts... and then how navya explained her... and how the conversation continued... and then hw she said... she is ready...!!

Manik looked at navya... and thanked her... as she was the one who took the initiative... to talk to nandini about him...!!
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Finally after discussing everything... manik had a smile on his face... all the time... and all were happy seeing him happy... everyone was sitting on the sofa... only... cabir and manik were sitting on the floor...!! then the girls... asked...

Alya: Guys...!! Cabir said it's nandini's ...!! And u all planned without us...!!

Cabir: Haan... u see... planning requires brain... which u don't have... so... Hume hi karni padhegi ... naa planning...!!

And as he said this he received a smack on his head... from alya.. as she was sitting... just near him on the sofa...!!

Abhi: Achha... now please don't start it again..!! So... we planned... without u all...because u all were upstairs...!! With nanidni...!!

(Yes... while the girls went upstairs... boys already discussed for the plan..!! )

And then boys disclosed the whole plan to them...!! (heheh... u all will get to know... as the plan proceeds...!! Sorry for keeping it a suspense...!!) As the boys finished telling them...

Alya: This is going to be awesome...! She will be so happy...!! Uski birthday outfit mai design karungi...!! Even uski hi kyu... tum sab ki bhi mai hi finalise karungi...!!

Navya: aur decorations... hum dekh lenge...!!

Cabir: I will help her... with decorations...!! As u know... miss navya naveli... apne Patna style ka decoration naa karde...!! Aur food arrangements bhi mai karunga...!!as no one knows food better then me...!! Ha ha ha...!!

Navya: Oh hello... agar tum bhul gaye ho toh... hum bata du... ki hum ek event manager hai...!! Huh...!!

And cabir... mimicked like her...!! Which made everyone laugh... and navya to huff in irritation...!!

Abhi: Mukti aur mai... travel arrangements dekh lenge then...!!

Dhruv: then... ab mai kya karunga...??

And as he said this... something clicked in manik's mind...!!

Manik: alya...!! U help alya... with the outfits...!!

Dhruv looked at alya... and then looked away... and said...

Dhruv: Aree but... what will I do in the outfits thing...!!

Manik: aree kyu...!! She will not only design for nandini... but for boys also naa...!! So u help her with our outfits... how will she manage alone...!!

Dhruv having no other option... agreed to him... and alya... didn't said anything...!! She just tried avoiding the talk...!!

Manik smirked in his mind... that now they have to stay together...!! And then he realised something and said..

Manik: aree par tum logo ne saara kaam le liya... now what will I do..??

Abhi: stay with nandini...!! That's all u need to do...!!

Navya: Haan manik...!! Ab jab nanidni ne ek mauka diya hai... toh tum sirf us par dhyaan do...!! Baaki sab hum par chod do...!!

Manik just smiled... and thought in his mind... 'Nandini ... I promise... this birthday... u will get ur life back...!! ' as he thought of nandini... he asked...

Manik: nandini hai kaha...??

Navya: vo freshen up hone gayi thi... par ab tak toh aa jaana chahiye tha...!!

Abhi: mai dekh kar aata hu...!!

With this abhi went and then cabir said...

Cabir: humne dinner toh khaya hi nai ...!! Wahi mai sochu... mujhe itni der se Bhuk kyu lag rai hai...!! Dekho mai kitna kamzor ho gya hu...!!

Navya: Bola Bhukard...!!

Dhruv: Bhukard... ki Bhuk Ka asar Seedhe dimag par hota hai...!! Mai toh bhul hi gayi thi...!! Tabhi tu pagal ho gaya hai...!!

On this cabir gapped at dhruv... as it's a rare thing when dhruv mocks ..!! And then Mukti said...

Mukti: par on a serious note Bhuk toh mujhe bhi lag rai hai...!!

Navya: main kitchen mai dekhi hu... kuch ho toh...!

And then Navya went to kitchen...!! She looked around and then came back with something in her hands... and showed them all...!!

All of them together: MAGGI...!!

Navya: Haan... ye Mil gyi Hume... aur jaldi bhi ban jayegi... toh bolo khaoge...!!

All of them agreed instantly... and then Navya went back to kitchen... even alya went with her to help her...!!
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In nandini's room -

As nandini entered her room... she moved to bathroom... to freshen up...!! After sometime she came out... and then moved near her bed..!! And picked up her fireflies...!!

Nandini : I don't know whether I am doing right or wrong...!! ( fireflies glowed brighter...) but they all have done a lot for me...!! So I can do this much for them...!!

( she was confused... but somewhere she had hope that... this time everything is going to be ok...!! )

She didn't knew for how long she kept holding that... jar... and got busy in her thoughts...!! She thought of the evening talk with the gilrs...!!

She was busy in her thoughts...!! When she heard a knock...!! And then the door openned... and she found abhi...!!

Abhi: nandini... yaha kya kar rai ho...!! Hum sab kab se tumhara wait kar rae hai..!! Come...

Nandini: Haan mai bas aa hi rai thi...!!

She said keeping the jar back on the side table of the bed...!! She was still lost...!! But then got up and was moving out of the room.. but then abhi stopped her by coming in her way...!!

Nandini looked at him... and asked...

Nandini: kya hua abhi...??

Abhi: wahi toh mai puch raha hu kya hua hai...!! Why are u so lost...?

Nandini didn't said anything...!! But looked here and there...

Abhi held her hand... and took her to bed ... and made her sit there...!! And he himself sat on the floor...

Abhi: ab bolo... kya hua...??

Nandini: kuch nai hua hai abhi...!!

Abhi: oh come on nandini...!! U were sitting there with ur fireflies... lost in ur thoughts...!! And saying nothing happened...!!

Nandini still didn't said anything... as she didn't wanted anyone to know about her confusion...!! As she knew they will feel bad...!!

But abhi somewhere understood so he asked...!!

Abhi: nandini...!! Is it related to ur decision... on giving manik and ur relation a chance...!!

Nandini looked at him...!! Instantly...!!

Abhi: So... I am right...!! (Abhi sighed... and pressed her hands in his hands... and said...) NANDINI...!! I KNOW AB TUM SOCH RAI HOGI..!! KI EVEN I WILL START EXPLAINING U EVERYTHING...!! AND TAKE MANIK'S SIDE...!! AND SAY THAT U SHOULD TRUST HIM...!! AND ALL...!! BUT ALL I WANT SAY IS...!! DON'T THINK MUCH... AND JUST GO WITH THE FLOW...!! DON'T LET UR INSECURITIES... COME IN BETWEEN...!! FEEL THE HAPPINESS WHICH IS COMING IN UR WAY...!! DON'T FEAR THEM...!! IF THAT HAPPINESS IS FOR U... THEN NO ONE CAN TAKE IT AWAY FROM U...!! BUT IF U WILL FEAR FROM IT AND RUN AWAY THEN... U MIGHT LOOSE IT..!!!! SO JUST GO WITH THE FLOW...!!

Nandini listened to his each and every word...!! And even understood what he wants to say...!! She smiled at him and said...

Nandini: THANK YOU ABHI...!! THANK YOU FOR CLEARING MY CONFUSION...!!

Abhi patted her cheek... and said...

Abhi: UR ALWAYS WELCOME...!! CHAL AB... LET'S GO...!! ALL ARE WAITING...!! AUR TUMNE DINNER BHI NAI KIYA HAI LET'S SEE... KYA BANA HAI DINNER MAI...!!

With this they both moved down...!!

Living room 10.30 pm-

As they reached down... they were welcomed by... mouth watering aroma of Maggi...!! Abhi and nandini looked at each other... and then...

Abhi: Maggi...!! ( he said.. lost in the aroma...)

Nandini smiled at him...!! And they picked up their speed and went near all of them...!!

As they reached there they saw...!! Bowls kept on the table...!!



They saw all of them staring at it... with greedy eyes... and then abhi asked...

Abhi: Tum sab ese ghoor kyu rae ho...!! Maggi ko...!!

Cabir: oh... finally u both are here...!! Tumhare chakkar mai... iss... navya aur manik ne Hume khane hi nai diya...!! Finally mai kha sakta hu...!! Haa...!!

With this he picked up... a bowl... and even Mukti pounced on the the other... and with this everyone picked up... one one bowl... and started having it...!! And as they took the bite... all felt a peace... and this time... for the first time... nandini praised the taste... of food...!!

Nandini: Awesome... this is so tasty...!!

And then continued eating... while listening to her... others stopped eating... and were shocked... seeing her reacting to the taste of the food...!! As for the first time in these 3 years... she reacted like this...!!

Nandini who was busy in eating noticed all of them... looking at her...!!

Nandini : What happened guys...?? Tum sab mujhe ese kyu dekh rae ho...??

And this question broke their trance... and they nodded their heads in no...!! Telling her that nothing happened...!! So nandini continued eating...!! Just like a kid...!! And everyone smiled... at her behaviour...!

Soon they finished their late night maggi... with lots of fun... like cabir eating from Mukti's bowl... Mukti hitting him...!!
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At 11 pm-

All left from nandini's place leaving manik and her alone...!! Nandini... also moved to her room...!! And manik... starred at her...!!

As she went... manik went to the kitchen... and bought something... with him... and entered her room...!!

As he entered he didn't found nandini anywhere... so he guessed that she must be in the washroom...!! So he kept the thing... on the bed... and waited for her to come out...!! He started looking around... and then he picked up the fireflies...

Manik: Do... u know...?? She agreed to give me a chance...!! I am so happy...!!

He noticed the extra glow of fireflies...!! And then he heard the click of the door...!! So he stood up...!! Still having the jar in his hand...!!

As Nandini noticed the jar... she moved near him to take it from him...!! And then as she took it from him... she was about to keep it back... but then suddenly the jar slipped... and was about out to fall... but...
But...
As always... manik caught it... before it could hit the ground...!! And stood up... to give it back to her...!! She was long about at him... and as he caught the jar... she remembered the past...!!

Manik then gave her the jar back.. and as she held it... the fireflies... glowed... glowed more...!!

Manik smiled... as he took the response of fireflies as a positive sign... that now he will surely get his nandini back...!!
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Nandini also noticed the glow of fireflies...!! She also somewhere in heart felt happy... as she also thought now everything is going to be fine...!!

She then kept the jar back... on the table... and then she turned to lie down on the bed...!! But noticed the thing manik bought...!! She then looked at manik questioningly...!!

Manik: Vo I thought u might like to have ice cream...!! So just bought it... but it's OK... if u don't want...!!

(Yes manik had bought ice cream for her...!! )

As manik was about to take it back... nandini said...

Nandini: mujhe khaani hai ...!! Give it to me...!!

Manik smiled seeing her accepting something bought by him...!!

With this they both sat on the bed and started having ice cream...!! Nandini ate just like old times... with her finger...!! Manik noticed this .. but didn't said anything... as he thought if he will say anything then... she might stop eating like this...!!

Manik kept admiring her... while having his ice cream...!! As they finished their ice cream... manik noticed...!! Ice cream... on her chin..!!

He chuckled looking at her... as she was looking cute ...!! Just like a kid...!! Nandini looked at him in confusion thinking what is he laughing at...!!

She asked him... what happened to which he didn't said anything and bought her in front of the mirror... then she also smiled... looking at herself...!! Manik then turned her to face him... and he removed the ice cream from her chin with his finger...!! And nandini kept starring at him...!!

Both were looking at each other...!! Then manik said...

Manik: THANK YOU NANDINI...!! FOR GIVING ME A CHANCE...!! THIS TIME I WON'T LET U DOWN...!! I WILL WIN UR LOVE BACK...!! I WILL NOT LET ANY HARM COME NEAR U...!! FROM NOW ONLY HAPPINESS...!!

With this he kissed her forehead... and asked her to sleep... as now it was late...!! She felt good as he kissed... and how he cared...!!

He made her lie down...covered her with the blanket... and was about to leave...!! But nandini held his hand... to which he looked at her...!!

Nandini: STAY HERE...!!

Nandini said looking at him...!! And he felt happy... his happiness increased... with her this demand... he sat beside her... with his legs in front... and head in the headboard...!! He then just patted her head to make her sleep...!! And she slept... finally...!!

With this... the happy day came to an end...!! So that a new day... with more happiness can welcome them...!! Manik also slept in the same position...!!

The day had started with manik and nandini in each others arms... and it ended in the same way...!!
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Precap: Birthday preparations...!! Someone following...!!

Finally I managed this part...!! With 3300 words...!! Again happy chapter...!! What is the birthday plan...?? How will nandini react...?? Precap...! Now who is the person following...!! Keep thinking...!!

NOTE : FIRST OF ALL LET ME KNOW HOW WAS THE UPDATE... AS IT TOOK ME REALLY LONG TO WRITE THIS...!!

SECOND... MY PRACTICALS ARE GOING ON RIGHT NOW...!!AND MAINS WILL BE STARTING SOON...!! SO DO U ALL WANT ME TO PUT THE STORY ON HOLD...!! OR CONTINUE GIVING U UPDATES.. LIKE THIS...!!

IF I WILL PUT IT ON HOLD... THEN I WILL CONTINUE FROM... 6 JULY...!!

LET ME KNOW WHAT U ALL WANT...!!




AMAAYA...!!






Edited by AMAAYA - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Thanks for updating
It was awesome
Enjoyed reading it
Glad abhi also could clear by of nandus confusion
N loved everybody's reaction on knowing nandus decision
N Maggie eating scene was too cute
And also like the lst manan bedroom scene
Waiting for next already
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
Awesome
Finally a hope to see them together again
Don't put on hold
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly

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Posted: 9 years ago
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No don't put on hold continue like dis...love ur story its awesum continue soon...the way everything is falling back in place its woww step by step ...waise bhi manan r the best
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Plz don't put on hold this story plzzz I love this story try if possible to continue with small updates.
Coming to update it was really awesome.
Finally new beginning in Manan life .
Nandini is reacting to Maniks presence n and also to food n taste that was good.
Hope happy day keep continuing in their life now.
Continue soon

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